for Like Father, Like Daughter9/21 c32 
50acosta perez jose ramiro
As always, great updating, and good to have Marco and Hekapoo back.
Keep the good writing.
50acosta perez jose ramiroAs always, great updating, and good to have Marco and Hekapoo back.
Keep the good writing.
9/14 c31 Masked Freak
I still can't believe everything that happened in the last chapter...
I still can't believe everything that happened in the last chapter...
9/13 c31 Guest
I believe in you Seraph. You can stop that ancient evil douchebag. Marco, Hekapoo, wherever you are, your daughter needs you. Good luck. (Love your stories. Love your work. Can't wait to see more.)
I believe in you Seraph. You can stop that ancient evil douchebag. Marco, Hekapoo, wherever you are, your daughter needs you. Good luck. (Love your stories. Love your work. Can't wait to see more.)
9/13 c31 4VainlyInsane
Alright. After a proper read-through, I can safely say your story is equal parts a joy to read, heart breaking, and absolutely infuriating. There's so much happening, the oddly woven in references that make me roll my eyes, the touching moments of a child doting on her family, the painful feelings of heartbreak, and the honestly baffling inclusion of some all-powerful being of darkness who genuinely reminds me of a mega-juiced up Bill Cypher. I genuinely have no idea where you're going with this, and I'm a lot disappointed in the family fluff being constantly interrupted when it's done so goddamn well that I'm up at almost 5am writing some dumb rant about a story that I evenly loved and felt touched by and loathed and groaned out loud to. I'm absolute sure you have a plan for this story, but holy hell man, it's all over the place and I was here for Marco/Hekapoo relationship fluff and drama that you seem to be trying to either work away from or reintroduce in some way later down the line, that being said, fuck you for that wedding bit, you got my hopes up and so happy for Seraph and ripped both mine and her heart.
tl;dr story is so good but so bad, 10/10 OC daughter character.
4VainlyInsaneAlright. After a proper read-through, I can safely say your story is equal parts a joy to read, heart breaking, and absolutely infuriating. There's so much happening, the oddly woven in references that make me roll my eyes, the touching moments of a child doting on her family, the painful feelings of heartbreak, and the honestly baffling inclusion of some all-powerful being of darkness who genuinely reminds me of a mega-juiced up Bill Cypher. I genuinely have no idea where you're going with this, and I'm a lot disappointed in the family fluff being constantly interrupted when it's done so goddamn well that I'm up at almost 5am writing some dumb rant about a story that I evenly loved and felt touched by and loathed and groaned out loud to. I'm absolute sure you have a plan for this story, but holy hell man, it's all over the place and I was here for Marco/Hekapoo relationship fluff and drama that you seem to be trying to either work away from or reintroduce in some way later down the line, that being said, fuck you for that wedding bit, you got my hopes up and so happy for Seraph and ripped both mine and her heart.
tl;dr story is so good but so bad, 10/10 OC daughter character.
9/12 c31 Issei ODR
Un ser totalmente extraterrestre para su multiverso erebus.
Me agrada que agregadas a dioses del caos y seres demoniacos de diferentes series.
Un ser totalmente extraterrestre para su multiverso erebus.
Me agrada que agregadas a dioses del caos y seres demoniacos de diferentes series.