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2/8 c1 26zenon the overlord
You sir/mam are evil!
12/31/2019 c1 1The Frog Ninja
(Columbus, Ohio; February 25, 2023)

Me: Miles?

Miles: Yes, Joe?

Me: Do we have anything on the agenda today?

Miles: Other than your birthday party this evening?

Me: Exactly that!

Miles: We got a call from Royal Woods, Michigan.

Me: Who called?

Miles: Rita Loud?

Me: Tell her that I'll be right there!

(Loud residence; Royal Woods, Michigan)

Rita: He should be here any minute now.

Ronnie Anne: I'm so sorry that Lincoln was in a coma for five years, Mrs. Loud; do you still remember my name, Lincoln?

Lincoln: Who's Lincoln?

Clyde: What about mine, Lincoln?

Lisa: He still has amnesia, Clyde; he was in a coma for five years.

(doorbell rings)

Rita: That must be him.

(Columbus, Ohio)

Me: I'd like you all to meet my colleagues: Professor Jerémie Belpois and Doctor Miles Prower.

(turns to Jerémie and Miles)

Me: Put him in the Memory Restoration Chamber, guys.

(15 minutes later)

Me: Your only son has been strapped into the chair portion of the Memory Restoration Chamber, Mrs. Loud; now I'll have our computer analyze his brain for any memories left from the time he regained conciseness from his coma.

(a hologram of a lynx wearing a purple lab coat is shown)

Me: This is NICOLE; she's going to analyze Lincoln's brain. Ready, NICOLE?

NICOLE: Ready, Doctor Orsini.

(5 minutes later)

Me: Find anything, NICOLE?

NICOLE: Not a single memory in sight, Doctor Orsini.

(hologram disappears)

Me: Still has amnesia.

(turns to Jerémie)

Me: Close the chamber Prof. Belpois; we need to restore the memories of Lincoln Loud, as well as adding new ones.

(chamber door is closed and locked)

Rita: Here's a memory card; it contains all of the memories that he lost, as well as some new ones that we added during the time that he was in the five-year coma that Lincoln suffered.

(memory card is inserted into a slot marked SCRAPBOOK CARD)

Me: Goggles on, everyone.

(10 minutes later; Lincoln is out of the Memory Restoration Chamber)

Me: The memory restoration process was successful; now to see if he remembers anything.

(turns to Lincoln)

Me: What is your name?

Lincoln: My name is Lincoln Loud.

Me: What is your hometown, Lincoln?

Lincoln: Royal Woods, Michigan.

Me: What is the name of your best friend?

Lincoln: Clyde McBryde.

Me: What is the name of your favorite superhero?

Lincoln: Ace Savvy.

Me: What is the name of your neighbor?

Lincoln: Bud Grouse.

(turns to Rita)

Me: He remembers everything, Mrs. Loud.

Rita: Thanks, Dr. Orsini.

Me: Here's a memory viewer; he can use this to search for memories from a specific day, month, or year. He can even view all of them by tapping the VIEW ALL button on the touch screen.

(turns to Lincoln)

Me: Lincoln, how would you like to be at my 40th birthday party this evening?

Lincoln: Luna has a special song written just for you.

(that evening; Orsini residence)

Lincoln: Dr. Orsini?

Me: Yes, Lincoln?

Lincoln: These are my sisters: Lily, Lana, Lola, Lisa, Lynn, Luna, Luan, Lori, Leni, and Lucy.

(after the party)

Me: Thanks for the smart phone, Lori.

Lori: You're welcome, Joe.

Me: Thanks for the tickets to the Crew SC home opener, Lynn.

Lynn: You're welcome, Joe.

Me: Thanks for the stereo and CDs, Luna.

Luna: You're welcome, dude.

Rita: Come on now, everyone; let's go home and celebrate Lincoln's return to his normal life. If Dr. Orsini wants to come with us, he can.

Me: I've got the day off tomorrow, so I'll come.

Rita: We've got room in Vanzilla for one more person.
6/1/2019 c1 Guest
Bad auther bad auther no cliffhanger
12/5/2018 c1 387crazytaxi
I am totally crying right now
12/5/2018 c1 87crazytaxi
See this this is what families do they look out for each other even though some of them could be a pain to one another but they help each other no matter what. This is just like the story dancing on the moon where he saves Lori
6/30/2018 c1 a294e9f1a9401c88
y5t4r3ewqergthyjuytrewdefgrthyjukiujyhtgrfedsa WHY A CLIFFHANGER f5tfyGUJK87TDFHJGRRfghnjTREDFVGBHnjhgfERTGHJuytrewerftghj
6/24/2018 c1 LuckyGirlStar
I cried too many times... I need to watch a try not to laugh vid for now...
12/23/2017 c1 Guest
vaffanculo a tua madre e a tutta la tua famiglia
11/22/2017 c1 8The Keeper of Worlds
Dude, my heart just got shredded.
11/17/2017 c1 Nooo
This was too sad,
10/11/2017 c1 Guest
Love this story but fuck you for that cliffhanger buddy.
7/22/2017 c1 Guest
You can't just start a story and leave it hanging like that!
7/1/2017 c1 naderafifi92004
Now we have 2 ends either somehow magicaly he managed to remember Lori then the others this is the happy ending but here is the second one he doesn't remember Lori or anyone everyone is so upset then idk
And btw ... i hate FUCKING CLIFF HANGERS WHYYY WOULD YOU TO THAT TO ME
6/11/2017 c1 79MasterCaster
I was trying to find this story for a month now. I heard references to it but it never told me who wrote it even if I searched for it on Google. One person on deviantart said that a guy named Papa Nito wrote it but I still found nothing until I found my way to your page. And a lot of people called the story "I can't lose you".
But here is my review for this story:
1.)I really enjoyed it.
2.) It was sad that Lincoln lost 5 years of his life and his memories while he was in a coma.
3.)I hope that somehow, Someway, The original author will continue this.
4.) I think the cliffhanger is meant to be what the readers think what will happen next. Like they can make theories and stories all together.
5.) Similar to the Undertale/Underfell AU story called "FlowerFell" which also ended in a cliffhanger.(You should give it a read!).
5/20/2017 c1 Guest
This is dog shit
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