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3/7/2018 c1 9TooInsaneToFuction
*talk
3/7/2018 c1 TooInsaneToFuction
just PM me so we can talo about it
2/21/2018 c5 theawesomeflash
Can I take this story off your hands?
3/12/2017 c1 Guesty guest
Great plot, keep improving your writing skils, please continue
3/12/2017 c4 Syl
I really, really like your story, but the spelling and gramatical erros make it almost unreadable ( in my opinion). I think you should continue this story and improve your writing while doing it.

I hope i am not discouraging you by writing this, i am dutch and my english writhing is also not that great. But difference between us is that you are actual writing this story and slowly improving.

And i wish that i had your courage to write my ideas and share them with the world.

In short, continue this story please. Keep improving and keep writing.

(Ps. I see allot of people on this site talking obout having beta readers. Maybe it would be nice for you to get one)

(Pps. I hope i was not mean to you in this review. That was not my intension)
2/21/2017 c2 1Emu Thing
"Then she frown the water onto him ." lol
2/11/2017 c2 Guest
Thank you for updating
2/9/2017 c1 Guest
You should definitely do more
2/8/2017 c1 Hi
Nice

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