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3/22/2017 c2 Guest
That was a great chapter very sentimental I'm so looking forward to the next chapter I want to see who marco falls in love with please be hekapoo
3/24/2017 c2 2Poliamida
Your beta recommended this story to me, and do I thank him for that! I'm really liking it, it always bugged me that Marco's maturity was never addressed in the show.
3/23/2017 c2 1Arthur Moon
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3/22/2017 c1 19ReaperJ
I almost for got about this sorry, really great stuff and can't wait to see more. your really don't a great job!
3/22/2017 c2 11JohnJuanRamboJr35
Well done,can't wait for the next update
3/22/2017 c2 2AngelCaotico11
good job
3/22/2017 c2 yuhoelmer
hermano esta de lujo espero lo sigas
por cierto te imaginas que hubiera pasado si hekapoo se hubiera precentado embarazada y no con un hijo
3/21/2017 c2 3Kha'zix the RiftWalker
more I need more this is amazing I want more
3/21/2017 c2 1thewookie1
There's so many angles that this story could delve into.

Marco is presently dating Jackie, and technically cheated on her.
Star is unknowingly in love with Marco, yet does like Seraph
Marco is suddenly a father, and may be emotionally jumbled since his time in Hekapoo's dimension aren't exactly vivid. Was it a one night stand or something more?
Then there's Hekapoo who definitely gets the short end of the stick in all of this. As an immortal, or at very least able to live thousands of years, her daughter's problem, and Marco being a mortal; will she pursue romance, or will she effectively end their romantic relationship for any number of reasons

I certainly would imagine Magic High Commission meetings will be awkward when Moon finds out, and even more so when Star take her Mom's position
3/21/2017 c2 17duskrider
Nice I rather like the reason why Hekapoo keeps Seraph around and later gives her up due to her own dimension speeding up her physical development.
3/21/2017 c2 DarkKing26
Awesome chapter please write next chapter soon
3/21/2017 c2 10Rogue Deity Master
The funny thing is if they wanted Seraph to become her actual age then all she has to do is drink from the river of time and have a dash of nectar from a pixienal rose. One is found in father times dimension while the other is found in the pixie dimension in the most dangerous area and it only blooms once every 700 years thus they would need a large amount of luck to find it and get the nectar.
3/21/2017 c2 blunt.raps69
Very deep and emotional. Does this officially make marco and hekapoo a couple?
3/21/2017 c2 Ranpoo4ever
Valio la pena tanta espera me dejo satisfecho y con ganas de mas
3/21/2017 c2 Guest
good chapter. i actually forgot the angle of stars crush on marco at first when this story started. that will add a good dimension as the story goes on.
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