for The Human Element2/13 c25 anonymous
Updated and Fixated comment.
I can only imagine what comes next for Mason when he takes on all challengers, Unicron, Megatron, Cylas, Starscream, and hopefully in the future…Megatronus Prime (aka The Fallen), Steeljaw, and Cyclonus. (Robots in Disguise Villains if you will.)
And due to you responding to my old comment, I respect you and the story, and I as such, will never stop reading this story, hoping beyond hope that he and Arcee become a couple.
Orion Pax: “It’s time to show them, we are more…than meets the EYE!”
(Couple of one shot dialogues for idea references)
First up: Unicron. And yes, it is short.
Unicron: “I will not be DENIED!”
Stryker: “Ahhh, just shut up and die, Uni-clown?!”
Next up: Megatron.
Stryker: “Hey, Mega-scar!” (Megatron turns to him with a growl) “Who’s laughing now?”
(Shoots Megatron in the shoulder, dodging Megatron’s fusion shots and landing in a crouch. Megatron takes five steps towards the human in disguise, while Stryker takes a stance, challenging the larger Decepticon).
Megatron: (sneering) “You really think you can take on me, alone…mini-con?”
Stryker: “You don’t scare me.”
Megatron: “You can’t possibly hope to best me. I am Megatron, and it is impossible for even Prime to defeat me!”
Stryker: “Buckethead…(releases guns and blades)… I “AM” impossible!”
(Cue the fight between the robot and human in disguise. Jack and the Autobots, especially Optimus, Arcee and Bulkhead would be greatly impressed at the young human’s strength).
And thirdly: Arcee. I can’t resist my big head. And the scene is after Orion Pax, once more Optimus Prime, returns to base and is welcomed back by Team Prime.
(After Ratchet commends Optimus for his return to the Autobots, Stryker steps forward, and the Autobots commend him).
Bulkhead: “Kid, what you did back there was one of the craziest things I’ve ever seen.” (beat, smiles) “Nice job, mini Wrecker!” (pats Stryker on the back)
Arcee: “Yeah. Thanks for helping us out back there. You were pretty brave back there, Mason”
Mason: “Actually, Arcee, in all honesty, I was scared to death, mostly about losing you and Jack.” (Arcee crouches down closer to him) “The reason I was afraid of you coming with us, was because I couldn’t bare the thought of losing someone that…that I hold real close to my heart.”
(Arcee’s cerulean optics widen and her lips take a surprised expression, while the Autobots and humans turn to Stryker, looking rather surprised).
Mason: “When I held off Airachnid in the forest, or when we got stuck at MECH, or even when I challenged Megatron, I was scared. Scared of losing you. Because, (3 second pause), you’re more than just my best friend to me.”
(Arcee looks touched, Miko opens her mouth, only for Jack to clamp it, the Autobots look surprised at Mason, especially Optimus, whose optics and mouth slightly widen).
Mason: “You are the toughest, smartest, and most capable girl that I’ve ever met. And I consider myself lucky to have a girl like you in my life. In fact, I consider myself lucky to have ever met you in the first place.”
Miko: “Dude, what are you-?” (Jack nudges her to be quiet).
Mason: “I may be rich, but to me, meeting a strong girl like you, was the single best thing that ever happened to me in my life. And nothing will ever top that.”
Arcee: (barely audible) “Mason? Are you, trying to say, that you like me?”
Mason: “Actually, Arcee, it’s more than just like. It’s more like, (deep 5 second breath), I love you.” (Tops it off with a warm smile).
(Optimus’s eyes widen, the Autobots’ eyes widen, complete with jaws dropping and audible gasping, and Bumblebee gasping a beep. Jack utters a “whoa!”, Raf smiles, and Miko and Fowler just stare dumbfounded with looks that practically scream: “WHAT?!”).
(Arcee just stares in complete shock and surprise at what Stryker just told her).
Arcee: (gasping) “Mason…”
To be continued. And hopefully, it tops itself with a kiss.
