for A Hero's Last Cry6/5 c32 Erica William
Wow, this is absolutely incredible. The amount of detail and creativity here really stands out. I can tell you’ve put a lot of thought into everything from the character design and expressions to the overall composition and mood . It’s not just visually striking but also tells a story, which is something I really admire.
The way you’ve captured emotion, movement, and personality in your work is honestly next-level. It’s always inspiring to see creators who are so passionate about what they do. That passion really shows in every line and color choice. Whether this is part of a bigger project or just a standalone idea, it truly deserves more attention. Keep creating and sharing more. This kind of work adds so much to the creative community.
Wow, this is absolutely incredible. The amount of detail and creativity here really stands out. I can tell you’ve put a lot of thought into everything from the character design and expressions to the overall composition and mood . It’s not just visually striking but also tells a story, which is something I really admire.
The way you’ve captured emotion, movement, and personality in your work is honestly next-level. It’s always inspiring to see creators who are so passionate about what they do. That passion really shows in every line and color choice. Whether this is part of a bigger project or just a standalone idea, it truly deserves more attention. Keep creating and sharing more. This kind of work adds so much to the creative community.
5/19 c31 EricaWilliam0
I just finished reading your latest story honestly, it was a really engaging read! I loved how the characters felt so alive and the flow of the plot kept me hooked. You’ve got a great way with storytelling.
I’m a digital artist and I work on 2D/3D character designs and comic adaptations. I think your story would look amazing in visual form.
If you’re open to it , please check your PM I’d love the chance to collaborate with you!
I just finished reading your latest story honestly, it was a really engaging read! I loved how the characters felt so alive and the flow of the plot kept me hooked. You’ve got a great way with storytelling.
I’m a digital artist and I work on 2D/3D character designs and comic adaptations. I think your story would look amazing in visual form.
If you’re open to it , please check your PM I’d love the chance to collaborate with you!
5/6 c31 
78Moon and Blossoms
It has been over a week since I read this chapter, thus sorry for the late review.
Ugh, the Baihu clan up for it again? Its defi them who would've aised the ruckus. I'm glad that Mystel came for aid, hopefully not too late.
Bryan and Ming Ming make a cute couple!
Fingers crossed for bladebreakers reunion (hopefully?) All credits to Olivier. Although he wasn't actively participating, he played a major role to the plot.
Waiting for next chapter, and sorry again for the delayee review.
-Niki.
78Moon and BlossomsIt has been over a week since I read this chapter, thus sorry for the late review.
Ugh, the Baihu clan up for it again? Its defi them who would've aised the ruckus. I'm glad that Mystel came for aid, hopefully not too late.
Bryan and Ming Ming make a cute couple!
Fingers crossed for bladebreakers reunion (hopefully?) All credits to Olivier. Although he wasn't actively participating, he played a major role to the plot.
Waiting for next chapter, and sorry again for the delayee review.
-Niki.
4/1 c30 Moon and Blossoms
Finally, I read the chapter. Was thinking of reading it for a long time though.
I knew Miguel does have a flexible understanding. And Emily knew the same. He is too good. He will find a good partner for him in thr future.
The kiss between Michael and Emily was steamy! But the move was damn quick than I expected. I want more of Rick's teasing to it!
Hiro, I sympathize with you given your condition, but you were distant with Tyson during several occasions. I understand it might be a way of helping him become stronger, but you should have that impression on him. Your dad is obviously an archaeologist and he works for the economy of your family. Although he worked for Boris, so it's still like father and like son.
Shit, it was eww when the figure kissed Kai xd. Not rlly a figure, but yeah, his other side of his mind and heart. It's true Kai was never a man of words, but he has a lot of things to tell, like even a basic apology. He has used people though, won't refuse it. Maybe, it was his way of surviving.
It was cute to see Bryan and Ming Ming together! I would love to read mkre about them!
Nice chapter!
-Niki.
Finally, I read the chapter. Was thinking of reading it for a long time though.
I knew Miguel does have a flexible understanding. And Emily knew the same. He is too good. He will find a good partner for him in thr future.
The kiss between Michael and Emily was steamy! But the move was damn quick than I expected. I want more of Rick's teasing to it!
Hiro, I sympathize with you given your condition, but you were distant with Tyson during several occasions. I understand it might be a way of helping him become stronger, but you should have that impression on him. Your dad is obviously an archaeologist and he works for the economy of your family. Although he worked for Boris, so it's still like father and like son.
Shit, it was eww when the figure kissed Kai xd. Not rlly a figure, but yeah, his other side of his mind and heart. It's true Kai was never a man of words, but he has a lot of things to tell, like even a basic apology. He has used people though, won't refuse it. Maybe, it was his way of surviving.
It was cute to see Bryan and Ming Ming together! I would love to read mkre about them!
Nice chapter!
