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2/6/2017 c1 5Orangebird124
Holy jumping mackerel! This was the best romantic, alternate universe of Joy/Finley I've ever read in my life! You handled Finley's point of view perfectly and this one-shot was seriously well-written! I thought it was heartwarming when Joy wanted to give up on that ride for Finley and they shared their first kiss! Oh, God! So romantic! And Debbie was really funny at the end. I'll have to read it again some time and I'm definitely favoriting this story!
2/5/2017 c1 2LilacPetals21
I loved it! I'm proud of how this story turned out, it was brilliant! Keep going Holly, you're doing great! :)
2/4/2017 c1 1Tripledent
Hey you did a great job with the first person writing stuff. Feels bad being left out, it was touching Joy went to be with him and that was the moment the pair got together.
2/3/2017 c1 CNBW
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE MY KAWAII SHIP IS BACKKKKK! XD
This was pretty cute and I thought it was funny how Joy saw literally right through him. XD
2/3/2017 c1 8WriterofBliss
Fantastic! Phenomenal! Amazing! Stupendous! Great! Extravagant! I love it!

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