
9/21 c43
6AllHailThe99th
Holy fuck, this is one of the best chapters of a fanfic I have ever read. Not even kidding. You made me go from hating Iroha to outright feeling horrible for her.

Holy fuck, this is one of the best chapters of a fanfic I have ever read. Not even kidding. You made me go from hating Iroha to outright feeling horrible for her.
9/21 c41 AllHailThe99th
Komachi still won't even check on her brother, despite knowing he got shot. What an utter bitch.
Komachi still won't even check on her brother, despite knowing he got shot. What an utter bitch.
9/21 c37 AllHailThe99th
Uh oh. Question is which Yukinoshita family member is in on it? Her parents? Haruno? Obviously not Yukino, but will Hachiman be suspicious of her?
Uh oh. Question is which Yukinoshita family member is in on it? Her parents? Haruno? Obviously not Yukino, but will Hachiman be suspicious of her?
9/21 c35 AllHailThe99th
This got creepy. If that's supposed to be Harley Quinn, and she's just stalking them...º º ll)/
This got creepy. If that's supposed to be Harley Quinn, and she's just stalking them...º º ll)/
9/21 c33 AllHailThe99th
Komachi is such a bitch in this fanfic, and 8man's father is also a piece of shit.
Komachi is such a bitch in this fanfic, and 8man's father is also a piece of shit.
9/5 c26 AllHailThe99th
Haruki and Kaoru are male names. This is essentially a gay couple getting married. Ew.
Haruki and Kaoru are male names. This is essentially a gay couple getting married. Ew.
9/5 c18 AllHailThe99th
I'm scared what will happen when he bumps into Haruno. She might piece together his identity.
I'm scared what will happen when he bumps into Haruno. She might piece together his identity.
8/15 c4 Hikari
What i'm a bit dissapointed about is the timeskip and the lack of build up, for me the most exciting part on a story about a person's change is the process and the reaction of the people around said character. But overall its good.
What i'm a bit dissapointed about is the timeskip and the lack of build up, for me the most exciting part on a story about a person's change is the process and the reaction of the people around said character. But overall its good.