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6/12/2017 c3 Kyoya hatake
Um, I'm sorry, but the ANs seem as though you don't actually know English. Well, some of the story too, but the AN makes it even more apparent.
6/12/2017 c1 Kyoya hatake
He wouldn't be capable of teleportation in Mundus period. The plane of Oblivion mages traveled through with their spells collapsed/was destroyed during the Oblivion Crisis. Also, old though the fix may or may not be, your apparent inability to utilize punctuation was a tad irksome. I like the story though, and the concept is quite interesting.
6/6/2017 c1 5Infernus est in animo
Good, mostly, job so far on the writing but I'd recommend using more commas and splitting it up slightly.
6/4/2017 c6 Guest
Love this story but please continue
6/1/2017 c6 2ArthurShade
Nice
5/31/2017 c6 Alex2909
deplhine is a pain in the ass
5/30/2017 c6 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing and yea got to love those dragon born powers
5/30/2017 c6 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
5/30/2017 c6 1buterflypuss
good chap
4/24/2017 c5 Alex2909
kinda like how harry is doing in skyrim
4/17/2017 c5 buterflypuss
good chap
4/17/2017 c5 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
4/17/2017 c5 2ArthurShade
Nice
4/13/2017 c4 Umbra.Venator
Good chapter :)
4/6/2017 c4 1stHorseman
Awesome chapter mate hope to see more soon
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