
1/9 c13 Guest
Any movement on this story?
Any movement on this story?
11/16/2024 c13
40Rico Perrien
IT's been over two years. As the guy eating sushi put it, I am sitting here with bait on my breath. I really hope you haven't given up on this.

IT's been over two years. As the guy eating sushi put it, I am sitting here with bait on my breath. I really hope you haven't given up on this.
11/12/2024 c13 rducharme232
I wish you would finish this. Would you at least write a ending chapter that will give the information to end it if your not ever going to truly finish the unwritten stories? YOu are one of the best.
I wish you would finish this. Would you at least write a ending chapter that will give the information to end it if your not ever going to truly finish the unwritten stories? YOu are one of the best.
10/17/2024 c13 TheGreengrassDilemma
Really enjoyable story so far, thanks for sharing it with us. I hope you get around to continuing at some point.
Really enjoyable story so far, thanks for sharing it with us. I hope you get around to continuing at some point.
9/10/2024 c2 Jiggly Joe
I really don't understand why this stupid trope of evil, selfish, fangirl Ginny has persisted. There isn't even a HINT of this in canon, but it seems like the Fandom has the complete opposite view of these characters compared to what they actually are in the story. Good people get turned into ridiculous caricatures and genuinely terrible people become misunderstood martyrs. Why I stopped stepping into this Fandom ages ago. This is a relatively old story but it's a good reminded of why I should have stayed away.
I really don't understand why this stupid trope of evil, selfish, fangirl Ginny has persisted. There isn't even a HINT of this in canon, but it seems like the Fandom has the complete opposite view of these characters compared to what they actually are in the story. Good people get turned into ridiculous caricatures and genuinely terrible people become misunderstood martyrs. Why I stopped stepping into this Fandom ages ago. This is a relatively old story but it's a good reminded of why I should have stayed away.
7/19/2024 c13 Nimbus2023
Again I see many similarities between this story and A Marriage of Convenience.
Again I see many similarities between this story and A Marriage of Convenience.
7/19/2024 c12 Nimbus2023
The argument Harry had with Daphne over him taking a house elf bodyguard reeked of forced drama. Granted Harry was a bleeding heart in canon but his reaction did not feel organic.
The argument Harry had with Daphne over him taking a house elf bodyguard reeked of forced drama. Granted Harry was a bleeding heart in canon but his reaction did not feel organic.
7/19/2024 c9 Nimbus2023
I'm fairly certain that Gideon was the unwilling pawn in Harry's attempted assassination going by the clues we've been given so far.
I'm fairly certain that Gideon was the unwilling pawn in Harry's attempted assassination going by the clues we've been given so far.
7/18/2024 c9 Nimbus2023
Seems kind of stupid to use such a specialized spell for an assassination. In a school full of children using a brain-liquifying spell would definitely narrow down the suspect pool considering the amount of power it takes to cast the spell.
Seems kind of stupid to use such a specialized spell for an assassination. In a school full of children using a brain-liquifying spell would definitely narrow down the suspect pool considering the amount of power it takes to cast the spell.
7/18/2024 c8 Nimbus2023
I can see patterns in your writing style, this is the second story with an assassin making multiple attempts on Harry's life. Actually, there are quite a few similarities between this story and A Marriage of Convenience now that I think about it.
I can see patterns in your writing style, this is the second story with an assassin making multiple attempts on Harry's life. Actually, there are quite a few similarities between this story and A Marriage of Convenience now that I think about it.
7/18/2024 c6 Nimbus2023
Congratulations, you have managed to create one of the most annoying versions of Hermione Granger that I have ever seen. Harry should do the world a favor and vanish her mouth.
Congratulations, you have managed to create one of the most annoying versions of Hermione Granger that I have ever seen. Harry should do the world a favor and vanish her mouth.
7/18/2024 c4 Nimbus2023
Dumbledore's portrait was already in the office almost immediately after Albus' death. When Harry entered Snape's memories before his trip into the forest there was a memory of Albus' portrait warning Snape to be cautious when he delivered the sword of Gryffindor to Harry and company n the Forest of Dean.
Dumbledore's portrait was already in the office almost immediately after Albus' death. When Harry entered Snape's memories before his trip into the forest there was a memory of Albus' portrait warning Snape to be cautious when he delivered the sword of Gryffindor to Harry and company n the Forest of Dean.
6/4/2024 c13 Mauricio Cuellar
Es bueno autorizaciĆ³n pronto
Es bueno autorizaciĆ³n pronto