for Abbracciare Il Cantante8/5/2018 c40 Guest
Edward WAS flirting with katrina. I thought it was really tacky. And I hate how Jasper acts, especially around alice. Hes saying that hes in love with a picture of a naked woman in a magazine and holding it to his crotch...right in front of alice? Its fucking rude is what it is.
Edward WAS flirting with katrina. I thought it was really tacky. And I hate how Jasper acts, especially around alice. Hes saying that hes in love with a picture of a naked woman in a magazine and holding it to his crotch...right in front of alice? Its fucking rude is what it is.
8/4/2018 c35 Guest
That reservation "error" was not at all necessary. And the whole thing felt forced.
That reservation "error" was not at all necessary. And the whole thing felt forced.
8/4/2018 c34 Guest
That entire bowling chapter was stupid and petty. It was beneath all of them.
That entire bowling chapter was stupid and petty. It was beneath all of them.
8/3/2018 c12 Guest
I HATE your version of Jasper. There was NOTHING douchy about his character in twilight and you have turned him into some millennial fuck boy, its just shitty.
I HATE your version of Jasper. There was NOTHING douchy about his character in twilight and you have turned him into some millennial fuck boy, its just shitty.
8/3/2018 c8 Guest
Just with alices outfit I have lost all respect for her character. What a nasty skank
Just with alices outfit I have lost all respect for her character. What a nasty skank
8/3/2018 c6 Guest
Flirting with Bellas friend is an extremely stupid and fucked up move if hes trying to get to bella. Friends, real friends typically employ a finders keepers type deal and in this case he flirted with katrina first which means she has dibs and is now and forever off limits to bella.
Flirting with Bellas friend is an extremely stupid and fucked up move if hes trying to get to bella. Friends, real friends typically employ a finders keepers type deal and in this case he flirted with katrina first which means she has dibs and is now and forever off limits to bella.
8/3/2018 c1 Guest
Did he mean that he fucked Tanya? Cause if he did...I don't want Bella anywhere near him.
Did he mean that he fucked Tanya? Cause if he did...I don't want Bella anywhere near him.
1/23/2018 c52 BridieM
Can't thank you enough for reposting this wonderful story. Thoroughly enjoyed re-reading these characters and their struggles. Best wishes for your writing future. Bridie
Can't thank you enough for reposting this wonderful story. Thoroughly enjoyed re-reading these characters and their struggles. Best wishes for your writing future. Bridie
1/23/2018 c51 BridieM
So emotional. *tears*. Sort of happy because I remember the outcome. *huge sigh*
So emotional. *tears*. Sort of happy because I remember the outcome. *huge sigh*
1/23/2018 c49 BridieM
I do remember what is going to happen but it is still difficult to read. Really wonderful chapter. Thanks
I do remember what is going to happen but it is still difficult to read. Really wonderful chapter. Thanks
1/23/2018 c48 BridieM
So good. You know one of the compelling things about your characters is that they are human and believable. Not a pair of sycophants interested in making the other happy. Thanks
So good. You know one of the compelling things about your characters is that they are human and believable. Not a pair of sycophants interested in making the other happy. Thanks
1/22/2018 c45 BridieM
That discussion must have been hard on Edward though he came through brilliantly. But at what cost? Beautifully written. Thanks
That discussion must have been hard on Edward though he came through brilliantly. But at what cost? Beautifully written. Thanks