for Gilderoy Lockhart and the Forgettable Flower5/5/2017 c15 efdsdfsa
This was such a cute story! I was wondering about half way through if you were going to run out of different names for Dahlia! But I liked your portray of Gilderoy, he wasn't a complete ass. As my family says only half an was since he didn't really mean it. In about to start Trial of Tribulations! Keep up your amazing work!
This was such a cute story! I was wondering about half way through if you were going to run out of different names for Dahlia! But I liked your portray of Gilderoy, he wasn't a complete ass. As my family says only half an was since he didn't really mean it. In about to start Trial of Tribulations! Keep up your amazing work!
3/15/2017 c1 
3kaylaj42
I have to say again how much I love the use of description in this story! It was very interesting to see the romantic side of Gilderoy, even though he kept getting Dahlia's name wrong, which I thought was hilarious throughout the story. The scene where Snape says "Lily" made me tear up! Loved this story, and will make my way through your other works!
3kaylaj42I have to say again how much I love the use of description in this story! It was very interesting to see the romantic side of Gilderoy, even though he kept getting Dahlia's name wrong, which I thought was hilarious throughout the story. The scene where Snape says "Lily" made me tear up! Loved this story, and will make my way through your other works!
2/24/2017 c15 Guest
Omg I love the last chapter! I'm so glad that it ended well between them! (:
Omg I love the last chapter! I'm so glad that it ended well between them! (:
2/22/2017 c14 Valerie E. Mackin
Dude needs some serious therapy, all I'm sayin'. I mean, Sev, seriously, dude, almost nobody comes back from that kind of slip up.
Dude needs some serious therapy, all I'm sayin'. I mean, Sev, seriously, dude, almost nobody comes back from that kind of slip up.
2/22/2017 c13 Valerie E. Mackin
Oy, this was my least favkrite part of the book becuase school systems and governing boards and stupid, stupid people.
Oy, this was my least favkrite part of the book becuase school systems and governing boards and stupid, stupid people.
2/21/2017 c13 Guest
Absolutely AWESOME! You are such a great writer. I love how you put in events that actually happened in the books! Standing Ovation!
Absolutely AWESOME! You are such a great writer. I love how you put in events that actually happened in the books! Standing Ovation!
2/13/2017 c12 Beagle Brother
So, I don't know if I've ever reviewed a singular Harry Potter story, but here I am:
This story is really good! I can actually picture the things happening as I read them, which is something that I truly look for in all of the stories that I read. Should I just stop reading now and call the television studios and tell them to let you write a Harry Potter television series? :)
Keep it up,
Beagle Brother
So, I don't know if I've ever reviewed a singular Harry Potter story, but here I am:
This story is really good! I can actually picture the things happening as I read them, which is something that I truly look for in all of the stories that I read. Should I just stop reading now and call the television studios and tell them to let you write a Harry Potter television series? :)
Keep it up,
Beagle Brother
2/10/2017 c12 Guest
Omg I love it update soon
Omg I love it update soon
2/9/2017 c10 Guest
I just love your writing! This chapter was so good!
I just love your writing! This chapter was so good!
2/8/2017 c10 Valerie E. Mackin
I just really am starting to ship Dahlia and Snape. Even if Lockhart is not so bad in the quiet moments, he's not hesitant to be a dick in front of everyone else. Yeesh. I do like Clover as a name, though.
I just really am starting to ship Dahlia and Snape. Even if Lockhart is not so bad in the quiet moments, he's not hesitant to be a dick in front of everyone else. Yeesh. I do like Clover as a name, though.