for Ballad of Tier Zero3/8/2017 c1 
4Noel Harkov
Sounds familiar... the Marine Corps, I guess? Ah~ the yells you can never miss once you step into the compound and see your first drill instructor.
Anyway, good to see you still in the grid. Honestly, been waiting for a rewrite of the first story I ever read at FanFiction. Thanks to you, I am here, still around, sniffing for more stories. Still, good to see you around, and your writing looks even better now compare to three or two years ago. Hope you can continue it soon enough, and also the main story! If you need any helps, I will be happy to be able to assist you in your writing!
4Noel HarkovSounds familiar... the Marine Corps, I guess? Ah~ the yells you can never miss once you step into the compound and see your first drill instructor.
Anyway, good to see you still in the grid. Honestly, been waiting for a rewrite of the first story I ever read at FanFiction. Thanks to you, I am here, still around, sniffing for more stories. Still, good to see you around, and your writing looks even better now compare to three or two years ago. Hope you can continue it soon enough, and also the main story! If you need any helps, I will be happy to be able to assist you in your writing!
3/6/2017 c1 1Reaper6883
This is actually pretty good keep up the work. You got to work on your grammar and punctuation tho'
1Reaper6883This is actually pretty good keep up the work. You got to work on your grammar and punctuation tho'
3/5/2017 c1 Maroon567
Bakal kayak full metal jacket kayaknya
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Bakal kayak full metal jacket kayaknya
If anyone don't know full metal jacket...just check youtube...