for The Life Of The Pirate King (On Hold)10/29/2022 c1 Guest
Bad start.
Bad start.
10/1/2020 c2 ThePhenoix11
Facedesk* wow really? Dude there were so many better ways to do that. Considering dragons a world criminal you could have had a den den mushi call afterall he's the leader of a world wide rebellion he must not have any women working on wait... Sabus gf is a woman
Facedesk* wow really? Dude there were so many better ways to do that. Considering dragons a world criminal you could have had a den den mushi call afterall he's the leader of a world wide rebellion he must not have any women working on wait... Sabus gf is a woman
6/26/2020 c3 Nami4Life
Makino the pedo ,apart from that it was good and he has possibly the most op fruit ever.
Makino the pedo ,apart from that it was good and he has possibly the most op fruit ever.
5/30/2020 c7 Guest
Crossover
Crossover
12/28/2019 c7 Guest
carry this on
carry this on
11/5/2019 c7 
3dragun95
A simple writer / reader advice to another writer, I am a fan of long chapters I admit it and although I am not going to force anyone to write an 8k chapter if I advise you to have a somewhat longer extension, you have good history but I really hate that the chapters are so short, not by the wait but because it simply knows me little in general, even if it is a work that is complete, my advice is that you try to have a minimum extension of around 3k per chapter, it's just my opinion and you don't have to listen to me but that would be appreciated.
P.S: keep up the good work, you are doing very well at the plot level.
3dragun95A simple writer / reader advice to another writer, I am a fan of long chapters I admit it and although I am not going to force anyone to write an 8k chapter if I advise you to have a somewhat longer extension, you have good history but I really hate that the chapters are so short, not by the wait but because it simply knows me little in general, even if it is a work that is complete, my advice is that you try to have a minimum extension of around 3k per chapter, it's just my opinion and you don't have to listen to me but that would be appreciated.
P.S: keep up the good work, you are doing very well at the plot level.
7/26/2019 c3 sdfsdf
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7/7/2019 c7 darkstel
Better update this story. It's a pity that inspiration doesn't visit you. It is obvious that this story has the potential with such a low volume of written material more than 300Fav!
Better update this story. It's a pity that inspiration doesn't visit you. It is obvious that this story has the potential with such a low volume of written material more than 300Fav!
7/5/2019 c2 Guest
That's more than a bit off character for dragon
That's more than a bit off character for dragon