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I found this to be an almost perfect re-write of that scene! Well done! "claps" However, you didn't write about Xesh telling Shae his real name, and that kind of upset me. Also, I would have liked to see more, like an aftermath - cause I love aftermaths of things - and I also would have liked to seen more dialogue that we didn't get to see in the comic, you know? Again though, great job!

I found this to be an almost perfect re-write of that scene! Well done! "claps" However, you didn't write about Xesh telling Shae his real name, and that kind of upset me. Also, I would have liked to see more, like an aftermath - cause I love aftermaths of things - and I also would have liked to seen more dialogue that we didn't get to see in the comic, you know? Again though, great job!