for War for Peace4/30 c31 kauanmelo112011
I love your story, it's well written and the characters' point of view is very human and makes them seem real. I've been reading it ever since I discovered it and I'm surprised it's not as well known. I think of it more as an AU in which the Fire Nation would win, although the first chapter makes it clear who won and that saddens me. I'll keep reading even though I wanted a different ending from the original. If by chance the author decided to make the nation win or lose, I would be happy and satisfied when I got to the end of this story.
Although it's difficult, I imagine, regardless of the ending, a sequel to Korra where the main character is a non-bender who follows Amon. Of course, I don't expect the author to listen to my pleas, but I believe that following a similar model where the main character tries to follow in Amon's footsteps after his fall and how it would change Korra's story would be interesting to read. I believe that only the author Shadow0fire would be good enough to write this story/continuation as a sequel to this current one.
PS: I would like to see how Zuko and Xisheng will meet and relate as friends, and how one would change the other's worldview a little. And also Team Avatar, I'm curious about them and their current situation in contrast to the Fire Nation in this story. Last request, I imagine Xisheng going to On Ji's school and telling her the news, I like to think that Xisheng would take care of her like a younger sister and train her to surpass him.
I love your story, it's well written and the characters' point of view is very human and makes them seem real. I've been reading it ever since I discovered it and I'm surprised it's not as well known. I think of it more as an AU in which the Fire Nation would win, although the first chapter makes it clear who won and that saddens me. I'll keep reading even though I wanted a different ending from the original. If by chance the author decided to make the nation win or lose, I would be happy and satisfied when I got to the end of this story.
Although it's difficult, I imagine, regardless of the ending, a sequel to Korra where the main character is a non-bender who follows Amon. Of course, I don't expect the author to listen to my pleas, but I believe that following a similar model where the main character tries to follow in Amon's footsteps after his fall and how it would change Korra's story would be interesting to read. I believe that only the author Shadow0fire would be good enough to write this story/continuation as a sequel to this current one.
PS: I would like to see how Zuko and Xisheng will meet and relate as friends, and how one would change the other's worldview a little. And also Team Avatar, I'm curious about them and their current situation in contrast to the Fire Nation in this story. Last request, I imagine Xisheng going to On Ji's school and telling her the news, I like to think that Xisheng would take care of her like a younger sister and train her to surpass him.
4/26 c31 Guest
Well done.
Well done.
4/26 c31 MSPain
I dont think this is necessarily a downward spiral for him. He has an obligation to his men and is doing what he can to protect them regardless of how stressed he is. On a side note i miss Azula i cant wait to see more of her. Love your story as always!
I dont think this is necessarily a downward spiral for him. He has an obligation to his men and is doing what he can to protect them regardless of how stressed he is. On a side note i miss Azula i cant wait to see more of her. Love your story as always!
4/26 c1 ChloeBenjamin
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Best regards,
Chloe Benjamin
Hi Shadow0Fire,
I hope you're doing well! My name is Chloe Benjamin, a professional comic and character illustrator with years of experience in bringing stories to life. I recently discovered your story on fanfiction, and I believe it has incredible potential to be visually transformed into a captivating comic.
The emotional depth and plot twists in your story really resonated with me, and I’m confident that my art style can enhance it, creating a visually engaging experience for your readers.
I’ve worked extensively as a freelance artist, building a reputation on platforms like Fiverr and Upwork, and I’m now focusing on collaborating directly with talented writers like you. You can check out my work on Instagram: chloebenjamin999.
If you think we could work well together, I'd love to discuss how we can bring your story to life as a comic. Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (chloebenjamin999) or email (chloebenjamin999 gmail. com) to chat further.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Best regards,
Chloe Benjamin
4/23 c31 
1UzuShiro
Gran capitulo, Te dire que sin duda es uno de los mejores fanfic sobre Avatar, Para mi puede que incluso hasta mi favorito.
1UzuShiroGran capitulo, Te dire que sin duda es uno de los mejores fanfic sobre Avatar, Para mi puede que incluso hasta mi favorito.
4/22 c31 5Tertius711
Xisheng and Ty Lee are banging and yet the ship hasn’t sailed lol. Azula and Mai’s reactions when they find out shall be most interesting. Especially Azula’s
5Tertius711Xisheng and Ty Lee are banging and yet the ship hasn’t sailed lol. Azula and Mai’s reactions when they find out shall be most interesting. Especially Azula’s
4/22 c31 1MasterDarkElf
I hope this isn't a downward spiral, rather just a 'relatively one-off' situation. But I also don't think this was... too morally depraved. Really, all he DID was the threatening and choking. And while I do think he would do what's needed to keep his loved ones and those who depend on him safe, he also most likely wouldn't do anything extremely terrible to the children/younger ones (I forget the exact ages of those involved). Nice to see the romance building up, haha. Now Mai and Azula just need to start 'competing' with Ty Lee, haha. Looking forward to more.
1MasterDarkElfI hope this isn't a downward spiral, rather just a 'relatively one-off' situation. But I also don't think this was... too morally depraved. Really, all he DID was the threatening and choking. And while I do think he would do what's needed to keep his loved ones and those who depend on him safe, he also most likely wouldn't do anything extremely terrible to the children/younger ones (I forget the exact ages of those involved). Nice to see the romance building up, haha. Now Mai and Azula just need to start 'competing' with Ty Lee, haha. Looking forward to more.
4/22 c31 2KingPlotBunny
burn the waterwitch at the stake! but in all seriousness i feel that was the best outcome problem is the other waterbenders are basically useless theyve been taught all the wrong ways to heal even if they try to help theyre going to get other people killed just from faulty knowledge might be best to get rid of them all
2KingPlotBunnyburn the waterwitch at the stake! but in all seriousness i feel that was the best outcome problem is the other waterbenders are basically useless theyve been taught all the wrong ways to heal even if they try to help theyre going to get other people killed just from faulty knowledge might be best to get rid of them all
4/21 c31 Alfredo12StarLegionaire
Certainly, that technological advancement that is happening will be excellent in the long run.
Too bad there was that kind of person among the Water Tribe Medical Corps, for one person's actions, all the others pay.
The War changed the people, Xisheng would be no exception.
Excellent Chapter
Certainly, that technological advancement that is happening will be excellent in the long run.
Too bad there was that kind of person among the Water Tribe Medical Corps, for one person's actions, all the others pay.
The War changed the people, Xisheng would be no exception.
Excellent Chapter