for We good?4/3/2020 c1 Guest
Can we get more of this story perhaps?! Please!
Can we get more of this story perhaps?! Please!
5/5/2018 c1 
1TheLastoftheRealOnes
You've got a good plot, good emotion, and good grammar. That's rare on this website. Keep it up!
1TheLastoftheRealOnesYou've got a good plot, good emotion, and good grammar. That's rare on this website. Keep it up!
12/28/2017 c1 Guest
Nice
Nice
3/14/2017 c5 3Aleiksa
Really, really sorry this is taking so long.
I'm currently grounded from technology due to some sh*tty grades. However, I think I know where my mother has hidden my tablet.
So stay with me folks,
I'll be back.
3AleiksaReally, really sorry this is taking so long.
I'm currently grounded from technology due to some sh*tty grades. However, I think I know where my mother has hidden my tablet.
So stay with me folks,
I'll be back.
3/9/2017 c5 9Shades of X
Gah! Tell us what happens next, dammit! You can't leave us with something like this! I gotta now what happens!
9Shades of XGah! Tell us what happens next, dammit! You can't leave us with something like this! I gotta now what happens!
3/1/2017 c4 Jesuslovesmarina
THIS IS SO NEEDED, lol. I've always wanted to see a story that pointed out that Ethan could not just come back from the dead and crash and be good to go! ;P and you write all four of the fellas quite well, just sayin' :D Can't wait to find out what happens next!
THIS IS SO NEEDED, lol. I've always wanted to see a story that pointed out that Ethan could not just come back from the dead and crash and be good to go! ;P and you write all four of the fellas quite well, just sayin' :D Can't wait to find out what happens next!
2/26/2017 c4 9Shades of X
I definitely like this! Just one small thing: the name is Ilsa, not Isla...
9Shades of XI definitely like this! Just one small thing: the name is Ilsa, not Isla...