for The Secret Life of Castle and Beckett3/13/2017 c1 Guest
Great job writing conversational dialogue.
Great job writing conversational dialogue.
3/14/2017 c3 Speedy.Mouse
Totally love them getting together early. At least with them at Kate's they won't have to worry about Martha coming home and finding them.
I loved Season 5 and a lot of that had to do with them hiding their relationship and then slowly letting friends/family in on it. I just watched "Reality Star Struck" this afternoon with them hiding the relationship from Gates and Rick accidently slipping the Valentines Day earrings into Gate's blazer instead of Kate's...
Totally love them getting together early. At least with them at Kate's they won't have to worry about Martha coming home and finding them.
I loved Season 5 and a lot of that had to do with them hiding their relationship and then slowly letting friends/family in on it. I just watched "Reality Star Struck" this afternoon with them hiding the relationship from Gates and Rick accidently slipping the Valentines Day earrings into Gate's blazer instead of Kate's...
3/14/2017 c3 Pears61
Great story so far. I love the premise of them getting together right from the start. Always seemed a much more realistic event than waiting 4 years. Anyway, it's fan fiction. You write it anyway you want :)
Great story so far. I love the premise of them getting together right from the start. Always seemed a much more realistic event than waiting 4 years. Anyway, it's fan fiction. You write it anyway you want :)
3/13/2017 c3 
142ipreferwestside
OK but who would disagree/dislike them getting together? And who would read a story that basically says in the summary that they get together? Anyways, I digress.
hellooooo sexual tension! I certainly hope that Kate does have condoms. And SHE WORE A LACE TEDDY oh yeah girl you wanted to get some. Can't wait for more!
142ipreferwestsideOK but who would disagree/dislike them getting together? And who would read a story that basically says in the summary that they get together? Anyways, I digress.
hellooooo sexual tension! I certainly hope that Kate does have condoms. And SHE WORE A LACE TEDDY oh yeah girl you wanted to get some. Can't wait for more!
3/13/2017 c2 ipreferwestside
Kate WAAAANTS him. She wants him BAD. Great chapter, will their date turn into more? Or will they just say goodnight and part ways...for now?
Kate WAAAANTS him. She wants him BAD. Great chapter, will their date turn into more? Or will they just say goodnight and part ways...for now?
3/13/2017 c3 1DREAMWRITER 08
Well I think it is great and this way they can be who
they are a writer and a detective falling in love.
Good chapter!
1DREAMWRITER 08Well I think it is great and this way they can be who
they are a writer and a detective falling in love.
Good chapter!
3/13/2017 c3 beebopaloo22
Good job! Well written, and enjoyable. So glad to read a story without all the angst! Can't wait for chapter4. Thanks.
Good job! Well written, and enjoyable. So glad to read a story without all the angst! Can't wait for chapter4. Thanks.
3/13/2017 c3 beachcat71
Just plain awesome! Gotta go get me some ice water after that chapter. I always wondered what would have happened if they had gotten together after that first case instead of making us wait 4 long years. Great writing!
Just plain awesome! Gotta go get me some ice water after that chapter. I always wondered what would have happened if they had gotten together after that first case instead of making us wait 4 long years. Great writing!
3/13/2017 c3 19wendykw
Soo hot! Two very attractive people being attracted to each other is biologically normal.
What are sachets referring to in this story? Where I'm from sachets are scented things that you put in your lingerie drawer. From the context of it's use, I think it's what we call packets of sweeteners or sugar. Am I right?
19wendykwSoo hot! Two very attractive people being attracted to each other is biologically normal.
What are sachets referring to in this story? Where I'm from sachets are scented things that you put in your lingerie drawer. From the context of it's use, I think it's what we call packets of sweeteners or sugar. Am I right?