-Niki.
3/22 c1 psychlover95
Will chapter 29, 30 and other be released would love to know what happens i hope tyson will be okay we all need him to return safe and sound so he can save Kai and keep his promise to Hilary i hope this is dealt with. I hope Tyson and Hilary live peaceful lives after this as a couple and I hope that Kai, Max, Ray and Daichi also have peaceful lives as well and are truly happy
Will chapter 29, 30 and other be released would love to know what happens i hope tyson will be okay we all need him to return safe and sound so he can save Kai and keep his promise to Hilary i hope this is dealt with. I hope Tyson and Hilary live peaceful lives after this as a couple and I hope that Kai, Max, Ray and Daichi also have peaceful lives as well and are truly happy
3/2 c29 Moon and Blossoms
Phew, caught up with this chapter, finally.
I really hope that this btch Donna just dies and rots in hell. She is annoying me more than the Leviathan. I don't want the White Tigers dead for good.
Good to see Salima working for such people in the Church. It's true that they all have been manipulated by adults for their selfishness. I can see you added a little TalaxSalima, although not romantic. You were mentioning about them as a ship as an idea I know lol
You won't believe me but I cracked at Mariam's sense of humor. I bet they will have a splendid dinner.
Loved the little Robert and Julia there. I am hoping to see some chemistry for them.
Poor Olihe is strainig himself. But he is the useful asset the entire world has now. I'm glad he has realized the difficulties of others too such as the man selling his house for cancer treatment.
Tyson facing hallucinations must be more than what a man can tolerate. Dragoon will have your back. But who is the mysterious man?
Nice chapter!
-Niki.
Phew, caught up with this chapter, finally.
I really hope that this btch Donna just dies and rots in hell. She is annoying me more than the Leviathan. I don't want the White Tigers dead for good.
Good to see Salima working for such people in the Church. It's true that they all have been manipulated by adults for their selfishness. I can see you added a little TalaxSalima, although not romantic. You were mentioning about them as a ship as an idea I know lol
You won't believe me but I cracked at Mariam's sense of humor. I bet they will have a splendid dinner.
Loved the little Robert and Julia there. I am hoping to see some chemistry for them.
Poor Olihe is strainig himself. But he is the useful asset the entire world has now. I'm glad he has realized the difficulties of others too such as the man selling his house for cancer treatment.
Tyson facing hallucinations must be more than what a man can tolerate. Dragoon will have your back. But who is the mysterious man?
Nice chapter!
-Niki.
2/6 c2 billsazguard
Hello buddy, I hope you are doing great, I just read A Hero's Last Cry and am now hooked your story is so good! I would very much love to create a comic or an artwork representing it, showing its depth in details and emotion in bright colors. I'm open for commissions, can offer sweet prices, and guarantee high-quality work. So, if that sounds interesting to you, let's make something amazing_
Here is my discord: yushishigawa
Twitter: blogmepaula
Hello buddy, I hope you are doing great, I just read A Hero's Last Cry and am now hooked your story is so good! I would very much love to create a comic or an artwork representing it, showing its depth in details and emotion in bright colors. I'm open for commissions, can offer sweet prices, and guarantee high-quality work. So, if that sounds interesting to you, let's make something amazing_
Here is my discord: yushishigawa
Twitter: blogmepaula
1/21 c1 Mitsuki Katagiri
Howdy!
I recently read your captivating story A Hero's Last Cry and found it absolutely intriguing! Certain parts of the story sparked my imagination, and I couldn’t help but think it would translate beautifully into a comic. I’m a paid artist and open to commissions, so I’d love the opportunity to collaborate with you if you're interested. This is my first time reaching out to an author, so I hope you don’t mind if I’ve made any mistakes in my message. If you also feel this story has the potential to become an amazing comic, feel free to reach out to me on Twitter or Discord. My socials are listed below:
Twitter: FollowerGato
Discord: hanavic1
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Howdy!
I recently read your captivating story A Hero's Last Cry and found it absolutely intriguing! Certain parts of the story sparked my imagination, and I couldn’t help but think it would translate beautifully into a comic. I’m a paid artist and open to commissions, so I’d love the opportunity to collaborate with you if you're interested. This is my first time reaching out to an author, so I hope you don’t mind if I’ve made any mistakes in my message. If you also feel this story has the potential to become an amazing comic, feel free to reach out to me on Twitter or Discord. My socials are listed below:
Twitter: FollowerGato
Discord: hanavic1
Looking forward to hearing from you!
1/19 c28 Moon and Blossoms
Caught up with this chapter as well. Had to visit my mom's native town for a function, and I'm returning home. Got bored so why not read fic?
In this chapter the perspective of almost half the teams were mentioned.
Oh god, Kai is bleeding like hell. Who is that woman?
It was interesting to see the BB boys were going out of the box and try something different. Glad.
