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9/9/2018 c1 The Corner Girl
Wait wait wait wait wait wait...

Are you telling me your wrote a *26k worded* fic before you even knew what fanfic was..

I mean I totally understand the whole "writing before you knew what it was cause even I did that but TWENTY SIX THOUSAND WORDS?!

DAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNGGGGGGGGG.
8/23/2017 c13 18Sanokal
Finally getting off my bum to review this.
It was interesting. Not at all what I thought it would be. Since I'm very attached to certain interpretations I'm not sure if I liked it or not, but I'm also unsure if that's because the ending was sadly never written.
Although Palkia being a hothead totally fits.
5/10/2017 c1 Empty Account 404
There are a lot of explorers of sky stories out there. I could be wrong, but I don't think any actually focus on Dialga's past. It sounds like a unique twist with a lot of promise.
As for criticism, there can be more detail on Dialga's actions, even while standing stationary. Is he glancing around at the rubble? Does he remain staring straight ahead? A character's posture and attitude can affect the tone.
I've only read this chapter, but it's an idea that stands out from the rest. I'm curious to read this interpretation of the game's history.

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