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4/19/2018 c3 tH1s
Your unrealistic portrayal of hacking just makes want to drop this. Also, please restructure so of your sentences. The chapter is the plague with run-on sentences.
9/1/2017 c3 th1s
finally something that is not about kazuya or satelizer or rana

i hate those 3.

the writing is not great or by any means good but you manage not to annoy me. whether that is because i am desperate or you managed to avoid the worst cliche we may never know. but still i am looking forward to read more of your work
3/3/2017 c2 EddyQ
Time loops. Everyone love time loops. Few can properly write them though. Lets see if this one come through, or die an appropriate, if ironic death.
2/26/2017 c1 21edboy4926
Looks somewhat interesting
Though I will admit it I rather see the character become superhuman.
Your story, you decide.

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