for Team CMEO2/28/2017 c13 
61bankerrtx01
Nice but will you counting till volume five and the end of the series please.
61bankerrtx01Nice but will you counting till volume five and the end of the series please.
2/27/2017 c13 83PhoenixNinja101
Aye, Onyx is so BUSTED! XD Good luck dealing with Ruby I guess... Still, I hope Yang and Ruby would finally get along. But I prefer she and Onyx resolve this first. I know family should come first, but Yang should realize that Ruby isn't a kid anymore and had the right to date anyone. She should be old enough to understand that, and hopefully she understands that Onyx isn't as bad as she thought. Welp, judging by the author's note, I'm assuming you're still not feeling better? Because when I'm not feeling good, I'd often post short author's notes too. I'm actually more talkative when I'm in a good mood. So, if I'm right, then I hope you feel better soon!
83PhoenixNinja101Aye, Onyx is so BUSTED! XD Good luck dealing with Ruby I guess... Still, I hope Yang and Ruby would finally get along. But I prefer she and Onyx resolve this first. I know family should come first, but Yang should realize that Ruby isn't a kid anymore and had the right to date anyone. She should be old enough to understand that, and hopefully she understands that Onyx isn't as bad as she thought. Welp, judging by the author's note, I'm assuming you're still not feeling better? Because when I'm not feeling good, I'd often post short author's notes too. I'm actually more talkative when I'm in a good mood. So, if I'm right, then I hope you feel better soon!
2/24/2017 c12 PhoenixNinja101
Gosh, in my previous comment I meant Neo nor nephew. I use auto-correct so it happens a lot.
Gosh, in my previous comment I meant Neo nor nephew. I use auto-correct so it happens a lot.
2/24/2017 c12 PhoenixNinja101
I feel so bad for Ruby... Yang's being a little too harsh on her sister. I like. Roman and Nephew in your story. Never really fond of them in the anime, but I like how they're acting nice here.
I feel so bad for Ruby... Yang's being a little too harsh on her sister. I like. Roman and Nephew in your story. Never really fond of them in the anime, but I like how they're acting nice here.
2/22/2017 c11 PhoenixNinja101
Doesn't matter if you skipped time :D I'm just excited for the actions. Man, even thought these have short chapters, you update very often. Unlike me, whose goal is to reach about 62 chapters, is stuck at chapter 50, of the story I've been writing for 2 years now.
Doesn't matter if you skipped time :D I'm just excited for the actions. Man, even thought these have short chapters, you update very often. Unlike me, whose goal is to reach about 62 chapters, is stuck at chapter 50, of the story I've been writing for 2 years now.
2/22/2017 c10 PhoenixNinja101
Oh don't worry, the chapter didn't seem short and it definitely isn't lame. I actually liked itI just hope Yang and Ruby will get along in the future chapters.
Oh don't worry, the chapter didn't seem short and it definitely isn't lame. I actually liked itI just hope Yang and Ruby will get along in the future chapters.
2/21/2017 c9 PhoenixNinja101
NOOOOOOO! Why the cliffhanger?!Waah... I love the overly protective sister btw. I just love it when one member of the family is overprotective. I barely saw Yang be overprotective to Ruby when it comes to battle –except maybe those times when she's looking for her. Anyway, greats chapter, like always. Hope to read more (and hope there's less cliffhangers)
NOOOOOOO! Why the cliffhanger?!Waah... I love the overly protective sister btw. I just love it when one member of the family is overprotective. I barely saw Yang be overprotective to Ruby when it comes to battle –except maybe those times when she's looking for her. Anyway, greats chapter, like always. Hope to read more (and hope there's less cliffhangers)
2/21/2017 c4 1LucksmanDMormon
I usually hate OCxCanon ships, but I like how the two personalities seem like they could be decent. If youre gonna make a ship like that, make sure the OCs personality is built around being compatible with the canon character. I like how youve kept Rubys personality for the most part. From the guy who makes a fanfiction where he insults other authors to you, good job, mate.
1LucksmanDMormonI usually hate OCxCanon ships, but I like how the two personalities seem like they could be decent. If youre gonna make a ship like that, make sure the OCs personality is built around being compatible with the canon character. I like how youve kept Rubys personality for the most part. From the guy who makes a fanfiction where he insults other authors to you, good job, mate.
2/19/2017 c8 83PhoenixNinja101
Cute chapter! I totally ship Onyx and Ruby! #Rubyx lmao I love these two so much! :3
83PhoenixNinja101Cute chapter! I totally ship Onyx and Ruby! #Rubyx lmao I love these two so much! :3
2/18/2017 c7 1Rane-Lucifer
Very interesting story, I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to find out what Yang will do to Onyx. I await your next chapter with anticipation.
Keep going with this story. If you would like any help feel free to ask, i read alot of stories to find out how some fanfics of a certain show are done before writing my own, that im in the middle of.
I am willing to help at any moment.
Rane Lucifer
1Rane-LuciferVery interesting story, I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to find out what Yang will do to Onyx. I await your next chapter with anticipation.
Keep going with this story. If you would like any help feel free to ask, i read alot of stories to find out how some fanfics of a certain show are done before writing my own, that im in the middle of.
I am willing to help at any moment.
Rane Lucifer