for The Overlord Origins4/21/2017 c21 GLACIER3
NUUUUUU
don't think I abandoned u
L UV UR STOWY
Yeaah and lol Ana she's so funny XD
Yeah UNPDATE SOOOOOON
BAI
NUUUUUU
don't think I abandoned u
L UV UR STOWY
Yeaah and lol Ana she's so funny XD
Yeah UNPDATE SOOOOOON
BAI
4/18/2017 c21 
18Alexandria Prime
Does Zane have a Reboot switch? Because he needs one! I really like that Nindroid! Bring him back! PLEASE!
18Alexandria PrimeDoes Zane have a Reboot switch? Because he needs one! I really like that Nindroid! Bring him back! PLEASE!
4/18/2017 c21 20BraveSeeker3
I really want Zane to go back to normal! Until then, I don't quite care what happens to him - unless he dies again. . . *picks up sledgehammer and swings a few times*
Looks like Lloyd's found a new ally! That's good. Poor guy just wants to get out of there.
Lovin' this,
~S3
20BraveSeeker3I really want Zane to go back to normal! Until then, I don't quite care what happens to him - unless he dies again. . . *picks up sledgehammer and swings a few times*
Looks like Lloyd's found a new ally! That's good. Poor guy just wants to get out of there.
Lovin' this,
~S3
4/18/2017 c20 GLACIER3
Ugh. sorry to hav reviewed 3 times I thought I forgot to do it XD
Ugh. sorry to hav reviewed 3 times I thought I forgot to do it XD
4/18/2017 c20 GLACIER3
SOWY FOR NOT REVIEWING FAST ;-;
WATEVAH
LUVD DA CHAPTAH
AH MAH GAWSH LLOYDY IS GANNA DIE
wow errors everywhere XD
SOWY FOR NOT REVIEWING FAST ;-;
WATEVAH
LUVD DA CHAPTAH
AH MAH GAWSH LLOYDY IS GANNA DIE
wow errors everywhere XD
4/18/2017 c21 11Loki God of Evil
Ooh Ashlynn, you would certainly need destroyed if you used your powers of telepathy on me. 3000 years of evil in this head of mine.
Enjoyed the bickering between youngsters, always good to see.
11Loki God of EvilOoh Ashlynn, you would certainly need destroyed if you used your powers of telepathy on me. 3000 years of evil in this head of mine.
Enjoyed the bickering between youngsters, always good to see.
4/18/2017 c21 4Rosalinawysteria92
Ess is such a jerk... you wrote him perfectly!
Anyways, thanks for reviewing on my story. The reason I was so desperate for reviews was because I need to reach out to my internet friends because I got cyber bullied on DA last week.
From,
Rosalinawysteria92
4Rosalinawysteria92Ess is such a jerk... you wrote him perfectly!
Anyways, thanks for reviewing on my story. The reason I was so desperate for reviews was because I need to reach out to my internet friends because I got cyber bullied on DA last week.
From,
Rosalinawysteria92
4/18/2017 c20 GLACIER3
Sowy if i didn't review fast enough ::_::
(())
Ya luvd da chap AH MAH GAWSH DUDE
Also, a new book will be written by me soon, comes out in the week, maxi Saturday, i think.
SPOILERS
Sowy if i didn't review fast enough ::_::
(())
Ya luvd da chap AH MAH GAWSH DUDE
Also, a new book will be written by me soon, comes out in the week, maxi Saturday, i think.
SPOILERS
4/18/2017 c21 TheAmberShadow
We've already established that Zane is evil and we've gotten it out of our systems. You also did a really good job.
Hey! We're the same age!
Very nice Cyrus! Very nice! And after the Overlord virus fiasco, I can't say I blame him.
We've already established that Zane is evil and we've gotten it out of our systems. You also did a really good job.
Hey! We're the same age!
Very nice Cyrus! Very nice! And after the Overlord virus fiasco, I can't say I blame him.
4/17/2017 c20 Jens
OOOOOHHH and I forgot to say: Happy birthday! (Two weeks late, but still.)
