11/1/2017 c1 5CrafterLegend12
That was such a good chapter! The characters were so much like their actual RWBY selves, I was amazed.
You really managed to keep the personalities of the characters. Well done.
That was such a good chapter! The characters were so much like their actual RWBY selves, I was amazed.
You really managed to keep the personalities of the characters. Well done.
2/19/2017 c1 PTAtomic78
Again, I really love this. So happy to review here too.
I should have mentioned this in the last review: your characters are all so in character and well Jacques, beyond that sort of manipulative behaviour and what not is quite a coward too so when Winter properly stood up to him, it's no wonder he was afraid. Winter can be quite scary in canon. Qrow crapped himself almost when she jumped on his sword. lol.
Again, I feel so bad for Qrow. I'm glad he has Winter. Though I doubt he'll feel confident enough to trust she'll be okay when going on her next mission but i'm sure they'll work through it.
Again, I really love this. So happy to review here too.
I should have mentioned this in the last review: your characters are all so in character and well Jacques, beyond that sort of manipulative behaviour and what not is quite a coward too so when Winter properly stood up to him, it's no wonder he was afraid. Winter can be quite scary in canon. Qrow crapped himself almost when she jumped on his sword. lol.
Again, I feel so bad for Qrow. I'm glad he has Winter. Though I doubt he'll feel confident enough to trust she'll be okay when going on her next mission but i'm sure they'll work through it.