
6/10 c1 Juliasimon77
A haunting, intimate tale, quietly resonant and deeply immersive, this story draws the reader into a world where the extraordinary blends seamlessly with the achingly personal. Its strength lies not only in its intricate, carefully woven plot, but in its unflinching exploration of loss, identity, memory, and connection. The prose moves with the ebb and flow of reflection lyrical, measured, at times jagged with raw emotion capturing the shifting rhythms of grief, hope, and healing. Moments of tenderness, unease, wonder, and silence fold into one another, creating a narrative that shimmers with tension and truth.
A haunting, intimate tale, quietly resonant and deeply immersive, this story draws the reader into a world where the extraordinary blends seamlessly with the achingly personal. Its strength lies not only in its intricate, carefully woven plot, but in its unflinching exploration of loss, identity, memory, and connection. The prose moves with the ebb and flow of reflection lyrical, measured, at times jagged with raw emotion capturing the shifting rhythms of grief, hope, and healing. Moments of tenderness, unease, wonder, and silence fold into one another, creating a narrative that shimmers with tension and truth.
5/8 c51 Guest
Fuck off, Carlisle. Bella and Edward should stay away and apart from the other Cullen assholes
Fuck off, Carlisle. Bella and Edward should stay away and apart from the other Cullen assholes
5/8 c50 Guest
Fucking stupid. Fuck you, Carlisle and Alice. So the cunt wants to write something different by slowly killing Edward
Fucking stupid. Fuck you, Carlisle and Alice. So the cunt wants to write something different by slowly killing Edward
6/25/2024 c52 desicotton
I found this through a forum that asked for people's all time favorite twilight fanfiction. I’m really glad I found it. I love that all of the characters are slightly OOC. It made me realize that the world of Stephanie Meyer had many limiting believes. Like Edward moving forward with being intimate without them being married, and Bella not being obsessed with staying 17 forever to be the same age as Edward. I’m so happy that Rose’s anger wasn’t a plot point, Alice wasn’t obsessed with fashion, and we got to experience an eccentric side to Jasper. I really thought that this was going to be incomplete with how short this story was, but was happily surprised to have to wrapped up nicely. Ofc if you ever made a sequel, I would be first in line to read it. Wonderful story. Thank you.
I found this through a forum that asked for people's all time favorite twilight fanfiction. I’m really glad I found it. I love that all of the characters are slightly OOC. It made me realize that the world of Stephanie Meyer had many limiting believes. Like Edward moving forward with being intimate without them being married, and Bella not being obsessed with staying 17 forever to be the same age as Edward. I’m so happy that Rose’s anger wasn’t a plot point, Alice wasn’t obsessed with fashion, and we got to experience an eccentric side to Jasper. I really thought that this was going to be incomplete with how short this story was, but was happily surprised to have to wrapped up nicely. Ofc if you ever made a sequel, I would be first in line to read it. Wonderful story. Thank you.
1/27/2024 c52 SparkleQ
Wow! Just wow! I loved the twist you put on this story. Thanks for the laughs, the really gut wrenching cry (Ch 51) and the happiness and joy in the ending. Great writing. You truly are gifted. Thank you.
Wow! Just wow! I loved the twist you put on this story. Thanks for the laughs, the really gut wrenching cry (Ch 51) and the happiness and joy in the ending. Great writing. You truly are gifted. Thank you.
1/23/2024 c52 6Abandoned-bicycle9
Wow, this story was incredible. I had my doubts about midway and almost stopped reading, but I'm SO happy I finished it. I cried so much. You are an amazing writer.
Wow, this story was incredible. I had my doubts about midway and almost stopped reading, but I'm SO happy I finished it. I cried so much. You are an amazing writer.
1/13/2024 c52 26
aw this was such a refreshing read. the ending was like a balm to my wounds. i loved it. very original.
aw this was such a refreshing read. the ending was like a balm to my wounds. i loved it. very original.
12/10/2023 c1 ECullen4ever
This story is so good! Perfectly written! Totally creative and original! Loved it!
This story is so good! Perfectly written! Totally creative and original! Loved it!
11/27/2023 c52
2ImYours1901
what a wonderful story, I remember this fic knocking around back in the day but I never found the time to start reading it, I’m so glad that I did now! I loved the parallels in the first and last chapter, I also loved picking up on all of things that were starting to happen to Edward, I had hoped he was turning back to human but of course you’re right, his human body died long ago and was only being preserved by venom so it makes sense that he couldn’t live! I had the eureka - turn Bella to a vampire after she gives Edward blood idea the chapter before it happened, it really felt like I was going through the motions with the characters, a wonderful story. Thank you

what a wonderful story, I remember this fic knocking around back in the day but I never found the time to start reading it, I’m so glad that I did now! I loved the parallels in the first and last chapter, I also loved picking up on all of things that were starting to happen to Edward, I had hoped he was turning back to human but of course you’re right, his human body died long ago and was only being preserved by venom so it makes sense that he couldn’t live! I had the eureka - turn Bella to a vampire after she gives Edward blood idea the chapter before it happened, it really felt like I was going through the motions with the characters, a wonderful story. Thank you
4/7/2023 c52 SianJohn
I'm still in love with this fab story, it's definitely one of my all time favourites. I'm truly grateful to you for leaving it here for us to enjoy time and time again.
I'm still in love with this fab story, it's definitely one of my all time favourites. I'm truly grateful to you for leaving it here for us to enjoy time and time again.
11/29/2022 c52
9Foenix2phorks
Sigh. This was great. Jasper had such a quirky personality, and Edward was delightfully "human", lol! I loved their interactions almost as much as Bella and Edward's.
The story was insanely funny one second, then heartbreaking the next. I was terrified the ending would be a tragedy. Wet stuff came out of my eyes!
Bella saving Edward was a beautiful touch. I'm so, so glad I came across this and read it. Thank you for sharing. :-)

Sigh. This was great. Jasper had such a quirky personality, and Edward was delightfully "human", lol! I loved their interactions almost as much as Bella and Edward's.
The story was insanely funny one second, then heartbreaking the next. I was terrified the ending would be a tragedy. Wet stuff came out of my eyes!
Bella saving Edward was a beautiful touch. I'm so, so glad I came across this and read it. Thank you for sharing. :-)