5/6/2023 c37 Guest
I never get notified of your updates anymore! If have to periodically check on this story. I’m still reading and I love it. I hope Hisana gets healthy enough to enjoy herself.

2/26/2022 c35 iisabatse
My favourite story on this app, thank you so much for your hard work and sharing your talent with us.️

It’s actually heartbreaking to the see the deterioration in Hisana’a health. Although we all know how their story ‘ended’ - I put this in talking marks because even though she isn no longer alive, I truly don’t believe their story has ended. Their love is too strong that it transcends even after her death for me.

I admire how you don’t shy away from actually writing and depicting about Hisana’a insecurities, it’s what I believe puts your work above many others — it is very raw and realistic.

Though Byakuya is always calm and composed, I’m sure seeing the deterioration of Hisana’a health is in its own way, doing the same to him. Whilst Hisana’s physical health is chipping away at the same time I believe the ska did Gallen it Byakuya in his heart, I’m not sure what the right words are — his emotional mentality? Although his facade is like a fortress and strong for the sake of everyone, his internal war and conflict is probably stronger and more agonising than anyone else’s.
As my heart hurts for Hisana reading this in her POV, it breaks for Byakuya whenever I see him being her rock Your writing captures these emotions and moments with such intimacy I feel suffocated (in a good way!) when reading through your chapters.

Byakuya is no a man of many words, but every time he speaks his words hold so much weight. A simple “Come here” is so firm and powerful, this holds in their everyday lives and smut moments.

Reading through this part it really enforces what we all knew — Byakuya is the type of man who puts his partner’s pleasure before himself, but I also think he gets off from seeing Hisana’s pleasure.
Hisana’s guilt and want to please him is so endearing, I really feel for her when she wants to reciprocate the love he gives to her and it hurts to see her think that he gives more to her than her to him.

I think that’s one of the things in this relationship that makes readers feel for Byakuya and Hisana. Hisana doesn’t think she can ever repay the love Byakuya has given her, but in reality she has given Byakuya everything and more to him. It’s heart wrenching but also gives room for amazing writing and headcanons. I think whilst Hisana is wrapped up with that idea in her head, the simplest gestures, flusters and words mean the world to Byakuya and it endears him, I hope one day Hisana sees that or did see that.

That last sequence of the chapter was so great. As I read every line I could literally feel my heart drop. By now it really is a matter of time until she fades away, which is so heartbreaking. Byakuya has been in the position unbeknownst to his wife as she sleeps where the shock of a scare/relapse or when he really takes in the change and affects of her physical health, I cannot even imagine the thoughts and panic running through his head.

I would like to point out how much I loved this section right here!:
“A full minute ticked by, and he easily unravelled the limp arms of his supine lover from around his neck. He observed her for a fraction more, his long-fingered hand encircling her bony right wrist in a careful, gossamer-light grasp. Her delicate pulse strummed sporadically against his palm, almost like the flutter of a butterfly's wings, and in a single fluid motion, he slid the sleeve of her hadajuban up her skinny arm.

The temperature in the room plunged.

There was no expression whatsoever on Byakuya's face. He was eerily motionless for several milliseconds before his hand went to the cord tying her robe at her waist, which he undid effortlessly with a practised tug of his fingertips. The cotton fell apart, revealing the petite curves of his wife's nude body.

His grey eyes grew cold.

Streams of moonlight shone uninhibitedly on Hisana's bare flesh, illuminating the pretty rosy-pink of her nipples against the white of her complexion, along with a shocking dark violet splattered in blots across her baby-soft skin.

For a moment, Byakuya did not move.”

I always wonder how things we do not visually see make us feel even me strongly than things animated infront of us. Applause to you for encapsulating the atmosphere of such a moment so strongly, my felt my heart drop reading through this!

It’s always a great addition whenever you ad right perspective of characters close to them and see their view on Hisana, Byakuya or their relationship. We know how strongly they feel for each other, but seeing others wonder and voice what they see is always great.

As I read (or reread haha) through this story it gets darker and more compelling as we go on. I wonder and would like to see how you write more sweeter and slice of life moments for these two ️ We saw these moments earlier on such as the akari voyeurism and when she gave him an cheek kiss infront of everyone, those chapters were always a great treat to see as a interlude between the heart wrenching chapters. These two deserve some happiness amongst the heartbreak, I wish we got more information between them. I wonder if you have any of these planned in the future, I think it would be great if you do

I wanted to drop comments on your AO3 account too but I realised it isn’t up to date with yet! I’ll be sure to drop some there too to show my support️

Once again, thank you for sharing your talent and love for Byakuya and Hisana with us. Rereading this and your reincarnation story brings me so much happiness.

Until next time,
Q️

1/21/2022 c34 Guest
En la ducha! Por un momento pensé que ella está enferma pero se desmayaba porque ella y Byakuya estaban "haciendo el delicioso"
Que hermoso es leer este capítulo, gracias. Espero leerte pronto, hasta la próxima.

12/17/2021 c33 Selenese
Would also like to see more of the reincarnation au. Maybe with a time skip/ age up?

10/26/2021 c33 Zu
es maravilloso verte actualizar este fic. Espero seguir leyendote

10/25/2021 c33 Guest
OH MY GOD THIS KITTEN AU IS AMAZING I ALMOST WANT HER TO BECOME A NEKO NEXT SO SHES HUMAN WITH CAT EARS AND A TAIL AND BYAKUYAS LIKE HMMM INTERESTING (CAUSE WE KNOW THIS MANS A SECRET PERV)

10/20/2021 c32 SpicyMince96
OMFG OKAY HERE WE GOOOOOOOO
Okay verse is half canon? And its called Kitten? Okay... LOL has she been accosted by a kitten?
She still feels like a fraud ;.; I mean... i'd probably feel the same way tbh
Oh its not a cat
its a shinigami... who everyone else is terrified of
oh dear
LOL Byakuya just keeps giving her money... through Akari like; NO YOU WILL LEAVE WITH MONEY, I DEMAND IT
OH MY GOD THE CAT HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BECAUSE OF YORUICHI I FUCKING CANT IM DYING HAHAHAHAHHAHAAHHAAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA
PLEASE BUY THE CAT ONE AND GIVE IT TO HIM
PLEASE
HISANA YOU'LL BE MY NEW FAV CHARACTER
Ohhhhh she thinks there was something more there? I mean... fair... he was a teenage boy and Yoruichi is A-T-T-R-A-C-T-I-V-E
Oh my god shes getting the cat one
Awwww she's eating it, thats a shame, I thought she'd give it to Byakuya and I'd get to witness him having an emotional breakdown HAHAHAAHAHA
oh
OH MY GOD
IT WAS NEMU
OMFG
IT-SHE-OMFG
SHES A TEST SUBJECT
OH NO
OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
BUT OH YES
OH MY GOD HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I can't wait to see how this plays out!