
4/23/2024 c16 bstar1715
You need to rewrite chapter 16 as you didn’t put her in front of mother. It should be her mother not mother.
You need to rewrite chapter 16 as you didn’t put her in front of mother. It should be her mother not mother.
9/2/2023 c20
1Nightwing2013
So this was great. Really disappointing that you left off with this, though. And it’s currently wide open for a sequel, because we all know that Palpatine would not take the secession of thousands of systems lying down without his orchestration.
He would most likely send both Death Squadron (Vader) AND the Seventh fleet (Thrawn) to either reconquer the planet or glass it.

So this was great. Really disappointing that you left off with this, though. And it’s currently wide open for a sequel, because we all know that Palpatine would not take the secession of thousands of systems lying down without his orchestration.
He would most likely send both Death Squadron (Vader) AND the Seventh fleet (Thrawn) to either reconquer the planet or glass it.
8/13/2023 c19 Mr.Macconto
Such a shame this one never got anymore chapters. This is definitely one of the best Rebels AU fics there are on this platform. I hope one day you can find time or motivation to finish it. But if not I wish you well.
Such a shame this one never got anymore chapters. This is definitely one of the best Rebels AU fics there are on this platform. I hope one day you can find time or motivation to finish it. But if not I wish you well.
8/22/2022 c20 Zeno
Ah that feeling of finding a new story, reading through all of it and realizing the author hasn’t been here in 2 years. Hope youre well wherever you are. Wish the story had been completed
Ah that feeling of finding a new story, reading through all of it and realizing the author hasn’t been here in 2 years. Hope youre well wherever you are. Wish the story had been completed
8/19/2022 c20
2Flopple
Amazing story! Great depth of characters and all aspects well-weighted. Glad to see that rebels has some literate fans!

Amazing story! Great depth of characters and all aspects well-weighted. Glad to see that rebels has some literate fans!
4/7/2022 c20
5Fallen-Angel7394
this is beyond amazing, I love this story so much. Please continue. I don't care if it's an epilogue or a whole new book, I just want to keep reading this story because its so good

this is beyond amazing, I love this story so much. Please continue. I don't care if it's an epilogue or a whole new book, I just want to keep reading this story because its so good
7/13/2021 c20 Guest
update
update
2/22/2021 c20 aguy
awwwwww man... a cliffhanger...
could you conclude this in a more wrappy uppy way?
i really liked it otherwise!
awwwwww man... a cliffhanger...
could you conclude this in a more wrappy uppy way?
i really liked it otherwise!
1/24/2021 c1 Tyler Garrett
Ok I’m a huge Star Wars fan and I just want to say that this story is perfect in every way (I’ve actually read it twice)
Ok I’m a huge Star Wars fan and I just want to say that this story is perfect in every way (I’ve actually read it twice)
1/22/2021 c20
2Conor-SWC
This is brilliant, blitzed it all in one sitting.
Held my focus the whole way through, I'd like to suggest there is more mileage in the story, but maybe best to make a new story to deal with the aftermath regarding the Rebellion and the Empire?
The Emperor isn't exactly going to let Mandalorian space become independent, if anything their fight has just begun.
But obviously that's a huge undertaking on your part, so up to you :)
Thanks for writing this beautiful story, I'm looking forward to reading the end!

This is brilliant, blitzed it all in one sitting.
Held my focus the whole way through, I'd like to suggest there is more mileage in the story, but maybe best to make a new story to deal with the aftermath regarding the Rebellion and the Empire?
The Emperor isn't exactly going to let Mandalorian space become independent, if anything their fight has just begun.
But obviously that's a huge undertaking on your part, so up to you :)
Thanks for writing this beautiful story, I'm looking forward to reading the end!