for Silver Tongue7/11/2024 c3 
4EraSwap
Damn, I wish you wrote more stories. ive enjoyed every piece of work youve put out. I'm even considering watching the shows youve written fanfics anout that i havent seen yet just to read your work. Its been awhile since ive been so excited to read a story~ fanfic or otherwise.
4EraSwapDamn, I wish you wrote more stories. ive enjoyed every piece of work youve put out. I'm even considering watching the shows youve written fanfics anout that i havent seen yet just to read your work. Its been awhile since ive been so excited to read a story~ fanfic or otherwise.
5/19/2024 c10 Guest
T~T so good
T~T so good
4/25/2024 c10 PuffyGasp
Uh... THIS IS REALLY REALLY GOOD!
For an improvised story... THIS ROCKS! I'm not even a fan of self-insert stories, but this one is perfect. The concept of Lex having a daughter helping the Light in the background while juggling a regular life is fascinating, but the added mystery of Cade's knowledge of the greater narrative, her reluctancy, her accidental relationships with the team members (which were all so so good btw), and... WOW!
Its so perfectly intriguing. Angsty, in all the right ways, wholesome at times, and even slightly suspenseful too. I'm pulled into the world of Season 1 (back when the show was good imo) when I read this. I can't put my finger on how you did it, but this feels so effortlessly Young Justicey..
Cade is an amazingly written protagonist. She's really freaky smart but she doesnt feel arrogant and annoying. She's relatable. But then there's this odd sense that I don't quite know what she's capable of. She's forced to do things she doesn't want to, yet is a little too good at doing them. I feel bad for her, but I also don't fully trust her. She's... an anti-hero! One I can get behind (a couple of feet behind).
I also feel dread at her relationship with Luthor. I like the idea of him having a parent child relationship with someone (that isn't abusive), but I feel with all this double agency stuff its only a matter of time before he catches on and things get hostile. He's such a manipulative and scary person, I can hardly imagine her every being free from him. Will she even want to in the end?
And lets not forget Mercy! Like wow, I didn't even think she could talk, now she's a mother figure! Excellent. And the new villain team she's leading! What are they gonna be like!?
I'm rambling. I'm sorry. Please please please finish this story. I gotta know what happens next! Or If you really don't want to, at least tell me you won't stop writing in general. You're really talented! Keep up the good work!
9/10!
Uh... THIS IS REALLY REALLY GOOD!
For an improvised story... THIS ROCKS! I'm not even a fan of self-insert stories, but this one is perfect. The concept of Lex having a daughter helping the Light in the background while juggling a regular life is fascinating, but the added mystery of Cade's knowledge of the greater narrative, her reluctancy, her accidental relationships with the team members (which were all so so good btw), and... WOW!
Its so perfectly intriguing. Angsty, in all the right ways, wholesome at times, and even slightly suspenseful too. I'm pulled into the world of Season 1 (back when the show was good imo) when I read this. I can't put my finger on how you did it, but this feels so effortlessly Young Justicey..
Cade is an amazingly written protagonist. She's really freaky smart but she doesnt feel arrogant and annoying. She's relatable. But then there's this odd sense that I don't quite know what she's capable of. She's forced to do things she doesn't want to, yet is a little too good at doing them. I feel bad for her, but I also don't fully trust her. She's... an anti-hero! One I can get behind (a couple of feet behind).
I also feel dread at her relationship with Luthor. I like the idea of him having a parent child relationship with someone (that isn't abusive), but I feel with all this double agency stuff its only a matter of time before he catches on and things get hostile. He's such a manipulative and scary person, I can hardly imagine her every being free from him. Will she even want to in the end?
And lets not forget Mercy! Like wow, I didn't even think she could talk, now she's a mother figure! Excellent. And the new villain team she's leading! What are they gonna be like!?
I'm rambling. I'm sorry. Please please please finish this story. I gotta know what happens next! Or If you really don't want to, at least tell me you won't stop writing in general. You're really talented! Keep up the good work!
9/10!
3/29/2024 c10 Sordidus
It actually wouldn't surprise me if Lex used his DNA to make Cade like he used it to make Connor. He has a bit of a complex. That could also further explain his interest in the "first successful human clone" going beyond that of being intrigued by her human qualities.
Great fic!
It actually wouldn't surprise me if Lex used his DNA to make Cade like he used it to make Connor. He has a bit of a complex. That could also further explain his interest in the "first successful human clone" going beyond that of being intrigued by her human qualities.
Great fic!
8/25/2023 c10 WrongAckount404
Hey, I'm a new reader, and this story is very very cool! It really puts me in the world of this show. I'm especially interested in how the Self-Insert aspect of Cade's character comes into play. I know this story was done on a whim and you've probably lost interest, but you edited your profile this year so that means your still active. I'm just wondering, will this story get an update in the future?
Hey, I'm a new reader, and this story is very very cool! It really puts me in the world of this show. I'm especially interested in how the Self-Insert aspect of Cade's character comes into play. I know this story was done on a whim and you've probably lost interest, but you edited your profile this year so that means your still active. I'm just wondering, will this story get an update in the future?
4/25/2022 c10 EmiliaKyuchi
Very interesting to see the villain team in action. I’m curious on how Cade got them all. Did she just hire them?
Also just read the whole story and I love it. Fantastic work and thank you for sharing!
Very interesting to see the villain team in action. I’m curious on how Cade got them all. Did she just hire them?
Also just read the whole story and I love it. Fantastic work and thank you for sharing!
4/25/2022 c9 EmiliaKyuchi
Oof gonna be a bit harder to “get out” now that her status as Luthor’s ward is known (which is probably the intention). Fantastic chapter!
Oof gonna be a bit harder to “get out” now that her status as Luthor’s ward is known (which is probably the intention). Fantastic chapter!
4/25/2022 c8 EmiliaKyuchi
Loving all the character interactions and seeing how Cade tries to juggle things.
Loving all the character interactions and seeing how Cade tries to juggle things.
4/25/2022 c3 EmiliaKyuchi
Interesting to see Cade running into more of the young justice/ soon-to-be-heros.
Interesting to see Cade running into more of the young justice/ soon-to-be-heros.