for The Savior of Louds8/9/2017 c4 Mr. Noname
Oh, I forgot. Whenever the narrator reaches out to Lisa, could Christian science be a good place to start?
Oh, I forgot. Whenever the narrator reaches out to Lisa, could Christian science be a good place to start?
8/9/2017 c4 Mr. Noname
Yes, I'm still here. And, I'll assume that TakeBackTheFalls was just messing around with you. His (or her) rant was too random and over-the-top to be taken seriously. I mean, after all, the narrator sure as pie didn't FORCE Lincoln to accept Jesus.
This chapter really captures the essence of a church service in all its glory (no pun intended). In particular, I'm reminded of Springs Tabernacle in Colorado Springs, CO, Tucson Tabernacle in Tucson, AZ, and a tiny church in Deer Park, WA. Then there's the song I'll Fly Away. What a classic. :)
Concerning Howard and Harold, and when the narrator starts reaching out to them? If the two really do end up turning away from their homosexual lifestyle, I assume it'll be a VERY gradual process. It might even take longer than the Loud family's conversions thus far. Also, since the show revealed Luna's bisexuality, perhaps a slight rewrite of the previous chapter is in order? Or...
(On a minor note, did you notice something about Ronnie Anne? She looks awfully similar to the character Dina from Roma Downey's obscure Christian preschool series Little Angels. Interesting, huh?)
Yes, I'm still here. And, I'll assume that TakeBackTheFalls was just messing around with you. His (or her) rant was too random and over-the-top to be taken seriously. I mean, after all, the narrator sure as pie didn't FORCE Lincoln to accept Jesus.
This chapter really captures the essence of a church service in all its glory (no pun intended). In particular, I'm reminded of Springs Tabernacle in Colorado Springs, CO, Tucson Tabernacle in Tucson, AZ, and a tiny church in Deer Park, WA. Then there's the song I'll Fly Away. What a classic. :)
Concerning Howard and Harold, and when the narrator starts reaching out to them? If the two really do end up turning away from their homosexual lifestyle, I assume it'll be a VERY gradual process. It might even take longer than the Loud family's conversions thus far. Also, since the show revealed Luna's bisexuality, perhaps a slight rewrite of the previous chapter is in order? Or...
(On a minor note, did you notice something about Ronnie Anne? She looks awfully similar to the character Dina from Roma Downey's obscure Christian preschool series Little Angels. Interesting, huh?)
7/24/2017 c5 
54Gage the Hedgehog
Just to let you know, I like this story. I am a Christian myself. Methadust. Sorry if the spelling of my form of Christianity is wrong. Over all, your story has touched my heart. I believe in god.
54Gage the HedgehogJust to let you know, I like this story. I am a Christian myself. Methadust. Sorry if the spelling of my form of Christianity is wrong. Over all, your story has touched my heart. I believe in god.
7/10/2017 c1 Atheistgirl8
Wow, lame. Just because you're Christian doesn't mean you can't accept people who don't believe. Also thw Walking Dead is by far the most unholiest series . Maybe go ruin that show with Christianity inside of the Loud House.
Wow, lame. Just because you're Christian doesn't mean you can't accept people who don't believe. Also thw Walking Dead is by far the most unholiest series . Maybe go ruin that show with Christianity inside of the Loud House.
6/20/2017 c5 Guest
If you come back in August, make sure you write about Luna and Sam in this story.
If you come back in August, make sure you write about Luna and Sam in this story.
6/18/2017 c3 Guest
Luna is bisexual, it was confirmed on 'L is for Loud'! Are you going to add that as a topic in your story?
Luna is bisexual, it was confirmed on 'L is for Loud'! Are you going to add that as a topic in your story?
6/18/2017 c5 Guest
Lol i bet you're mad that now that luna is confirmed to be gay/bi.
watch?vu2KSXFq656g
Lol i bet you're mad that now that luna is confirmed to be gay/bi.
watch?vu2KSXFq656g
6/18/2017 c1 10TakeBackTheFalls
Main Character literally SCARED Lincoln into becoming Christian, like wtf! MC basically said "If you don't follow my religion YOU'LL GO TO HELL AND BE TORTURED FOR ETERNITY!" That's just cruel. Plus Lincoln was literally scared after MC said that and begged to know how to become Christian. Manipulating an 11 year old, classy. You've mentioned that you don't like when people force religion onto others, and yet MC just scarred a child and basically pressured him into doing so. Also, OF COURSE KIDS ARE EASIER TO CONVERT! They're gullible, and adults take advantage of that and control their brains like putty. Main Character is an awful person. I wouldn't have been so harsh, but the way MC manipulated Lincoln really disturbed me, and it makes you seem very hypocritical. I don't know anything about religion, but you shouldn't scare children into joining a religion, that's disgusting.