Hope to read the story further. Till all are ONE!
Updated and Fixated comment.
I can only imagine what comes next for Mason when he takes on all challengers, Unicron, Megatron, Cylas, Starscream, and hopefully in the future…Megatronus Prime (aka The Fallen), Steeljaw, and Cyclonus. (Robots in Disguise Villains if you will.)
And due to you responding to my old comment, I respect you and the story, and I as such, will never stop reading this story, hoping beyond hope that he and Arcee become a couple.
Orion Pax: “It’s time to show them, we are more…than meets the EYE!”
(Couple of one shot dialogues for idea references)
First up: Unicron. And yes, it is short.
Unicron: “I will not be DENIED!”
Stryker: “Ahhh, just shut up and die, Uni-clown?!”
Next up: Megatron.
Stryker: “Hey, Mega-scar!” (Megatron turns to him with a growl) “Who’s laughing now?”
(Shoots Megatron in the shoulder, dodging Megatron’s fusion shots and landing in a crouch. Megatron takes five steps towards the human in disguise, while Stryker takes a stance, challenging the larger Decepticon).
Megatron: (sneering) “You really think you can take on me, alone…mini-con?”
Stryker: “You don’t scare me.”
Megatron: “You can’t possibly hope to best me. I am Megatron, and it is impossible for even Prime to defeat me!”
Stryker: “Buckethead…(releases guns and blades)… I “AM” impossible!”
(Cue the fight between the robot and human in disguise. Jack and the Autobots, especially Optimus, Arcee and Bulkhead would be greatly impressed at the young human’s strength).
And thirdly: Arcee. I can’t resist my big head. And the scene is after Orion Pax, once more Optimus Prime, returns to base and is welcomed back by Team Prime.
(After Ratchet commends Optimus for his return to the Autobots, Stryker steps forward, and the Autobots commend him).
Bulkhead: “Kid, what you did back there was one of the craziest things I’ve ever seen.” (beat, smiles) “Nice job, mini Wrecker!” (pats Stryker on the back)
Arcee: “Yeah. Thanks for helping us out back there. You were pretty brave back there, Mason”
Mason: “Actually, Arcee, in all honesty, I was scared to death, mostly about losing you and Jack.” (Arcee crouches down closer to him) “The reason I was afraid of you coming with us, was because I couldn’t bare the thought of losing someone that…that I hold real close to my heart.”
(Arcee’s cerulean optics widen and her lips take a surprised expression, while the Autobots and humans turn to Stryker, looking rather surprised).
Mason: “When I held off Airachnid in the forest, or when we got stuck at MECH, or even when I challenged Megatron, I was scared. Scared of losing you. Because, (3 second pause), you’re more than just my best friend to me.”
(Arcee looks touched, Miko opens her mouth, only for Jack to clamp it, the Autobots look surprised at Mason, especially Optimus, whose optics and mouth slightly widen).
Mason: “You are the toughest, smartest, and most capable girl that I’ve ever met. And I consider myself lucky to have a girl like you in my life. In fact, I consider myself lucky to have ever met you in the first place.”
Miko: “Dude, what are you-?” (Jack nudges her to be quiet).
Mason: “I may be rich, but to me, meeting a strong girl like you, was the single best thing that ever happened to me in my life. And nothing will ever top that.”
Arcee: (barely audible) “Mason? Are you, trying to say, that you like me?”
Mason: “Actually, Arcee, it’s more than just like. It’s more like, (deep 5 second breath), I love you.” (Tops it off with a warm smile).
(Optimus’s eyes widen, the Autobots’ eyes widen, complete with jaws dropping and audible gasping, and Bumblebee gasping a beep. Jack utters a “whoa!”, Raf smiles, and Miko and Fowler just stare dumbfounded with looks that practically scream: “WHAT?!”).
(Arcee just stares in complete shock and surprise at what Stryker just told her).
Arcee: (gasping) “Mason…”
To be continued. And hopefully, it tops itself with a kiss.
