for How Insulting!3/6/2017 c1 
19Mother Of The Universe
Hello my friend.
You can say this story was based off true events. It made me crack up. I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner! 'Human Bean-pole' gets me every time, as you well know. I should buy my own platform boots so I can use them as projectiles, because they'd be a bit more effective than the sperry-topsiders I used that one time...
You know what I'm talking about.
I hope you make more stories, 'cause I would like to stop bugging you about making more stories. Good fic anyways!
19Mother Of The UniverseHello my friend.
You can say this story was based off true events. It made me crack up. I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner! 'Human Bean-pole' gets me every time, as you well know. I should buy my own platform boots so I can use them as projectiles, because they'd be a bit more effective than the sperry-topsiders I used that one time...
You know what I'm talking about.
I hope you make more stories, 'cause I would like to stop bugging you about making more stories. Good fic anyways!
3/4/2017 c1 17DarkAgea
Ouch, Edward's as bad as Winry when it comes to his boots. Good thing he has only two, I suppose.
It's sweet, and exactly like Edward. Honestly, I wonder myself why what he wears isn't known as well as his name... but maybe it's just that hard to see, ya know?
BTW, I think you meant 'identity' instead of 'indentity'.
I love the ending of the whole thing. In a single word, it was perfect. I... I literally cannot explain that in any word other than perfect. It's just... brilliant of Al to instigate the whole thing again. And I'm sure if Team Mustang was watching the whole thing, they'd get quite a few kicks out of it.
And, oh, did Edward say 'little'? Big hypocrite there.
Good job, TheRoseAlchemist17! I hope you write more FMA fics, though preferably a bit longer, but for these kinds of fics, that length is... well... (sighs) perfect.
17DarkAgeaOuch, Edward's as bad as Winry when it comes to his boots. Good thing he has only two, I suppose.
It's sweet, and exactly like Edward. Honestly, I wonder myself why what he wears isn't known as well as his name... but maybe it's just that hard to see, ya know?
BTW, I think you meant 'identity' instead of 'indentity'.
I love the ending of the whole thing. In a single word, it was perfect. I... I literally cannot explain that in any word other than perfect. It's just... brilliant of Al to instigate the whole thing again. And I'm sure if Team Mustang was watching the whole thing, they'd get quite a few kicks out of it.
And, oh, did Edward say 'little'? Big hypocrite there.
Good job, TheRoseAlchemist17! I hope you write more FMA fics, though preferably a bit longer, but for these kinds of fics, that length is... well... (sighs) perfect.
2/19/2017 c1 1JackieVocacia
Really good! My only suggestion is to avoid using the same word in the same scentance or relatively close to the first use of the word as much as possible (I saw this error at the end of the second paragraph, when Ed's boot bounced off Al.)
Besides that, it was amazing!
1JackieVocaciaReally good! My only suggestion is to avoid using the same word in the same scentance or relatively close to the first use of the word as much as possible (I saw this error at the end of the second paragraph, when Ed's boot bounced off Al.)
Besides that, it was amazing!