Poor OliverHe is always a baby to me. But I hope he leads a better life now.
I'm up for how the dispute between Bai Hu and the White Tigers go further. I'm glad Mystel and Mariah got into contact somehow if not fully.
Daichi joined? Fingers crossed!
Amazing chapter!
-Niki.
Caught up with this chapter as well. Had to visit my mom's native town for a function, and I'm returning home. Got bored so why not read fic?
In this chapter the perspective of almost half the teams were mentioned.
Oh god, Kai is bleeding like hell. Who is that woman?
It was interesting to see the BB boys were going out of the box and try something different. Glad.
Poor OliverHe is always a baby to me. But I hope he leads a better life now.
I'm up for how the dispute between Bai Hu and the White Tigers go further. I'm glad Mystel and Mariah got into contact somehow if not fully.
Daichi joined? Fingers crossed!
Amazing chapter!
-Niki.
1/14 c1 Obsidian Dreamweaver
Dear,
I hope this message finds you well!
I recently had the privilege of reading your story, "A Hero's Last Cry", and I must say, I was truly moved by it. The way you’ve crafted the characters, emotions, and world is simply beautiful—it’s the kind of story that feels like it was meant to be brought to life in a new form.
As an artist with a passion for comics, manga, 3D art, and animation-inspired designs, I couldn’t help but imagine how your story could translate into these visual mediums. I feel that your work has great potential to captivate audiences in an entirely new way, whether it’s through an illustrated comic, a manga adaptation, or even as part of an animation or 3D visual project.
I work exclusively on a commission basis and would be deeply honored if you would consider me to bring your story to life in one of these formats. If you think this idea might resonate, I’d be grateful for the opportunity to discuss it further with you. You can reach me at:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Twitter: lydiacrazy88
DeviantArt: lydiacrazy8
Email: lydiacrazy88 gmail. com
Thank you so much for creating such an inspiring and incredible story. I truly believe it deserves to be shared in every possible way, and it would be a privilege to help make that happen.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Warm regards,
Obsidian Dreamweaver.
Dear,
I hope this message finds you well!
I recently had the privilege of reading your story, "A Hero's Last Cry", and I must say, I was truly moved by it. The way you’ve crafted the characters, emotions, and world is simply beautiful—it’s the kind of story that feels like it was meant to be brought to life in a new form.
As an artist with a passion for comics, manga, 3D art, and animation-inspired designs, I couldn’t help but imagine how your story could translate into these visual mediums. I feel that your work has great potential to captivate audiences in an entirely new way, whether it’s through an illustrated comic, a manga adaptation, or even as part of an animation or 3D visual project.
I work exclusively on a commission basis and would be deeply honored if you would consider me to bring your story to life in one of these formats. If you think this idea might resonate, I’d be grateful for the opportunity to discuss it further with you. You can reach me at:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Twitter: lydiacrazy88
DeviantArt: lydiacrazy8
Email: lydiacrazy88 gmail. com
Thank you so much for creating such an inspiring and incredible story. I truly believe it deserves to be shared in every possible way, and it would be a privilege to help make that happen.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Warm regards,
Obsidian Dreamweaver.
12/15/2024 c27 Moon and Blossoms
Finally, I've caught up. I am glad I had holidays to catch up.
It's sad to see how the bladebreakers are in a dilemma. They have no knowledge of Kai and Tyson's whereabouts. At least Tyson is still there around. I hope the team gets to reunite at the end.
Daichi's help is mandatory though. He has been with the team and Tyson chose him as a tag partner during the last workd championships. Anyways I am glad that he is coming to help the team now.
Raul and Julia joining in? Excited to know that.
Nice chapter!
-Niki.
Finally, I've caught up. I am glad I had holidays to catch up.
It's sad to see how the bladebreakers are in a dilemma. They have no knowledge of Kai and Tyson's whereabouts. At least Tyson is still there around. I hope the team gets to reunite at the end.
Daichi's help is mandatory though. He has been with the team and Tyson chose him as a tag partner during the last workd championships. Anyways I am glad that he is coming to help the team now.
Raul and Julia joining in? Excited to know that.
Nice chapter!
-Niki.
12/14/2024 c26 Moon and Blossoms
I got to read this chapter as well today. Hope I am entertaining you with reviews incase if you're bored.
So, given the situation both Tyson and Kai are at risk in this moment. And it was depressing to see the team almost wailing for them. I hope at least Tyson can make it out, if not Kai. I hope that the both make it out at the most. Yet I have a bas feeling, especially Kai.
Well, is Pierre an OC? I am not sure if I have properly followed anything about him in the story. But his death was sadLet's see how they all manage this dire situation. I'd like to see the involvement of Brooklyn, Ozuma and Robert too (?).
Good job!
-Niki.