Hope to read the story further. Till all are ONE!
11/26/2024 c25 Seven foot giant
Great story I can’t wait to read more i hope you update soon please keep up the amazing work
Great story I can’t wait to read more i hope you update soon please keep up the amazing work
11/12/2024 c1 billsazguard
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good,
I just read your story The Human Element and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions. I do all sorts of artwork and have some spots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good,
I just read your story The Human Element and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions. I do all sorts of artwork and have some spots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
11/1/2024 c1 anonymous
It’s time to show ‘em, they are more…than meets the EYE!
It’s time to show ‘em, they are more…than meets the EYE!
11/1/2024 c25 seruis
And the showdown begins.
I do wonder how it'll go down with Mason added to the mix, and if his "connection" to Unicron will be a liability or not.
I suppose we'll find out!
And the showdown begins.
I do wonder how it'll go down with Mason added to the mix, and if his "connection" to Unicron will be a liability or not.
I suppose we'll find out!
10/30/2024 c25 anonymous
It’s time to show them, we are more than meets the EYE!
It’s time to show them, we are more than meets the EYE!
10/26/2024 c25 anonymous
I can only imagine what comes next for Mason when he takes on all challengers, Unicron, Megatron, Cylas, Starscream, and hopefully in the future…Megatronus, Steeljaw, and Cyclonus. (Robots in Disguise Villains if uou will.
And due to you responding to my old comment, I respect you and this story, hoping beyond hope that he and Arcee become a couple.
It’s time to show them, we are more…than meets the EYE!
(Couple of one shot dialogues for idea references)
First up: Unicron. And yes, it is short.
Unicron: “I will not be DENIED!”
Stryker: “Ahhh, just shut up and die, Uni-clown?!”
Next up: Megatron.
Megatron: (sneering) “You really think you can face me on, alone…mini-con?”
Stryker: “Who says I’m alone Mega-klutz? I don’t fear you.”
Megatron: “You can’t possibly hope to best me. I am Megatron, and it is impossible for even Prime to defeat me!”
Stryker: “Buckethead…(releases guns and blades)… I “AM” impossible!”
And thirdly: Arcee. I can’t resist my big head. And the scene is after Orion Pax, once more Optimus Prime, returns to base and is welcomed back by Team Prime.
Arcee: “You were pretty brave back there, Mason”
Mason: “Actually, Arcee, in all honesty, I was scared to death…mostly about losing you and Jack.” (Arcee crouches down closer to him) “The reason I was afraid of you coming with us…was because I couldn’t bare the thought of losing someone I hold close to my heart.
(Arcee’s cerulean optics widen and her lips take a surprised expression)
Mason: When I held off Airachnid in the forest, or when we got stuck at MECH, or even when I challenged Megatron, I was scared of losing you. Because, (3 second pause), you’re more than just my best friend to me.”
(Arcee looks touched, Miko opens her mouth, only for Jack to clamp it, the Autobots look surprised at Mason, especially Optimus).
Mason: “You are the toughest, smartest, and most capable girl that I’ve ever met. And I consider myself lucky to have a girl like you in my life. In fact, I consider myself lucky to have ever met you in the first place.”
Arcee: (barely audible) “Mason? Are you, trying to say…you like me?”
Mason: “Actually, Arcee, it’s not so much as like, but more like, (10 second pause), love you.” (Tops it off with a warm smile).
(Optimus’s eyes widen, the Autobot’s eyes widen, complete with jaws dropping, and Bumblebee gasping a beep. Jack utters a “whoa!”, Raf scratches his hair, and Miko just stares dumbfounded).
Arcee: (gasping) “Mason…”
To be continued. And hopefully, it tops itself with a kiss.
Hope to read the story further. Till all are ONE!
I can only imagine what comes next for Mason when he takes on all challengers, Unicron, Megatron, Cylas, Starscream, and hopefully in the future…Megatronus, Steeljaw, and Cyclonus. (Robots in Disguise Villains if uou will.
