for The Human Element1/4/2018 c12 Fluffy guy
So Mason has a M.A.C. Those, poor, poor cons.
So Mason has a M.A.C. Those, poor, poor cons.
1/4/2018 c12 Alpha
Awesome! Now Mason can kick more Decepticon ass! Ummm...did I spell that right?
Awesome! Now Mason can kick more Decepticon ass! Ummm...did I spell that right?
1/4/2018 c12 Blaze1992
You know Prime's orders seem to be cause more harm and trouble when mason is involved, I mean come on do you realize how lucky those kids where that it wasn't one of the more deadly/stupid cons.
I mean think about it if star-scream was there they would likely be dead or worse all because of Primes choice of not letting Mason bring self-defense.
Plus really Prime "grounding" him umm yeah how about no.
You know Prime's orders seem to be cause more harm and trouble when mason is involved, I mean come on do you realize how lucky those kids where that it wasn't one of the more deadly/stupid cons.
I mean think about it if star-scream was there they would likely be dead or worse all because of Primes choice of not letting Mason bring self-defense.
Plus really Prime "grounding" him umm yeah how about no.
1/4/2018 c12 seruis
Wooow, okay, I'm gonna be honest here, I have absolutely no idea how to express the way I felt about this chapter in words. It was just so... ugh, what would the right word be... astonishing? I'm not sure. That episode was my favorite one so far so reading it with Mason added in made it ten times better. It kind of took me by surprise that Soundwave just punched Mason, but I would too if I was shot. And now that Mason knows how the gun works it should give him a slight advantage, especially against the 'cons considering that it's not modelled like any other gun. Anyway, you do you and take a break if you need one, I'm almost 99% positive that everyone else that reads your stories will understand. The other 1% though... not sure.
Wooow, okay, I'm gonna be honest here, I have absolutely no idea how to express the way I felt about this chapter in words. It was just so... ugh, what would the right word be... astonishing? I'm not sure. That episode was my favorite one so far so reading it with Mason added in made it ten times better. It kind of took me by surprise that Soundwave just punched Mason, but I would too if I was shot. And now that Mason knows how the gun works it should give him a slight advantage, especially against the 'cons considering that it's not modelled like any other gun. Anyway, you do you and take a break if you need one, I'm almost 99% positive that everyone else that reads your stories will understand. The other 1% though... not sure.
1/2/2018 c11 Alphabet
I love this story a a lot! Mason is a total badass!
I love this story a a lot! Mason is a total badass!
1/1/2018 c11 Fluffy guy
This a is very enjoyable chapter.
This a is very enjoyable chapter.
1/1/2018 c11 seruis
I don't have much to say other than that this chapter was absolutely amazing. I wonder how that'll change the story now that MECH knows about Mason, and the fact that Mason now has one of their weapons. This was quite interesting to read. Keep up the great work!
I don't have much to say other than that this chapter was absolutely amazing. I wonder how that'll change the story now that MECH knows about Mason, and the fact that Mason now has one of their weapons. This was quite interesting to read. Keep up the great work!
1/1/2018 c11 Blaze1992
"Blaze1992 face-palms" Really prime is lecturing on the act of killing the baddies and your MC purposely missed instead of going for the kill shots?
"Blaze1992 face-palms" Really prime is lecturing on the act of killing the baddies and your MC purposely missed instead of going for the kill shots?
12/31/2017 c10 AADarthSidiousAA
I liked it! You wrote the episode well and even though this would be my least favorite episode from the series, I found your version much more entertaining :)
I liked it! You wrote the episode well and even though this would be my least favorite episode from the series, I found your version much more entertaining :)
12/31/2017 c10 Fluffy guy
One hell of a chapter.
One hell of a chapter.
12/29/2017 c10 Blaze1992
You know it never made sense to me why they let the spy go back?
Shouldn't they have killed/off-lined him first?
You know it never made sense to me why they let the spy go back?
Shouldn't they have killed/off-lined him first?
12/28/2017 c10 seruis
Aw man, this was interesting. I think my favourite part of this chapter was when Mason was annoyed about Miko and fake Wheeljack being in his room, and when he was given the job of keeping an eye on the fake Wheeljack. I'm gonna be honest here, all your stories make it seem like the OC was just meant to be there, they have their own lines and interactions that change the way the story goes and yet the ending is the same. Anywho, wish you luck and happy New Year.
Aw man, this was interesting. I think my favourite part of this chapter was when Mason was annoyed about Miko and fake Wheeljack being in his room, and when he was given the job of keeping an eye on the fake Wheeljack. I'm gonna be honest here, all your stories make it seem like the OC was just meant to be there, they have their own lines and interactions that change the way the story goes and yet the ending is the same. Anywho, wish you luck and happy New Year.
11/6/2017 c9 Fluffy guy
Good chapter good story
Good chapter good story
10/2/2017 c9 seruis
Great chapter, as always. In all honesty I don't mind if you make a Code Lyoko story, if it doesn't screw up your regular schedule then go ahead!
Great chapter, as always. In all honesty I don't mind if you make a Code Lyoko story, if it doesn't screw up your regular schedule then go ahead!