for A Hero's Last Cry9/19 c1 billsazguard
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good,
I just read your story A Hero's Last Cry and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions. I do all sorts of artwork and have some spots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good,
I just read your story A Hero's Last Cry and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions. I do all sorts of artwork and have some spots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
9/18 c1 ZoyeZest
Hi!
I just finished reading "A Hero's Last Cry", and it left a lasting impression. The depth of your characters and the vivid world you’ve created has serious potential for a visual comic. As a professional digital artist, I specialize in transforming stories like yours into engaging visual experiences, and I can already see how the emotions and scenes would come to life on the page.
I’ve worked with many authors to adapt their written works into comics, always making sure to keep the essence of the story front and center. If you're open to it, I'd love to chat more about turning your story into a comic. I can provide more info on pricing and the process—let's collaborate and bring your vision to life.
Best regards,
Baran
Discord : baran59354
Hi!
I just finished reading "A Hero's Last Cry", and it left a lasting impression. The depth of your characters and the vivid world you’ve created has serious potential for a visual comic. As a professional digital artist, I specialize in transforming stories like yours into engaging visual experiences, and I can already see how the emotions and scenes would come to life on the page.
I’ve worked with many authors to adapt their written works into comics, always making sure to keep the essence of the story front and center. If you're open to it, I'd love to chat more about turning your story into a comic. I can provide more info on pricing and the process—let's collaborate and bring your vision to life.
Best regards,
Baran
Discord : baran59354
9/12 c21 
73Moon and Blossoms
Phew, back to reading your season 4 fanfiction. I've been afk off ffn for a while. I did expect the White Tigers to be eliminated by this Bai Hu clan. But ugh, I hate this donna btch. Jusr accept that he doesn't like you so don't force the heck out of him. These buffoons need to give Mystel a free space.
Zeus back? Oooh. I can hear Leviathan in the background damn.
Looking forward to how Kelvin and Rei had their conversation.
Nice!
-Niki.
73Moon and BlossomsPhew, back to reading your season 4 fanfiction. I've been afk off ffn for a while. I did expect the White Tigers to be eliminated by this Bai Hu clan. But ugh, I hate this donna btch. Jusr accept that he doesn't like you so don't force the heck out of him. These buffoons need to give Mystel a free space.
Zeus back? Oooh. I can hear Leviathan in the background damn.
Looking forward to how Kelvin and Rei had their conversation.
Nice!
-Niki.
8/2 c20 Moon and Blossoms
Alright, I had some time to read this chapter. My bus journeys from college to school became boring, so why not read the fic?
I'm goad Hilary lent a helping hand for Tyson. It's not like the best blader out there has to win everytime. they can have their downfalls. The pressure on Tyson is unreal and too much to handle. His team understood him well.
For some reason I do like how the Majestics were supportive of Bladebreakers and warning them then and there. They really deserve so much.I can't wait to see the two most intense battles.
Good job!
-Niki
Alright, I had some time to read this chapter. My bus journeys from college to school became boring, so why not read the fic?
I'm goad Hilary lent a helping hand for Tyson. It's not like the best blader out there has to win everytime. they can have their downfalls. The pressure on Tyson is unreal and too much to handle. His team understood him well.
For some reason I do like how the Majestics were supportive of Bladebreakers and warning them then and there. They really deserve so much.I can't wait to see the two most intense battles.
Good job!
-Niki
7/27 c19 Moon and Blossoms
Alright, such a big chapter but that's amazing. Solid efforts. The battles were written well, just like how it has always been in the show. A special tip for that.
I did expect that Tyson may lose the match, but he has other great battles coming up in which he is going to give his best shot.
Ugh, Dohna... she is pissing me off so much. She is just touching the nerves of Mystel's friends. Bitch, begone. I'm waiting to see her son when he finally gets with Mariah.
Amazing!
-Niki.
Alright, such a big chapter but that's amazing. Solid efforts. The battles were written well, just like how it has always been in the show. A special tip for that.
I did expect that Tyson may lose the match, but he has other great battles coming up in which he is going to give his best shot.
Ugh, Dohna... she is pissing me off so much. She is just touching the nerves of Mystel's friends. Bitch, begone. I'm waiting to see her son when he finally gets with Mariah.
Amazing!
-Niki.
7/27 c18 Moon and Blossoms
I read the chapter yesterday but got time to review just now, phew.
The horsemen wer powerful as demonstrated earlier. Nevertheless, can't wait for the battle between Majestics and the Avengers now, bated for it.
Oh no, jelly much Mikey. But I do agree with Rick though. He is very observant and I believe Emily still does have something for Mikey. Let's see how it goes.
Good job!
-Niki.
I read the chapter yesterday but got time to review just now, phew.
The horsemen wer powerful as demonstrated earlier. Nevertheless, can't wait for the battle between Majestics and the Avengers now, bated for it.
Oh no, jelly much Mikey. But I do agree with Rick though. He is very observant and I believe Emily still does have something for Mikey. Let's see how it goes.
Good job!
-Niki.
7/24 c17 Moon and Blossoms
Alright, I haven't read the remaining chapters as well. Life's been busy, and I hope to catch up with them later.
Logically, Brooklyn would remove the bit-beast off his blade. I know sometimes he can act like this, for his good. Nice to see Monica.
It was a predictable match, and I'm looking up to Tyson and Rei.
Nice job!
-Niki.
Alright, I haven't read the remaining chapters as well. Life's been busy, and I hope to catch up with them later.
Logically, Brooklyn would remove the bit-beast off his blade. I know sometimes he can act like this, for his good. Nice to see Monica.
It was a predictable match, and I'm looking up to Tyson and Rei.
Nice job!
