for The Measure of A Turtle3/1/2017 c1 
40Rose Black Dragon
WOW! It's magnificent! Loved how well you described Leo's and Raphael' behavior towards the family. I also loved the description about Leo and his efforts to be a great leader and a loving brother. You are so right about everything he does for his family. And also the perfect description of Raphael's behavior and personality and how he understood the reason his father explained to him. My favorite moment of your story was when Leo hatched, so cute and tender! From the first time was noted that he would never give up. And the idea of Leo being the youngest was awesome! Thank you so much for this jewel.
40Rose Black DragonWOW! It's magnificent! Loved how well you described Leo's and Raphael' behavior towards the family. I also loved the description about Leo and his efforts to be a great leader and a loving brother. You are so right about everything he does for his family. And also the perfect description of Raphael's behavior and personality and how he understood the reason his father explained to him. My favorite moment of your story was when Leo hatched, so cute and tender! From the first time was noted that he would never give up. And the idea of Leo being the youngest was awesome! Thank you so much for this jewel.