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for Chapter Twenty-Three

7/5/2018 c1 Hiiiii
Awesome!
2/20/2017 c1 Lala-rainbowlight
I really like this!
2/6/2017 c1 Guest
This is really good. You should do more.
2/5/2017 c1 11CupcakeGangsta
Hi there!

Good work!
I can definitely tell it's not proof read, but who cares, it was a good fight scene :)

Juliette has sort of a bad mouth in this one though, a little but out of character for her. If you're planning to continue this you might want to consider toning down on *her* choice of wording things. But only hers, since they boys already kind of sound like that in the books ;) but maybe it was just this chapter you wanted to rewrite, what do I know :P

Don't be shy to post more short things like this, there's so little recent fanfics around here! :3

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