-Niki.
7/13 c16 Moon and Blossoms
Phew, I am back reading your fic again. The past couple of days have been hectic. I'm sorry for the late btwits logical and natural for the bitbeasts to not come out of their blades, considering how broken the Leviathan is. And the bit-beasts are too much for even the bladebreakers to handle. The concept was creative and the team name was unique as well. And, I can't wait to see how these guys are unlocking the full power.
Oliver has his leg amoutated? I feel very sorry for him. But its a wide choice to battle, since this is the inly opportunuity the Majestics have.
So far the best chapter. I'll catch up with the next chapters tomorrow if possible. Great Job and Kudos!
-Niki.
Phew, I am back reading your fic again. The past couple of days have been hectic. I'm sorry for the late btwits logical and natural for the bitbeasts to not come out of their blades, considering how broken the Leviathan is. And the bit-beasts are too much for even the bladebreakers to handle. The concept was creative and the team name was unique as well. And, I can't wait to see how these guys are unlocking the full power.
Oliver has his leg amoutated? I feel very sorry for him. But its a wide choice to battle, since this is the inly opportunuity the Majestics have.
So far the best chapter. I'll catch up with the next chapters tomorrow if possible. Great Job and Kudos!
-Niki.
6/24 c19 DailyTea
Poor Tyson. Been there, I wish I could hug him. Rejection really sucks hard, specially when it comes from someone we admire and rely on, family no less. And losing such an important match didn't help. I hope he receives the help he needs at this moment.
Poor Tyson. Been there, I wish I could hug him. Rejection really sucks hard, specially when it comes from someone we admire and rely on, family no less. And losing such an important match didn't help. I hope he receives the help he needs at this moment.
6/17 c18 DailyTea
That's Emily my girl. You are such a talented scientist and blader and an amazing hardworker, and should definetely NOT stay where you are not appreciated. And Michael deserves the loss and bashing, although I suspect it is only temporary and she will come back to the All Starz since he grew a pair and went after her.
Miguel is such a hot and cute pie.
Who would expect Rick to be such a sensible soul tho?
The last scene with Hiro was heartbreaking and atually got me tearing. Maybe he is treating Tyson this way to make it easier for him to handle the hard news later when the punch comes (it's easier to lose something you've come to hate). Or not?
Thanks for the chapter, I'm looking forward the next one.
That's Emily my girl. You are such a talented scientist and blader and an amazing hardworker, and should definetely NOT stay where you are not appreciated. And Michael deserves the loss and bashing, although I suspect it is only temporary and she will come back to the All Starz since he grew a pair and went after her.
Miguel is such a hot and cute pie.
Who would expect Rick to be such a sensible soul tho?
The last scene with Hiro was heartbreaking and atually got me tearing. Maybe he is treating Tyson this way to make it easier for him to handle the hard news later when the punch comes (it's easier to lose something you've come to hate). Or not?
Thanks for the chapter, I'm looking forward the next one.
6/13 c17 DailyTea
Very engaging story so far. And Brooklyn can have as many migraines as he wants. 8D
I always admire people who is able to take on and control so many character in their story. I envy you for this.
Very engaging story so far. And Brooklyn can have as many migraines as he wants. 8D
I always admire people who is able to take on and control so many character in their story. I envy you for this.
6/4 c15 Guest
Superb.
Superb.
6/4 c15 Moon and Blossoms
I got to read this chapter today itself, and unusally, read it faster xD
Alrighty, the tournament is about to start then. The opening ceremony is very grand. Tyson is just enjoying these moments lol.
Okay, it was the job of the dark bladers then. Kinda suspected that. I am glad Johnny at least realized it now. I'm curious to know about the Leviathan now. I think it was what Ozuma dreamed off in the earlier chapters. And I think Judy and her assistants tried extracting that bit-beast.
Everything is social media now. Beyblading video games? Lol. Tyson was right.
Fingers crossed for the matches. Great job!
-Niki.
I got to read this chapter today itself, and unusally, read it faster xD
Alrighty, the tournament is about to start then. The opening ceremony is very grand. Tyson is just enjoying these moments lol.
Okay, it was the job of the dark bladers then. Kinda suspected that. I am glad Johnny at least realized it now. I'm curious to know about the Leviathan now. I think it was what Ozuma dreamed off in the earlier chapters. And I think Judy and her assistants tried extracting that bit-beast.
Everything is social media now. Beyblading video games? Lol. Tyson was right.
Fingers crossed for the matches. Great job!
-Niki.
6/1 c14 Moon and Blossoms
Finally, I was able to read the chapter.
I enjoyed the plane chapter. Bryan's got a humor and Ian's shot was lit lmfaoo. Kai was savage to put that into his pocket. It's so awkward to have a former friend as a woe in the same flight almost close to the seat xD
Dohna is a bitch lol. But she is a lot interesting than many OCs I've encountered. I hope Mystel gets with Mao.
Brooklyn's pain was too much and he was very vulnerable. Hope he recovers soon. Waiting to see Crusher. Garland is very level-headed. And I can already sense BryanxMingMing here xD.
Great chapter!
-Niki.
Finally, I was able to read the chapter.
I enjoyed the plane chapter. Bryan's got a humor and Ian's shot was lit lmfaoo. Kai was savage to put that into his pocket. It's so awkward to have a former friend as a woe in the same flight almost close to the seat xD
Dohna is a bitch lol. But she is a lot interesting than many OCs I've encountered. I hope Mystel gets with Mao.
Brooklyn's pain was too much and he was very vulnerable. Hope he recovers soon. Waiting to see Crusher. Garland is very level-headed. And I can already sense BryanxMingMing here xD.
Great chapter!
-Niki.