for The Demon Eyes of Fairy Tail5/13 c59 keybladelight
Well wow poor lyon he sacrifice was for nothing.
Now Madera vs ur will begin well hope Madera will love to dance with her decease wife.
They need itachi or Madera book but knowing ultear hope she do the right decision.
Well wow poor lyon he sacrifice was for nothing.
Now Madera vs ur will begin well hope Madera will love to dance with her decease wife.
They need itachi or Madera book but knowing ultear hope she do the right decision.
5/3 c55 Oscar Jacquot
Michael Shadows, at the end of chapter 59 Gray's plan of getting Madara's Book from Zeref sounds like good Plan B. However, there are two problems, one is that Zeref probably won’t be able to cooperate with Gray to defeat Madara as he is just as selfish and cold hearted as Madara, he also doesn’t care if Madara destroys Humanity or not, as long as he gets Fairy Heart. Also in Chapter 43, Madara decoded his book to sever his life connections to Zeref. I believe that if Madara is to be stopped, then in the next Chapter, Gray, Juvia and Ultear, must first find Edolas Itachi for help and as they confront Zeref for the Books of Madara, Itachi, Natsu, Kisame, Sasori and Kakuzu. Afterwards, Once Gray, Juvia and Ultear fight Zeref from different Angles, Edolas Itachi would then cast Izanami on Zeref turning the tide of this battle. That is how Zeref would be defeated, with Edolas Itachi Casting the Izanami on him while Earthland Itachi uses his Genjutsu to force Zeref, how to sever the life connections to Zeref and stop Madara. Also with Mavis using Fairy Heart, the deceased characters on Ishgar’s side will be given a second chance.
Michael Shadows, at the end of chapter 59 Gray's plan of getting Madara's Book from Zeref sounds like good Plan B. However, there are two problems, one is that Zeref probably won’t be able to cooperate with Gray to defeat Madara as he is just as selfish and cold hearted as Madara, he also doesn’t care if Madara destroys Humanity or not, as long as he gets Fairy Heart. Also in Chapter 43, Madara decoded his book to sever his life connections to Zeref. I believe that if Madara is to be stopped, then in the next Chapter, Gray, Juvia and Ultear, must first find Edolas Itachi for help and as they confront Zeref for the Books of Madara, Itachi, Natsu, Kisame, Sasori and Kakuzu. Afterwards, Once Gray, Juvia and Ultear fight Zeref from different Angles, Edolas Itachi would then cast Izanami on Zeref turning the tide of this battle. That is how Zeref would be defeated, with Edolas Itachi Casting the Izanami on him while Earthland Itachi uses his Genjutsu to force Zeref, how to sever the life connections to Zeref and stop Madara. Also with Mavis using Fairy Heart, the deceased characters on Ishgar’s side will be given a second chance.
5/2 c59 altajir95
Now that's one hell of a chapter. I don't know where to start. :)
Besides saying that Ultear has finally unlocked her Mangekyo Sharingan, using two her Mangekyo abilities, including her own Susanoo.
And I totally like Ultear's Mangekyo Sharingan abilities; Amatsu-Mikaboshi, a Genjutsu that has similar ability to Shisui's Kotoamatsukami, and she successfully freed Ur from control, and her Kuninotokotachi allows her to stop time.
And Lyon got killed by Madara, this is war, it is unavoidable that people from both sides will die, even very known support characters, including the defenseless civilians that are on Ishgar.
Also, Gray is really powerful in his Devil Force, especially having a third eye on his forehead. You truly made Devil Slayer Magic being very remarkable in your story.
Now that's one hell of a chapter. I don't know where to start. :)
Besides saying that Ultear has finally unlocked her Mangekyo Sharingan, using two her Mangekyo abilities, including her own Susanoo.
And I totally like Ultear's Mangekyo Sharingan abilities; Amatsu-Mikaboshi, a Genjutsu that has similar ability to Shisui's Kotoamatsukami, and she successfully freed Ur from control, and her Kuninotokotachi allows her to stop time.
And Lyon got killed by Madara, this is war, it is unavoidable that people from both sides will die, even very known support characters, including the defenseless civilians that are on Ishgar.
Also, Gray is really powerful in his Devil Force, especially having a third eye on his forehead. You truly made Devil Slayer Magic being very remarkable in your story.