And happy easter! I got a big bunny chocolate :P Still didn't touch it, though. I wonder why XD
OOOOOHHH and I forgot to say: Happy birthday! (Two weeks late, but still.)
And happy easter! I got a big bunny chocolate :P Still didn't touch it, though. I wonder why XD
4/17/2017 c20 Rosalinawysteria92
Me: *realizes you will get tons of reviews because your story is longer and more popular than mine, *
Also me: * realizes I only got one guest review on my last chapter. One review that had nothing to do with the story. Is sad*
Great chapter btw! Cant wait for the next one!
Me: *realizes you will get tons of reviews because your story is longer and more popular than mine, *
Also me: * realizes I only got one guest review on my last chapter. One review that had nothing to do with the story. Is sad*
Great chapter btw! Cant wait for the next one!
4/17/2017 c20 Jens
Lkusk compeqfhuolv jfsqkvdfqkvifskqvkjqdf jvl. Scbksqfjvdfqv n.,sqfvj,jeqfvhjqdfbv,jhfdbvj,hwdfbvhj,dfw vhhwdfvvdj,hb! Sorry, I have no more words.
This chapter was AWESOME! Wow, it's been a while that we hadn't seen the Ninja. Awn. Cole is damn too cute.
Yeah, Zane. SNAP THE HELL OUT OF IT! Doesn't he have ANY feelings left for his family?! Snif. :(
NOOOOOO! Please, do something! Don't let that bas*** drain his powers!
So O'Neil still does have a little influence over the Overlord.
YUS! Power revealed! That's so cool! Way cooler than what I've expected. But if she could make a wish, she could wish that Lloyd gets free or something like that, no? Or would that be too hard to accomplish?
Can't wait for Morro to appear!
Oh cool! That's real great. I hope the endong isn't for soon yet, I'm loving this story!
Lkusk compeqfhuolv jfsqkvdfqkvifskqvkjqdf jvl. Scbksqfjvdfqv n.,sqfvj,jeqfvhjqdfbv,jhfdbvj,hwdfbvhj,dfw vhhwdfvvdj,hb! Sorry, I have no more words.
This chapter was AWESOME! Wow, it's been a while that we hadn't seen the Ninja. Awn. Cole is damn too cute.
Yeah, Zane. SNAP THE HELL OUT OF IT! Doesn't he have ANY feelings left for his family?! Snif. :(
NOOOOOO! Please, do something! Don't let that bas*** drain his powers!
So O'Neil still does have a little influence over the Overlord.
YUS! Power revealed! That's so cool! Way cooler than what I've expected. But if she could make a wish, she could wish that Lloyd gets free or something like that, no? Or would that be too hard to accomplish?
Can't wait for Morro to appear!
Oh cool! That's real great. I hope the endong isn't for soon yet, I'm loving this story!
4/16/2017 c20 20BraveSeeker3
ZANE, YOU ARE IN BIG TROUBLE GET YOUR AFT IN HERE AND WAIT WHILE I SUMMON RATCHET FROM TRANSFORMERS SO HE CAN BRAIN YOU REPEATEDLY WITH WRENCHES - !
Ahem.
Lovin' this,
~S3
20BraveSeeker3ZANE, YOU ARE IN BIG TROUBLE GET YOUR AFT IN HERE AND WAIT WHILE I SUMMON RATCHET FROM TRANSFORMERS SO HE CAN BRAIN YOU REPEATEDLY WITH WRENCHES - !
Ahem.
Lovin' this,
~S3
4/16/2017 c20 TheAmberShadow
Whoopee... I dread to ask what is going to happen.
Good for you Cole! You know, it's too bad Seliel isn't a Canon character.
Oh, hey, I don't know if this was addressed before... but where's Pixal?
Happy Birthday! If you don't mind my asking, how old are you?
Whoopee... I dread to ask what is going to happen.
Good for you Cole! You know, it's too bad Seliel isn't a Canon character.
Oh, hey, I don't know if this was addressed before... but where's Pixal?
Happy Birthday! If you don't mind my asking, how old are you?