And due to you responding to my old comment, I respect you and this story, hoping beyond hope that he and Arcee become a couple.
It’s time to show them, we are more…than meets the EYE!
(Couple of one shot dialogues for idea references)
First up: Unicron. And yes, it is short.
Unicron: “I will not be DENIED!”
Stryker: “Ahhh, just shut up and die, Uni-clown?!”
Next up: Megatron.
Megatron: (sneering) “You really think you can face me on, alone…mini-con?”
Stryker: “Who says I’m alone Mega-klutz? I don’t fear you.”
Megatron: “You can’t possibly hope to best me. I am Megatron, and it is impossible for even Prime to defeat me!”
Stryker: “Buckethead…(releases guns and blades)… I “AM” impossible!”
And thirdly: Arcee. I can’t resist my big head. And the scene is after Orion Pax, once more Optimus Prime, returns to base and is welcomed back by Team Prime.
Arcee: “You were pretty brave back there, Mason”
Mason: “Actually, Arcee, in all honesty, I was scared to death…mostly about losing you and Jack.” (Arcee crouches down closer to him) “The reason I was afraid of you coming with us…was because I couldn’t bare the thought of losing someone I hold close to my heart.
(Arcee’s cerulean optics widen and her lips take a surprised expression)
Mason: When I held off Airachnid in the forest, or when we got stuck at MECH, or even when I challenged Megatron, I was scared of losing you. Because, (3 second pause), you’re more than just my best friend to me.”
(Arcee looks touched, Miko opens her mouth, only for Jack to clamp it, the Autobots look surprised at Mason, especially Optimus).
Mason: “You are the toughest, smartest, and most capable girl that I’ve ever met. And I consider myself lucky to have a girl like you in my life. In fact, I consider myself lucky to have ever met you in the first place.”
Arcee: (barely audible) “Mason? Are you, trying to say…you like me?”
Mason: “Actually, Arcee, it’s not so much as like, but more like, (10 second pause), love you.” (Tops it off with a warm smile).
(Optimus’s eyes widen, the Autobot’s eyes widen, complete with jaws dropping, and Bumblebee gasping a beep. Jack utters a “whoa!”, Raf scratches his hair, and Miko just stares dumbfounded).
Arcee: (gasping) “Mason…”
To be continued. And hopefully, it tops itself with a kiss.
Hope to read the story further. Till all are ONE!
10/24/2024 c25 
2weavile101
this is really good and interesting but you miss one about take care of the others.
2weavile101this is really good and interesting but you miss one about take care of the others.
10/24/2024 c25 validole
I really hope that there will be more chapters often and all 3 seasons plus Rise Of Predacons and plus sequel RID 2015.
(I know some of authors hate that RID 2015 series it's understandable, but c'mon cut some slack at least they could've chance in their fanfic details and all that)
It's been a long time since the last update, I'm glad that you have motivation and inspiration to keep update new chapters.
Will be waiting for the next update, like from me!
Good luck my friend!
I really hope that there will be more chapters often and all 3 seasons plus Rise Of Predacons and plus sequel RID 2015.
(I know some of authors hate that RID 2015 series it's understandable, but c'mon cut some slack at least they could've chance in their fanfic details and all that)
It's been a long time since the last update, I'm glad that you have motivation and inspiration to keep update new chapters.
Will be waiting for the next update, like from me!
Good luck my friend!
10/24/2024 c13 Guest
dude! this is aweesomme! can you make him meet predacon?
dude! this is aweesomme! can you make him meet predacon?
10/15/2024 c24 Guest
Hope to see more:)
Hope to see more:)
10/9/2024 c23 Chunky Mutt
I hope with transformers one release will provide you with inspiration to come back to this story.
I hope with transformers one release will provide you with inspiration to come back to this story.
9/3/2024 c24 Guest
i want to know what happens next please continue this story don't stop.
i want to know what happens next please continue this story don't stop.