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4/9 c35 Guest
,我真服了severus累死了吧,自己父亲死了还要处理lily和另一个小孩的情绪,小孩闹别扭就算了,lily也要凑热闹?家里人死了需要一些时间消化一下则么会是snape的错,还要他道歉….自己没有一点考虑吗
3/15 c104 2Elizabeth loines
How amazing this story us so far i hope you continue eventually
2/11 c1 sp72
I honestly hope you will return to the story. It is unique and I really love your original characters, especially Sage and surprisingly I start to like even Priscilla. All your characters are realistic unique and wholesome written that you care for them. While I would like to see Severus with Lily in the end... It's your choice I still love the whole storyline as it is. You put already so much work into the story - it would be a shame not to finish it!
9/29/2024 c20 The Chit
This is
amazing ! Thank you so much .
2/4/2024 c48 OogaChooga
i get ir was important for the plot to progress but shouldnt a talented occlumens have some sort of defense against a boggart. Or just react less to fear in general?
9/3/2023 c43 hermineG
I like it very much. The fact that Zou don't dwell long on their classes and talk more about their adventures. I like the way you show them grieving and maturing
8/12/2023 c87 1KyuubiBala
Leaving this story here. I liked a lot of the changes that occurred here with Sirius, the various OC's not including Dirk or Priscilla. The premise was interesting and I thought getting over James was a good arc we were heading on, but honestly, her falling for Dirk and then them breaking up with Severus broke the story for me. Someone else might like that, but I don't.
8/9/2023 c2 Guest
I would have expected Severus to try for ravenclaw tp avoid all the vile DEs and the griff/slytherin enmity.
6/13/2023 c104 Espied7
I love your characters!
4/19/2023 c1 Whittweet
DNF I feel tricked lol. To have sev and lily teasing at a relationship the entire first half then take a sharp right into relationships with OC’s is pretty frustrating. Not to mention the progression is slow going. There was a lot of really interesting bits but I just can’t hang anymore.
4/1/2023 c104 2Nattsly
I love this story so much! I hope you continue it soon!
2/11/2023 c1 Sorry for my Eng
Left this fic years ago. Interesting idea, but the plot and character development is not well thought out. And Lily suddenly falling for Dirk. It seems like the characters have no emotions or feelings. Too much chapters, but no development. Where they are all going, except destroying Voldemort? It is definitely not a child's book like original hp was. So if there are pairings, so there are should be feelings and emotions. What was Lily's motivation when was going out with Snape at first ? For me she is not so perfect and good person as she described in the series. For those who gone through the war and matured earlier she looks irresponsible and unable to control her doings. It is obvious she is not obligated to response for Severus's feelings, to love him back or to be with him, but It looks unnatural for me to fall for the guy named Dirk.
12/27/2022 c75 4Juan Miguel
I left this fic some years agi in this chapter because of lily and snape break, the storry ends snily? snape will have a girlfirend or something? if the answer is "no" i am good with that, but i need to know what i am going to read
12/16/2022 c104 Wild96
This was absolutely fantastic. I devoured the story in about four days and wish there was more! Severus can’t catch a break, shame about Lily falling for Creswell :/ feels bad man but the heart wants what the heart wants; hopefully he can find love elsewhere.
11/26/2022 c104 13excessivelyperky
I do love how Priscilla and Severus kick dirt at each other.

But yes, marrying Priscilla would keep her and Sage out of trouble (sadly, nobody seems to want Snape this time around, either). And children can be arranged with the Muggle turkey baster method which would pass any wizarding DNA test.
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