for Home is where the heart is9/30/2019 c6 Rahhpixy
Please keep luffy female. I want to see the reaction when the crew meets in real life.
Please keep luffy female. I want to see the reaction when the crew meets in real life.
4/3/2018 c4 Saffron Gales
I want you to make more then 5 chapter for this book. When are making more for this?
I want you to make more then 5 chapter for this book. When are making more for this?
12/11/2017 c5 Katie Lausie
NOOOOOO! keep it as third person!its so much better! PLEASE! i really liked the third person story better. btw i love how you rite and i think this story is awesome! Keep up the good work! Love You!( as a favorite author ) Bye!
NOOOOOO! keep it as third person!its so much better! PLEASE! i really liked the third person story better. btw i love how you rite and i think this story is awesome! Keep up the good work! Love You!( as a favorite author ) Bye!
6/19/2017 c5 just.rreading
huh. ill wait for you to write it then . i look forward to seeing how you'll improve it
huh. ill wait for you to write it then . i look forward to seeing how you'll improve it
5/20/2017 c4 
5MadelVer
OH MAN! I tottaly hoped that when Luffy was in the game, I kinda hoped that everyone got stuck in the game... And their actual apperances showed...
5MadelVerOH MAN! I tottaly hoped that when Luffy was in the game, I kinda hoped that everyone got stuck in the game... And their actual apperances showed...
5/20/2017 c4 2CelestialPirateQueen
Oh GOD! A car hit her!? That is horrible, what will the strawhats do without her? Will she wake up? What am I talking about?! Of course she will wake up! This is Luffy! Oh my... I think I am PANICKING! *bonkfaints* AceFinally! She fainted! My ears hurt so much! Saboyou hit her on her head! What do you expect?! Besides Luffy is in the hospital, and you are worrying about your ears?! Acewait WHAT!? Luffy is in the hospital?! What happened? Is she okay? Who did this to her? Is she hurt? Is the one who did this to her still out there? ANSWER ME, SABO! Saboyou didn't know?didn't you atleast her the girl's screams?.. Oh let me guess you had a narcolepsy attack? ACEaaahhhhhh.. NO! OF COURSE NOT!.. I was eating.. Uh I mean I was studying... And... Doing important stuff... Sabo :.. Yeah, right...If you want to know anything, go read the chapter yourself. *walks awayAce: WAIT! SABO! YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I HATE TO READ! I AM NOT A 15 NERDY GIRL! *runs after himI have no idea why I wrote this XD
2CelestialPirateQueenOh GOD! A car hit her!? That is horrible, what will the strawhats do without her? Will she wake up? What am I talking about?! Of course she will wake up! This is Luffy! Oh my... I think I am PANICKING! *bonkfaints* AceFinally! She fainted! My ears hurt so much! Saboyou hit her on her head! What do you expect?! Besides Luffy is in the hospital, and you are worrying about your ears?! Acewait WHAT!? Luffy is in the hospital?! What happened? Is she okay? Who did this to her? Is she hurt? Is the one who did this to her still out there? ANSWER ME, SABO! Saboyou didn't know?didn't you atleast her the girl's screams?.. Oh let me guess you had a narcolepsy attack? ACEaaahhhhhh.. NO! OF COURSE NOT!.. I was eating.. Uh I mean I was studying... And... Doing important stuff... Sabo :.. Yeah, right...If you want to know anything, go read the chapter yourself. *walks awayAce: WAIT! SABO! YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I HATE TO READ! I AM NOT A 15 NERDY GIRL! *runs after himI have no idea why I wrote this XD