6/28/2017 c9 5Seeker of the Stars
I loved the ending, and the whole story as well! It was so well written and interesting, I was intrigued every chapter. Nice work!
I loved the ending, and the whole story as well! It was so well written and interesting, I was intrigued every chapter. Nice work!
6/27/2017 c9 2musicalocelot
Hah! Take that Bill! In your face! :P.
Lol. Nice way to end things off. I loved how you were able to incorporate the switcheroo and the con with your own twist. This was a great story! It would be cool if there was a sequel, but it is still great stand-alone if you choose not to :).
StayAwesome~
Hah! Take that Bill! In your face! :P.
Lol. Nice way to end things off. I loved how you were able to incorporate the switcheroo and the con with your own twist. This was a great story! It would be cool if there was a sequel, but it is still great stand-alone if you choose not to :).
StayAwesome~
3/22/2017 c6 musicalocelot
Yay! Gideon redemption! I'm glad you're doing that :). Yes, Gideon can be a little creep, but he can also... not be. Lol.
Good chapter :).
StayAwesome~
Yay! Gideon redemption! I'm glad you're doing that :). Yes, Gideon can be a little creep, but he can also... not be. Lol.
Good chapter :).
StayAwesome~
3/10/2017 c4 Guest
Please get rid of Pacifica. She's a terrible character
Please get rid of Pacifica. She's a terrible character
3/10/2017 c5 musicalocelot
Really Ford. REALLY? How could you ever possibly think it could in any way be a good idea to sell the souls of your ENTIRE FAMILY and ALL THEIR DESCENDANTS to a LITERAL DEMON! Geez.
And Noooooooo Pacifica! I hope they save her soon. Poor girl.
Good chapter :).
StayAwesome~
Really Ford. REALLY? How could you ever possibly think it could in any way be a good idea to sell the souls of your ENTIRE FAMILY and ALL THEIR DESCENDANTS to a LITERAL DEMON! Geez.
And Noooooooo Pacifica! I hope they save her soon. Poor girl.
Good chapter :).
StayAwesome~
3/9/2017 c4 musicalocelot
OOOOOOOOOOO me likey! This is like, really good :D. You have my interest.
Good story so far :).
StayAwesome~
OOOOOOOOOOO me likey! This is like, really good :D. You have my interest.
Good story so far :).
StayAwesome~
3/2/2017 c2 Guest
Aww damnit! This story was so good unruly made Pacifica part of it. Just why, Why with this?
Aww damnit! This story was so good unruly made Pacifica part of it. Just why, Why with this?
3/4/2017 c2 HeadsofScwab
this is an awesome AU! A very creative idea and everyone's role suits their character. More chapters please!
this is an awesome AU! A very creative idea and everyone's role suits their character. More chapters please!