for The Calling Storm4/12/2017 c1 Baconaddict
Sooo, it's been more than a month. Where is chapter 2? WHERE IS IT!? I know neither me nor any of you other readers truly need it, but we DESPERATELY want the second chapter.
Writing is great, and like you mentioned the Shinto pantheon is really kind of ignored in canon so it will be very interesting to see how you work with them considering you don't really have much canon to follow and thus more freedom on what to write. I think you did a good job with the characterization of the Shinto gods, powerful and god-like but with personal quirks to go with them and all the harmony of nails on a chalkboard when it comes to interacting with each other. At least Sasuke is used to putting up with shit like that, should make the transition a little easier.
VERY curious as to how the Narutoverse and the DXD verse will be connected here considering how much of the Naruto world is based off of Shinto mythology. Not to mention the fact that Amaterasu said that Sasuke even looked exactly like her brother; that HAS to be explained.
Sasuke is certainly going to drop some jaws among the Shinto gods because even discounting the whole "Susano'o is back but reincarnated" factor, he can use the Amaterasu flames, which I am going to assume is an ability that should be exclusively hers in the DXD verse. Not to mention Sasuke has the Rinnegan and all of it's abilities which I am damn sure no one in the DXD world has come across. Also if Sasuke is somehow connected to Susano'o will he be able to learn abilities affiliated with said god such as control over seas and storms?
Also the phrase "he's on his way back to godhood but he's still inherently human right now" needs to be addressed. I have no idea how Sasuke could become a god, Kaguya could only claim to become one after eating the God Tree chakra fruit. Even her two sons were still mortal and died of old age without becoming gods. Though whether that was due to them not being able to make that ascent or not trying is up for debate I suppose.
Also does Amaterasu have black or red hair? It's red at the end of the chapter and black at the beginning.
That about covers it aside from the reminder to work hard at whatever university you are at so you have enough spare time to write the next chapter everyone wants to see SO F*$%ING BADLY!
Sooo, it's been more than a month. Where is chapter 2? WHERE IS IT!? I know neither me nor any of you other readers truly need it, but we DESPERATELY want the second chapter.
Writing is great, and like you mentioned the Shinto pantheon is really kind of ignored in canon so it will be very interesting to see how you work with them considering you don't really have much canon to follow and thus more freedom on what to write. I think you did a good job with the characterization of the Shinto gods, powerful and god-like but with personal quirks to go with them and all the harmony of nails on a chalkboard when it comes to interacting with each other. At least Sasuke is used to putting up with shit like that, should make the transition a little easier.
VERY curious as to how the Narutoverse and the DXD verse will be connected here considering how much of the Naruto world is based off of Shinto mythology. Not to mention the fact that Amaterasu said that Sasuke even looked exactly like her brother; that HAS to be explained.
Sasuke is certainly going to drop some jaws among the Shinto gods because even discounting the whole "Susano'o is back but reincarnated" factor, he can use the Amaterasu flames, which I am going to assume is an ability that should be exclusively hers in the DXD verse. Not to mention Sasuke has the Rinnegan and all of it's abilities which I am damn sure no one in the DXD world has come across. Also if Sasuke is somehow connected to Susano'o will he be able to learn abilities affiliated with said god such as control over seas and storms?
Also the phrase "he's on his way back to godhood but he's still inherently human right now" needs to be addressed. I have no idea how Sasuke could become a god, Kaguya could only claim to become one after eating the God Tree chakra fruit. Even her two sons were still mortal and died of old age without becoming gods. Though whether that was due to them not being able to make that ascent or not trying is up for debate I suppose.
Also does Amaterasu have black or red hair? It's red at the end of the chapter and black at the beginning.
That about covers it aside from the reminder to work hard at whatever university you are at so you have enough spare time to write the next chapter everyone wants to see SO F*$%ING BADLY!
64/2/2017 c1 Leaf1337
Well then, let me just say that you have easily caught my attention.
