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3/13/2017 c5 Sue Dooley
Fantastic chapter! Tiva forever.
3/11/2017 c3 Cathy Brown
Spelling, but I won't hold that. It would nice if I could highlight your mistakes, and copy and paste, and send them to you with edited versions, but I can't. In a way, Sharon is kind of like Ziva.
3/9/2017 c4 Sue Dooley
Wow! Fabulous writing! Intriguing! Cliffhanger.
Tiva forever.
3/9/2017 c4 Guest
I dont know why but somehow im finding it hard to get in the story. Its confusing and too much characters. I lost interest with chapter 2.
3/8/2017 c4 17DS2010
Lots of starting to connect the dots
3/6/2017 c3 Safara Bellamy
Excellent story
3/4/2017 c3 DS2010
I love Sharon she is talented and would make a great forensic tech or agent
3/4/2017 c3 Sue Dooley
Fantastic chapter! Eyal missing, Quinn missing, Eli''s death complications are piling up. Wow. Great! Tiva forever.
3/4/2017 c3 Sue Dooley
Fantastic chapter! Eyal missing, Quinn missing, Eli''s death complications are piling up. Wow. Great! Tiva forever.
2/28/2017 c2 DS2010
Good table setting I think Tony will make a great lead agent I like his style if a little Tonish...
2/28/2017 c2 Sue Dooley
Fabulous! Great FF. Tiva forever.
2/27/2017 c1 DS2010
Interesting group of people Tony will be in charge of, was surprised Gibbs took an assistant directors position. Would of thought he would fight tooth and nail to stay field only.
2/26/2017 c1 Sue Dooley
Wow! Like the premise.
2/26/2017 c1 Athenalarissa
I hope it will be a tiva story
2/26/2017 c1 ziva david will never die
It's really good I love the story line please keep writing
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