4/29 c2 myafroatemydog
Make him OP itachi was him. Obito literally waited to go after sasuke because he was scared of itschi. Danzo was scared of itachi. Hes him. Good chap
Make him OP itachi was him. Obito literally waited to go after sasuke because he was scared of itschi. Danzo was scared of itachi. Hes him. Good chap
4/27 c59 vcb420
Good chapter. Kind of messed up that you labelled Madara as responible for Lyon's death. Everybody there (literally EVERYBODY THERE) told him not do it. It'd be funny if in future chapters you subtlely changed it to "Lyon Vastia (killed by Lyon Vastiaor "Lyon Vastia (killed by his own stupidity)"
Good chapter. Kind of messed up that you labelled Madara as responible for Lyon's death. Everybody there (literally EVERYBODY THERE) told him not do it. It'd be funny if in future chapters you subtlely changed it to "Lyon Vastia (killed by Lyon Vastiaor "Lyon Vastia (killed by his own stupidity)"
4/27 c1 Guest
A good-ish fanfiction, but could have been much better without the Itachi wank. Not to be rude, but the author feels like an Itachi fanboy from Comicvine.
A good-ish fanfiction, but could have been much better without the Itachi wank. Not to be rude, but the author feels like an Itachi fanboy from Comicvine.
4/25 c59 Guest2
I have an idea for Itachi’s and Mira’s child as well as the sequel series. The 100 year quest should focus on Chihiro Uchiha, son of Itachi and Mirajane as he as well as his friends including Lena Dreyar, daughter of Laxus and Cana, as well as Chihiro’s rival and soon to be girlfriend take on a quest to put a stop to the threats that exist across the world as well a personal revenge mission for Chihiro to take down and kill the Sacred demons that destroyed the village that he and his family used to visit as a kid. I thought of the character based on the main protagonist of the manga Kagurabachi as the main character of the manga, Chihiro Rokuhira who I couldn’t help but see him as an Uchiha, not just through looks but also through dialogue and personality as well. The interaction between Itachi’s son Chihiro with Sarada and Sasuke would be interesting as he would definitely be a bit of an older brother figure to sarada and Sasuke would ensure that his nephew doesn’t let hatred corrupt him. This is just an idea, It’s your story but I just think that for Itachi’s son as character, someone like Chihiro Rokuhira would be a good character to based off of.
I have an idea for Itachi’s and Mira’s child as well as the sequel series. The 100 year quest should focus on Chihiro Uchiha, son of Itachi and Mirajane as he as well as his friends including Lena Dreyar, daughter of Laxus and Cana, as well as Chihiro’s rival and soon to be girlfriend take on a quest to put a stop to the threats that exist across the world as well a personal revenge mission for Chihiro to take down and kill the Sacred demons that destroyed the village that he and his family used to visit as a kid. I thought of the character based on the main protagonist of the manga Kagurabachi as the main character of the manga, Chihiro Rokuhira who I couldn’t help but see him as an Uchiha, not just through looks but also through dialogue and personality as well. The interaction between Itachi’s son Chihiro with Sarada and Sasuke would be interesting as he would definitely be a bit of an older brother figure to sarada and Sasuke would ensure that his nephew doesn’t let hatred corrupt him. This is just an idea, It’s your story but I just think that for Itachi’s son as character, someone like Chihiro Rokuhira would be a good character to based off of.
4/23 c59 lelosetyabudi
Keep up the good work okay I really hope that madara cn be good I mean I know everyone see him as a monster but I see what his class actually is his client is actually more human than anything they love so much when there's something but there is something catch their interests of what protected with all their heart even protecting it with their life When that's something that was love that was taking from them they would do anything for it to get it back even if it means to kill Just to get that love back And this is not because of the Heart Heart And he was spelled in an ugly way I know that he's just sad because everything in his life has been completely ruined again in his Second Life But I know there's still good inside his heart But I still don't want his daughter to die I know you've told me that you are not the type of writer debt is afraid to kill character but I see potentially in this character and I know that you would think as well I mean you are naruto fans too But yeah this is your story okay so keep up the good work okay
Keep up the good work okay I really hope that madara cn be good I mean I know everyone see him as a monster but I see what his class actually is his client is actually more human than anything they love so much when there's something but there is something catch their interests of what protected with all their heart even protecting it with their life When that's something that was love that was taking from them they would do anything for it to get it back even if it means to kill Just to get that love back And this is not because of the Heart Heart And he was spelled in an ugly way I know that he's just sad because everything in his life has been completely ruined again in his Second Life But I know there's still good inside his heart But I still don't want his daughter to die I know you've told me that you are not the type of writer debt is afraid to kill character but I see potentially in this character and I know that you would think as well I mean you are naruto fans too But yeah this is your story okay so keep up the good work okay