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9/21/2015 c1 PureAwesomeness101
Love it. Please make a whole story out of this.
The only complaint is, that I ask, please use their names instead of their number and please space out dialogue a little better. However I do LOVE this story.
10/25/2013 c1 11Red Lightning Bolt
You put in the thing about the 'Red String of Fate'? ...I think I've just found myself a new favorite author. I love that legend. :3
7/17/2012 c1 angelrock444
Umu
9/26/2010 c1 Numbuh 1
Ewwwww that was uh... Gay!
9/26/2010 c1 Numbuh 1
Ewwwww that was uh... Gay!
2/20/2010 c1 40super ario
Wow. Just, wow.
1/30/2010 c1 16UnluckyWriter
oh.my.gosh. this is so cute and sweet! everyone's not OC or watever, they're actaully in character! i love this pairing! i read this years ago, and i've been searching for it ever since! great work! and plz do a sequeal to this sequeal! its so good!
3/18/2009 c1 9Insanity0Rocks0My0Socks
I would love it if you wrote more on this! On the first one, I loved how you made Four this keen person who watched others to figure things out about them. And in this one... Well, it's just too cute for words! If you were to do another one, would the dreams that Nigel have come into effect?
1/23/2009 c1 7Wings of an Angel 7445
YEAH! (nods head) SEQUAL!
3/7/2007 c1 fidget-chan
having just checked the date, i realise you must have abandoned the idea of a sequel long ago, but if the muse ever does re-descend please keep going, it's a great story, and i agree with some of the other reviews, an action-based sequel would be fantastic.

love the way you keep them in character and the ribbon thing made me laugh (i'm actually skype-ing as i read , and when i lol'd nick kept asking 'what?' and i had to tell him to shut up!

thanks a bunch,

fidget
10/7/2006 c1 16Nostalgic5947
(grin)

loved this, & da superstition... wonderful

I'll hav ta keep it in mind...

o, yes, sequel-sequel plz, thx
7/21/2006 c1 3airatainted
w00t! XD luved it! luv the ribbon bit too! =D
6/3/2006 c1 3NNCS
Loved both stories! and this one just had me laughing at the middle, especially with the ribbion...very cute and very well written!
4/17/2006 c1 18aisarete
Aw! That was so kawaii! Heh, I always did take Numbuh Three as a yaoi fangirl... She just seems the type. Ah, what better pairing is there than 1+4? And you started it all! Kudos and many thanks for headstarting the slashy revolution for KND.
10/5/2005 c1 four brindle drive
no energy... to log in...

but enough to review (?). so here it is:

i loved this story! and that was sweet, how you put in that japanese superstition. so... in your own little world there, three would rather her little "boyfriend" (default sucks) be with #1?

if you say so...

actually, i'd kinda prefer it. i like this pairing a lot.

now if someone would just contemplate a 2/4 pairing...

-m-
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