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3/11/2017 c3 ArcherShirou
Grima must be through a tough situation, his current avatar is pathetic, when compared to the last one, the last one even killed Grima himself.

Cayden on the other hand has much to train to get to that level, after all Grima needs an avatar worthy of him.

Cayden must worry more about Camila, she is a yandere, and does not like someone taking her sister of hers.

Flora needs more love in her life especially someone who is not an idiot like Jakob, or at least she needs to tame him, but she must be able to do it.
3/9/2017 c2 4JamesBCrazy
Great. It's another Gamer cross with an OP main ch... wait, Grima's involved? And the usual Fates clich├ęs are dismissed early? This might not be too terrible after all.
3/9/2017 c1 2ServantofGrima
Well, it's certainly nice to see you back in the fray, Antex! I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this one. And considering I'm normally not one for self-insert stories, that's saying something. Now to watch, wait, and laugh at Luke/Cayden's mishaps in Hoshido and Nohr.

-ServantofGrima
3/9/2017 c2 ArcherShirou
The only thing I can complain about is that Kamui is not a helpless princess, was waiting for her to receive a sword and help in the fight, but then she would steal the protagonist's experience (as Ryouma steals)

I wonder who Grima was referring to here.

Cayden this seems to live in the logic of the games, some people will find this very strange.

I'm glad it will not follow the history of the game totally, the story was very weak in that particular game.

It was written in google translator, there may be some errors
3/8/2017 c2 hyunkel1234
Great chapter, I will continue to eagerly wait for more.
3/8/2017 c2 Sugouxxx
Just make sure your character not become black hole.
3/8/2017 c2 4zcdragon64
hey there. good start to the story. can't wait to see where this goes. i'm guessing either grima healed him for his own sake, or the fact that cayden is a half manakete like nah or something had to do with it. i'm curious if he will be able to transform using a dragonstone. i can wait for that answer though. finally, i'm guessing this is going to be a corrinxoc pairing. i'm alright with it, provided it's not going to be a love at first sight sort of thing. just don't move to fast in that department is what i'm saying. keep up the good work, and don't let this end like your other stories, only having 1 or 2 chapters.
3/6/2017 c1 Dalia38
Brilliant love
3/5/2017 c1 14Happy Merchant
I only have one question will cayden be able to turn into a dragon, I really want too see or in this case read the royals reactions to someone that also has dragon blood within them
3/3/2017 c1 ArcherShirou
Has potential.

The Gamer of Fate has some flaws you should avoid, being very close to the story of the game (which is a bad story) and putting the level tutorial when it only makes sense in the game and not in real life.

Also put only the protagonist to be probably the only one following game logic.

I think if you put Grima here it would be good for you to create some personality for Grima, and also your reasons for him to do what he does.

One idea is that he wanted to figure out a way to keep the dragons in the world as their rulers, and the only way to do that is to use humans as sacrifices like Robin to contain and use their powers.

Naga was against it and we have all this fight between them.

I wrote this on google translator so there may be some errors
3/3/2017 c1 11Callian31
Well, it's... ok. I've never played any of the Fates games so most of this stuff is lost on me, aside from Grima, Naga, etc. that are from Awakening. Anyways, I've never really seen a Gamer fic for a video game before(which is weird when you think about it) so I'll stick around to see what happens next. Mainly interested in interactions between Like and Grima.
3/2/2017 c1 14PhoenixReign
I like it so far it's so good! I actually just finished playing Fire Emblem: Fates and this flows so well with the game.
3/2/2017 c1 Anonymous
*Sigh*... why can't any of these fics be set in Jugdral? Or Magvel? Or freaking Elibe? Seriously, the "Lyn finds the tactician" moment is probably the easiest way to do it, for god's sake! I mean, I know none of them are particularly well-known, but can't we have at least ONE?

Okay, rant's over. Looking at his stats, he seems pretty well-balanced, though I have a sinking feeling that his poor luck stat will eventually get him 1-percent-critted, because that happens more often than you think, especially in the older games. It'll probably also negatively effect some other things as well - he'll likely find himself getting hit a bit more often than he likes (1 point of luck equals an extra 1% chance to dodge) as well as having a bit of a harder time activating a certain few skills. If I remember correctly, if he goes up against a person with no strength or skill and wielding an Iron Sword, he should die in around 5 - 7 hits, with a 30% chance to dodge. Although, who knows, maybe his skill growth boost will make up for a bit of it, and perhaps he's a little faster than he currently appears to be. We'll just have to wait and see.
3/2/2017 c1 TJDXHBVHDBVUSFBJS
Cool to see you writing again. Can't wait to see what you do next.
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