Rant over. Nothing personal, have a nice day :)
10TakeBackTheFallsMain Character literally SCARED Lincoln into becoming Christian, like wtf! MC basically said "If you don't follow my religion YOU'LL GO TO HELL AND BE TORTURED FOR ETERNITY!" That's just cruel. Plus Lincoln was literally scared after MC said that and begged to know how to become Christian. Manipulating an 11 year old, classy. You've mentioned that you don't like when people force religion onto others, and yet MC just scarred a child and basically pressured him into doing so. Also, OF COURSE KIDS ARE EASIER TO CONVERT! They're gullible, and adults take advantage of that and control their brains like putty. Main Character is an awful person. I wouldn't have been so harsh, but the way MC manipulated Lincoln really disturbed me, and it makes you seem very hypocritical. I don't know anything about religion, but you shouldn't scare children into joining a religion, that's disgusting.
Rant over. Nothing personal, have a nice day :)
6/9/2017 c5 Guest
If god is everything than is he gay to.
If god is everything than is he gay to.
6/4/2017 c2 HomestuckFangirl83
This is a great story! I appreciate want your doing with this story. We have different views on religion but I think a can respect you and this story. Good luck and God bless!
This is a great story! I appreciate want your doing with this story. We have different views on religion but I think a can respect you and this story. Good luck and God bless!
6/2/2017 c1 Guest
I'm happy to finally see a good Christian fanfiction!
I'm happy to finally see a good Christian fanfiction!
6/1/2017 c5 Red Rain
Hello frustratedscientist94. Normally I wouldn't review stories that are from second-person POV, but I can make an exception after I read the first four chapters of this story. First time I've ever seen religious themes in a Loud House Story and you do a good job incorporating spirituality in this story in a manner that's not too contrived. You have kept the Loud Family in character and I also like how you've written the main character of the story, who I will call Paul since he isn't named (after Paul The Apostle, originally named Saul and an example of redemption in the Bible). Even though I don't attend church as much as I used to in the past in middle and high school, I am still a Christian at heart. Also, I don't mind the strong bible beliefs against homosexuality and I'm glad you addressed that in your summary to turn away any SJW readers. Glad you aren't listening to the haters, as I am one that likes this story. This a place for constructive reviewing people, not a battleground for debate. You want to do that, do it on the religious forums. Looking forward to the next chapter and I will see you in August.
Hello frustratedscientist94. Normally I wouldn't review stories that are from second-person POV, but I can make an exception after I read the first four chapters of this story. First time I've ever seen religious themes in a Loud House Story and you do a good job incorporating spirituality in this story in a manner that's not too contrived. You have kept the Loud Family in character and I also like how you've written the main character of the story, who I will call Paul since he isn't named (after Paul The Apostle, originally named Saul and an example of redemption in the Bible). Even though I don't attend church as much as I used to in the past in middle and high school, I am still a Christian at heart. Also, I don't mind the strong bible beliefs against homosexuality and I'm glad you addressed that in your summary to turn away any SJW readers. Glad you aren't listening to the haters, as I am one that likes this story. This a place for constructive reviewing people, not a battleground for debate. You want to do that, do it on the religious forums. Looking forward to the next chapter and I will see you in August.
6/1/2017 c5 Guest
Glad to hear from you again! So I have something to tell you about an episode of the loud house called "Spell it out". In there, Lucy finds a spell book that belonged to her Great Grandma Harriet
. On the book(hope I'm not correct) I'm pretty sure that I saw pentagram stars written on the books. Now the spells didn't work at all but it was weird to see that type of book in a kids show. What do you think?
Glad to hear from you again! So I have something to tell you about an episode of the loud house called "Spell it out". In there, Lucy finds a spell book that belonged to her Great Grandma Harriet
. On the book(hope I'm not correct) I'm pretty sure that I saw pentagram stars written on the books. Now the spells didn't work at all but it was weird to see that type of book in a kids show. What do you think?
6/1/2017 c5 2Loremaster of Kentucky
Good grief man i feel bad for u i go to a private christian school so i had a excellent bible teacher to help with the bible. Also i love the fic hope to see a another chapter ingnore the liberails and i watch walking dead too
2Loremaster of KentuckyGood grief man i feel bad for u i go to a private christian school so i had a excellent bible teacher to help with the bible. Also i love the fic hope to see a another chapter ingnore the liberails and i watch walking dead too