I got to read this chapter as well today. Hope I am entertaining you with reviews incase if you're bored.
So, given the situation both Tyson and Kai are at risk in this moment. And it was depressing to see the team almost wailing for them. I hope at least Tyson can make it out, if not Kai. I hope that the both make it out at the most. Yet I have a bas feeling, especially Kai.
Well, is Pierre an OC? I am not sure if I have properly followed anything about him in the story. But his death was sadLet's see how they all manage this dire situation. I'd like to see the involvement of Brooklyn, Ozuma and Robert too (?).
Good job!
-Niki.
12/13/2024 c25 Moon and Blossoms
Phew, why did it take so much time to complete this chapter? I'm sorry it got delayedThe battle was enthralling. Tyson was true, that poisoned minds can never have the victory. You have to have the raw beyblading skills I'm glad that Tyson became the world champion for the fourth time. Three cheers!
So, do you mean that Kai is going to take a great risk by sealing the Leviathan? That part was so emotional. I am not sure where this is all going to lead to, but I need to have my figners crossed.
Nice chapter!
-Niki.
Phew, why did it take so much time to complete this chapter? I'm sorry it got delayedThe battle was enthralling. Tyson was true, that poisoned minds can never have the victory. You have to have the raw beyblading skills I'm glad that Tyson became the world champion for the fourth time. Three cheers!
So, do you mean that Kai is going to take a great risk by sealing the Leviathan? That part was so emotional. I am not sure where this is all going to lead to, but I need to have my figners crossed.
Nice chapter!
-Niki.
11/24/2024 c24 Moon and Blossoms
Finally, was able to read the battles. Three battles together. I wonder if it was beyblading or a real war. If watched as a movie or a netflix series, this entire story could be blood chilling I swear to god.
I expected either Rei or Max would lose. Poor Rei became the sacrificial goat for his teammates ro win, but my instincts tell that someone else is gonna become that now. And I think I know who. The symbolism were goodfamine, war and disease. But, I think Douglas will pay for this because it's a crime to have such dangerous bit-beasts inculcated in beyblades. Any blader could just run for money. But, at the end, even the lackluster of skill to handle the bit-beasts exist, then it's of no use in a way. The blader is just there telling names of powers without breaking a sweat. The true spirit of beyblading won't come, and Max just proved the point. Even the others.
Great chapter!
-Niki.
Finally, was able to read the battles. Three battles together. I wonder if it was beyblading or a real war. If watched as a movie or a netflix series, this entire story could be blood chilling I swear to god.
I expected either Rei or Max would lose. Poor Rei became the sacrificial goat for his teammates ro win, but my instincts tell that someone else is gonna become that now. And I think I know who. The symbolism were goodfamine, war and disease. But, I think Douglas will pay for this because it's a crime to have such dangerous bit-beasts inculcated in beyblades. Any blader could just run for money. But, at the end, even the lackluster of skill to handle the bit-beasts exist, then it's of no use in a way. The blader is just there telling names of powers without breaking a sweat. The true spirit of beyblading won't come, and Max just proved the point. Even the others.
Great chapter!
-Niki.
11/19/2024 c23 Moon and Blossoms
I got to read this chapter too, today.
I feel bad for Michael, for having messed uo but eventually had his mistake realized. Yet, it was too late, Mikey. I'm still looking up to their relationship.
It was interesting to see the inputs from different bladers. Ozuma and Robert were definitely needed. Mariam's humor was just top notch. Thanks for adding spice to it, good Giancarlo. Thankfully, Kai and Max are just treated. But how would they manage their battles?
The scene between Rei and Salima was ethereal and beautiful! Their future plsns are good. Ditch the village elders for now XD
The ritual of the clan is quite scary. Cows are very sacred fir us hindus. We never have beef damn.
Boris to make amends? Whst is he really upto? Looking up to that.
Aww, the TyHil scene melts my heart! *lovey dovey eyes*
The wholesome moments are indeed needed before the catastrophe.
Amazing chapter!
-Niki.
I got to read this chapter too, today.
I feel bad for Michael, for having messed uo but eventually had his mistake realized. Yet, it was too late, Mikey. I'm still looking up to their relationship.
It was interesting to see the inputs from different bladers. Ozuma and Robert were definitely needed. Mariam's humor was just top notch. Thanks for adding spice to it, good Giancarlo. Thankfully, Kai and Max are just treated. But how would they manage their battles?
The scene between Rei and Salima was ethereal and beautiful! Their future plsns are good. Ditch the village elders for now XD
The ritual of the clan is quite scary. Cows are very sacred fir us hindus. We never have beef damn.
Boris to make amends? Whst is he really upto? Looking up to that.
Aww, the TyHil scene melts my heart! *lovey dovey eyes*
The wholesome moments are indeed needed before the catastrophe.
Amazing chapter!
-Niki.