2/9/2018 c1 Guest
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2/8/2017 c1 SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP
Hahaha! For some reason, I found Sasuke quite amusing here. Anyways, thanks for sharing
Hahaha! For some reason, I found Sasuke quite amusing here. Anyways, thanks for sharing
2/6/2017 c1 8Digitize27
Well written, grammar and sentence structure-wise, good grasp of dialogue (it was clear who was speaking). Could use some line-breaks to separate scenes, and the initial exposition seemed a tad rushed, but it's negligible.
Probably won't read any more because I'm not a fan of Sasuke-centric stories, but it's a promising start for a well-written fic.
Well written, grammar and sentence structure-wise, good grasp of dialogue (it was clear who was speaking). Could use some line-breaks to separate scenes, and the initial exposition seemed a tad rushed, but it's negligible.
Probably won't read any more because I'm not a fan of Sasuke-centric stories, but it's a promising start for a well-written fic.