
3/5/2017 c1 Ilovetoread09
Ooh, I like this. Can't wait for more!
Ooh, I like this. Can't wait for more!
3/5/2017 c1 Speedy.Mouse
Nice setup for the story the description outlines. Probably best that Kate not accept immediately. Once Rick had a chance to think about it, his priorities have seemed to change regarding the Detective. Want to see where this story goes and just how secret the relationship will be. I can see them keeping it a secret from Montgomery(eventually Gates), Espo, Ryan, and Lanie but how will Rick keep it a secret from Alexis and Martha. It seems like this could be a long story...
Nice setup for the story the description outlines. Probably best that Kate not accept immediately. Once Rick had a chance to think about it, his priorities have seemed to change regarding the Detective. Want to see where this story goes and just how secret the relationship will be. I can see them keeping it a secret from Montgomery(eventually Gates), Espo, Ryan, and Lanie but how will Rick keep it a secret from Alexis and Martha. It seems like this could be a long story...
3/5/2017 c1
141ipreferwestside
I like the concept, and whatever did the text say? Looking forward to the next "file!"

I like the concept, and whatever did the text say? Looking forward to the next "file!"
3/5/2017 c1
1DREAMWRITER 08
This looks like it is going to be a real good one.
Like the conversation with the Mayor and the Cliffhanger.

This looks like it is going to be a real good one.
Like the conversation with the Mayor and the Cliffhanger.
3/5/2017 c1
47phnxgrl
Great beginning giving the reader a view of Rick and his friend the mayor discussion over Rick's reasons to shadow Kate. Please continue.

Great beginning giving the reader a view of Rick and his friend the mayor discussion over Rick's reasons to shadow Kate. Please continue.
3/5/2017 c1
4fbobs
Good start. You're on a roll. Looks like a light hearted fun story. Always up to read one of those. Or one of your more intense ones if it turns into that. Now and then you take a turn off the dock into some pretty hot situations, but so far this one is just light hearted fun.
I'm good either way.

Good start. You're on a roll. Looks like a light hearted fun story. Always up to read one of those. Or one of your more intense ones if it turns into that. Now and then you take a turn off the dock into some pretty hot situations, but so far this one is just light hearted fun.
I'm good either way.
3/5/2017 c1 Minerva89
I always liked this kind of AU, where caskett gets together sooner and they have to keep it under wraps.. so please, keep on sharing.
I always liked this kind of AU, where caskett gets together sooner and they have to keep it under wraps.. so please, keep on sharing.