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6Meydral Skirata
I found this to be an almost perfect re-write of that scene! Well done! "claps" However, you didn't write about Xesh telling Shae his real name, and that kind of upset me. Also, I would have liked to see more, like an aftermath - cause I love aftermaths of things - and I also would have liked to seen more dialogue that we didn't get to see in the comic, you know? Again though, great job!
6Meydral SkirataI found this to be an almost perfect re-write of that scene! Well done! "claps" However, you didn't write about Xesh telling Shae his real name, and that kind of upset me. Also, I would have liked to see more, like an aftermath - cause I love aftermaths of things - and I also would have liked to seen more dialogue that we didn't get to see in the comic, you know? Again though, great job!