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2/27 c12 1Feeling Schadenfreude
I just have to say, I am LOVING this story so far. It started off a little slow, but the eventual excitement (and the fact that the slower start felt very necessary in building characters, introducing the setting in great detail, and setting up the plot) certainly made it all worth the read so far. The build up of plot and revelations of facts over time, as well as small details (such as including the interactions with Ember and Youngblood, describing his acts of heroism with the fire and robbers, and even including his pickpocketing endeavors) have done well in holding my interest and my goldfish attention span. Also, the fluid interactions between characters and their very natural-feeling thoughts certainly helped as well!

Not only that, the grammar and mechanics made this easy and enjoyable to read. Every once in a while you repeat words or phrases in a short span and get a little redundant, but that's about all I can think of at the moment regarding constructive criticism in that regard. Overall, this is a wonderful story so far, and I'm so glad I have much more to read! :D
2/26 c1 Feeling Schadenfreude
Daaaaamn what a start! Got me hooked.

Few grammar mistakes made this overall easy to read so far, and the plot of the chapter was like a slap in the face. Great start. Can't wait to see where this goes! :D
11/9/2021 c22 YukinaBlueRose
Real Life is important, and comes first, but . . . It's been YEARS.
I LOVE this story!
PLEASE don't abandon it!
7/19/2021 c23 8FriendlyNeighborhoodImbecille
This is one of my favourite stories on this site. I have a little list of stories I like to plug into a text to speech app and this is one of them. I’ve probably listened to it around 6 times already, and yet I still freak out at the last cliffhanger every time even though I know it’s there. I’m so glad you posted this even if it never got finished.

-Jackson
3/24/2021 c1 I can cry you a river
The utter pain when you realize you’ve committed your whole day to reading a story you’re heavily invested in...only to find out it hasn’t been updated in 3 years...I really do hate myself sometimes
5/8/2020 c23 Thepuppylover1
I just reread this story once again and I was wondering when do you think you will be able to publish the rewrite?
As always, your story is captivating no matter how many times I read it. Each time my heart hurts just as much, and yes, I cry a lot in this.
Anyway, I hope you are well with this virus. Stay safe Author-chan!
4/12/2020 c17 10kattythingz
Did you hear the sound of a dying animal? that's me.
4/12/2020 c10 kattythingz
I got a cavity oh man
2/4/2020 c23 YukinaBlueRose
I LOVE this story! OXD
PLEASE don't abandon this story!
2/4/2020 c17 YukinaBlueRose
O.O ... Danny is basically a combination of ALL of Bruce's kids. ... O.O
I LOVE this story! ! ! ! OXD
12/9/2019 c22 11PhoenixWarriorFox88
The musical is Be More Chill.
12/2/2019 c11 18KillgarraghForever
I really hate the GIW and Jack in this. It's their fault Danny's like this, all untrusting, cause of the psychological impact of what they did to him. Selling him to the GIW and the GIW themselves probably doing Zeus knows what experiments. So, yeah, fuck them.
12/2/2019 c8 KillgarraghForever
I swear... This place is nickname city.
12/2/2019 c6 KillgarraghForever
Gods, are the Cape Club blind as well?
12/2/2019 c3 KillgarraghForever
Yeah. Otherwise it'd be a pretty rubbish story about Danny meeting Bats, wouldn't it? So, yeah, if they meet again that'd be amazhang!
This fic is really cool!
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