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3/29/2017 c2 3Bloodyninja88
Well this was a very interesting chapter, first off i would like to say that i am surprised with the name you went with for Marco and Hekapoo's daughter, at first i thought you went with Seraph to be ironic but then i read the AN at the bottom, either way good job with this chapter, reading the pains of both Star and Hekapoo does convey how this new development effects them both, but at least on Hekapoo's side she will be able to visit her daughter.

(Fun fact about Marco, originally he was going to be named Sol which translates into english as The Sun)
3/28/2017 c2 4pdsntk
this is a great story. please i need more of it
3/26/2017 c2 Maximillian Foster
I was not sure if this fic would die or not. I am happy it didn't.
Hope to see a lot more chapters in the future!
3/25/2017 c2 Guest
I love it
3/25/2017 c2 KingOfAnime117
This story got WAY better than I thought it could be. Awesome development for the characters and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work!
3/25/2017 c2 IHaveAFanficProblom
i really like the potential this story has, plz continue with the great stuff big fan of MarcoXHecapoo
not enough storys about them and this a good one
3/22/2017 c2 Guest
That was a great chapter very sentimental I'm so looking forward to the next chapter I want to see who marco falls in love with please be hekapoo
3/24/2017 c2 2Poliamida
Your beta recommended this story to me, and do I thank him for that! I'm really liking it, it always bugged me that Marco's maturity was never addressed in the show.
3/23/2017 c2 1Arthur Moon
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3/22/2017 c1 16ReaperJ
I almost for got about this sorry, really great stuff and can't wait to see more. your really don't a great job!
3/22/2017 c2 9JohnJuanRamboJr35
Well done,can't wait for the next update
3/22/2017 c2 2AngelCaotico11
good job
3/22/2017 c2 yuhoelmer
hermano esta de lujo espero lo sigas
por cierto te imaginas que hubiera pasado si hekapoo se hubiera precentado embarazada y no con un hijo
3/21/2017 c2 2Kha'zix the RiftWalker
more I need more this is amazing I want more
3/21/2017 c2 1thewookie1
There's so many angles that this story could delve into.

Marco is presently dating Jackie, and technically cheated on her.
Star is unknowingly in love with Marco, yet does like Seraph
Marco is suddenly a father, and may be emotionally jumbled since his time in Hekapoo's dimension aren't exactly vivid. Was it a one night stand or something more?
Then there's Hekapoo who definitely gets the short end of the stick in all of this. As an immortal, or at very least able to live thousands of years, her daughter's problem, and Marco being a mortal; will she pursue romance, or will she effectively end their romantic relationship for any number of reasons

I certainly would imagine Magic High Commission meetings will be awkward when Moon finds out, and even more so when Star take her Mom's position
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