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4/30/2020 c16 Samuel Santillan
esto me gusta quiero saber mas de esta historia y saber como reaccionara a lo que sucedese juntaran naruto y yang, o talvez blake tendra suerte, aparecera naruto Y cuando despertara el nauto que esta en la habitacion y como sera su personalidad, ruby alfin se dara cuenta que le gustan lo niños tantas preguntas inconclusas, quuero mas capitulo de esta gran historia.
3/21/2020 c16 4Monster King
Great job please continue it soon
8/9/2019 c16 dragzxx
Ow I wished this story continued because everyone’s reactions to later chapters would be amazing.
3/1/2019 c16 LordLucifer666
Please let there be more
12/31/2018 c15 Kenny9x3
...What the fuck is going on? Is Naruto a real person or is he just a character in a book RWBY is reading?
8/9/2018 c16 XXX777
Please update soon. This fic is a work of art.
1/24/2018 c16 Cf96
Nice
1/25/2018 c16 lou2003us
I really really really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
1/25/2018 c16 1WookieMan
Boi, grill, whatever you may be, worry about yourself before you worry about us. It doesn't matter how much we love or hate your stories if you can't write them, whether it's because you lost the will to do so, or because a family member passed on and such things. You're more important than just about any message we may write saying how much we will murder you if you don't update, so just ignore everything and take a break if you feel like you need to. I've seen plenty of authors lose that spark for writing because of over using it to burn the fires of inspiration till there's nothing left, no spark, no fuel to burn, nothing. So just do yourself and us a favour and take a break if you deem it to be and enough it's necessary. Spend that time rekindling the flame of creativity and gathering fuel of inspiration rather than burning it all at once, not even leaving an ember left to restart the fires of your mind.
1/24/2018 c16 1Narutofan8762
This is a good chapter and I'm glad you updated this story.

It's sad that you lost your spark for your other stories but it happens to many authors. I always feel let down when an author stops working on a story. But I get upset when stops working on one story and start a new story. A perfect example is fairy tail dragon slayer. He works on 3-5 stories at a time, which is fine, but he will start a new story and one of the other stories will be left behind. When an author stops working on a story, I compare it to a rainy day. It sucks, but the only thing I can do is wait for the sun to return.

For the chapter itself, you brought up an interesting point about their clothes. Ironically, Jaune has the best combat outfit because of the armor covering his chest. The others seem to be wearing casual clothes that isn't fit for fighting Grimm head on. Even Winter, who is in the military, wears something that belongs in an office. The only way to justify their outfits is if they were made out of some "hunter fabric" that was much stronger than normal fabric. Even then, it would only justify Ren and Ruby.
1/24/2018 c16 3Raidentensho
not bad. though i am expecting nora at some point do "diggy diggy hole"(epic, silly, yet good) likely at the mine chapters. looking forward to more. loving the reactions. no doubt this will be epic. until then, later!
1/24/2018 c16 bladetri
like XD
1/24/2018 c16 Goldspark1
Thanks for the chapter. Too bad about you losing your spark for your own stories. I really wanted to know how Chief is going to escape from Kohona prison. Will it be through his own ability? Will someone else break him out? Or will he rot?

Back to this story, really like how you had Blake like the taste of Naruto's blood. They say the wild is calm, I say the opposite. The wild is chaotic. Its nice to see Faunus in action.

Didn't like how you had Weiss be both flattered by the compliments Naruto made about her and a few paragraphs later, said she is indifferent to him on a whole. She can be proud of how she is viewed yet flattered sounds a little to close to romance/friendship.

Really like how you had Jaune act in the chapter. He knew from the glowing shield that Phyrra helped him fight off his biggest fight. He actually used his brain instead of his abilities. Yet you still had him act like a guy when he tried to stretch the truth to be more impressive to the ladies. Even the part when he was intreppeted by Yang, it perfectaly summarized my thoughts about him. Yeah I feel bad for Jaune yet, I want to get back to the story with Naruto's harem.

Like the ending with Jaune and Ren both pointing out the flaws in the woman's combat outfits. Why is it that girls are showing off so much skin when its a clear danger on the battlefield? Like the references the The Incredibles. Don't know how to feel about the sequel.
1/24/2018 c16 1insanemaelstorm
Ahh poor blake. Naruto is indeed lucky. I hope you regain your motivation. Looking forward to reading more
1/24/2018 c16 2Kilo8
Good chapter, can wait for the next one.
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