The idea of Sasuke being mistaken for another god is an interesting idea, especially with how you have things set up to go. I do wonder how does he compare to other beings of the setting though, having little knowledge of the other setting.
Still having him explore the world as well as make ripples and changes to it will be a great read, one that I hope to see more of in the future. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Well then, let me just say that you have easily caught my attention.
The idea of Sasuke being mistaken for another god is an interesting idea, especially with how you have things set up to go. I do wonder how does he compare to other beings of the setting though, having little knowledge of the other setting.
Still having him explore the world as well as make ripples and changes to it will be a great read, one that I hope to see more of in the future. I eagerly await the next chapter.
3/28/2017 c1 roshane
I can't wait to see how sasuke fears in this new world the first real fight should be interesting
I can't wait to see how sasuke fears in this new world the first real fight should be interesting
3/24/2017 c1 Lord-Itachi123
This is a fantastic start to the story and I liked the way you used sasuke and anemonika . So update please !
This is a fantastic start to the story and I liked the way you used sasuke and anemonika . So update please !
3/23/2017 c1 The Sixth Day of Division
This story seems really fun. I hope Sasuke isn't actually a reincarnation of Susanoo. I think it would be more interesting if he was the au version of Susanoo. Similar, but ultimately different. I also hope Amaterasu is not abusive for comedic effect like a lot of anime female tsundere seem to be.
I'm really interested to read more and I think this fic could become really popular.
This story seems really fun. I hope Sasuke isn't actually a reincarnation of Susanoo. I think it would be more interesting if he was the au version of Susanoo. Similar, but ultimately different. I also hope Amaterasu is not abusive for comedic effect like a lot of anime female tsundere seem to be.
I'm really interested to read more and I think this fic could become really popular.
3/14/2017 c1 piddle
good chapter is sasuke gonna get his items back from when he was sussano like the totsuka sword and kusanagi
good chapter is sasuke gonna get his items back from when he was sussano like the totsuka sword and kusanagi
3/15/2017 c1 Blinded in a bolthole
Damn. Even as I got closer to the end I was crossing my finger and hoping that there would be a chapter 2 ready.
You could also have used Orochimaru and Nagato who are sealed inside Itachi's Susano'o's sealing sword but that's neither here nor there. I wonder why nobody else decided to use Sasuke's space-time Ninjutsu to send him to another world and for some reason they only send Naruto. I love the guy as any fan would but most of the time it was just... forced.
Looking forward to seeing Sasuke, the Reincarnated Indra (But silly little brother you are not from Indian Pantheon and... you do realize I wear a Hogoromo, right?) in action in the world of goofy idiots and perverts.
Damn. Even as I got closer to the end I was crossing my finger and hoping that there would be a chapter 2 ready.
You could also have used Orochimaru and Nagato who are sealed inside Itachi's Susano'o's sealing sword but that's neither here nor there. I wonder why nobody else decided to use Sasuke's space-time Ninjutsu to send him to another world and for some reason they only send Naruto. I love the guy as any fan would but most of the time it was just... forced.
Looking forward to seeing Sasuke, the Reincarnated Indra (But silly little brother you are not from Indian Pantheon and... you do realize I wear a Hogoromo, right?) in action in the world of goofy idiots and perverts.
3/12/2017 c1 yibbles
Awesomeness! Update soon!
Awesomeness! Update soon!
3/8/2017 c1 Sandwich
Yknow now that I look more into this and sasuke's abilities I can understand why yasaka would mistake him for a reincarnation of susanoo (unless he is a reincarnation of susanoo in this story)
Yknow now that I look more into this and sasuke's abilities I can understand why yasaka would mistake him for a reincarnation of susanoo (unless he is a reincarnation of susanoo in this story)
3/8/2017 c1 Guest
So much promise... I need more!
So much promise... I need more!
3/4/2017 c1 feic.flame
From what I've read now, I think I'll enjoy this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
From what I've read now, I think I'll enjoy this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.