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3Zacchaeus the Cheater
Awesome start! Has a few inconsistencies but nothing a little editing won't fix. Will be waiting for more.
3Zacchaeus the CheaterAwesome start! Has a few inconsistencies but nothing a little editing won't fix. Will be waiting for more.
2/22/2017 c1 Cookizilla
Oooooooh. This story has definitely caught my interest. *-*
I'm glad you used Sasuke as the crossover-character; all the Naruto-fics around the fandom get stale after awhile, to be honest. Anyway, good job with the first chapter! I like your portrayal of Amaterasu, and Sasuke's character seems on track so far. I get why people hate him- he is kind of a dick- but I like that you acknowledged that he may be just a bit traumatized from having his entire family slaughtered by his older brother whom he discovered was not truly at fault only after he killed him back. And you did it without the fangirl-y justification thing too! I'll admit I'm bias towards anti-heroes as well; they're more fun than the typical Shounen protagonist.
Welp. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
Oooooooh. This story has definitely caught my interest. *-*
I'm glad you used Sasuke as the crossover-character; all the Naruto-fics around the fandom get stale after awhile, to be honest. Anyway, good job with the first chapter! I like your portrayal of Amaterasu, and Sasuke's character seems on track so far. I get why people hate him- he is kind of a dick- but I like that you acknowledged that he may be just a bit traumatized from having his entire family slaughtered by his older brother whom he discovered was not truly at fault only after he killed him back. And you did it without the fangirl-y justification thing too! I'll admit I'm bias towards anti-heroes as well; they're more fun than the typical Shounen protagonist.
Welp. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
2/20/2017 c1 Guest
Still confuse about the power scaling sasuke post war 2 years is at least 2 times planetary but idk i just watch a youtuber called seththeprogrammer and watch his video
Still confuse about the power scaling sasuke post war 2 years is at least 2 times planetary but idk i just watch a youtuber called seththeprogrammer and watch his video
2/22/2017 c1 5allen Vth
I can see Ophis becoming very interested in Sasuke if she knows he survived a confrontation with her sworn enemy. At least he's one of the top strongest, the Shinto Gods certainly received a powerful ally. Now let's see if having a new sister is enough to make him care to help them instead of trying to get back to his own world.
5allen VthI can see Ophis becoming very interested in Sasuke if she knows he survived a confrontation with her sworn enemy. At least he's one of the top strongest, the Shinto Gods certainly received a powerful ally. Now let's see if having a new sister is enough to make him care to help them instead of trying to get back to his own world.
2/20/2017 c1 TheW1z4rd
I have to say I'm really looking forward to see this story grow. Sasuke-centric fics are a rarity. Ones of really good quality even more so. I love the fact that you're focusing on a faction that has yet to be explored in the anime. I don't have access to the light novels so I don't know how much air time the Shinto faction gets. I am eager to see what sort of havoc Sasuke is going to wreak on the DxD verse. Keep up the great work and I hope to see this story progress.
I have to say I'm really looking forward to see this story grow. Sasuke-centric fics are a rarity. Ones of really good quality even more so. I love the fact that you're focusing on a faction that has yet to be explored in the anime. I don't have access to the light novels so I don't know how much air time the Shinto faction gets. I am eager to see what sort of havoc Sasuke is going to wreak on the DxD verse. Keep up the great work and I hope to see this story progress.
2/20/2017 c1 Unwanted Guest
Very interesting first chapter, I'd say. Is this before or after The Last in term of time frame? Which a wierd question to ask. Looking forward to more as you reeled me in with a very, very nice first chapter.
Very interesting first chapter, I'd say. Is this before or after The Last in term of time frame? Which a wierd question to ask. Looking forward to more as you reeled me in with a very, very nice first chapter.
2/22/2017 c1 Blades of Fury
Finally another Sasuke fanfic that actually seems pretty decent. It'll be interesting to see how you characterise good old Sasuke. Good job on not following the usual cliches and using one of the lesser known factions.
BTW Sasuke is cross-dominant because he punches and uses chidori with his left hand and wields his sword and writes with his right hand.
Anyways u should check out a Sasuke centric fiction by Illusionary Reality called Devil's Dark Knight-Revamp. It's a cross over with High school DxD and I'm pretty it has the best characterisation of Sasuke in fanfics even compared to Kishimoto.
Finally another Sasuke fanfic that actually seems pretty decent. It'll be interesting to see how you characterise good old Sasuke. Good job on not following the usual cliches and using one of the lesser known factions.
BTW Sasuke is cross-dominant because he punches and uses chidori with his left hand and wields his sword and writes with his right hand.
Anyways u should check out a Sasuke centric fiction by Illusionary Reality called Devil's Dark Knight-Revamp. It's a cross over with High school DxD and I'm pretty it has the best characterisation of Sasuke in fanfics even compared to Kishimoto.