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1jansails
The Cullens don't have the red eyes common among vampires.
That alone could keep their secret unless Aro insists on all vampires being registered & the registry published.
Right?
jansails /jan2
1jansailsThe Cullens don't have the red eyes common among vampires.
That alone could keep their secret unless Aro insists on all vampires being registered & the registry published.
Right?
jansails /jan2
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Interesting idea. The dialogue and the reasoning behind coming out of hiding is a little "cheesy" (not sure if that is appropriate term) but it has definite potential. You are far more creative and still a much better writer than me and I hope you don't mind my critique. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. :) Keep writting!
Interesting idea. The dialogue and the reasoning behind coming out of hiding is a little "cheesy" (not sure if that is appropriate term) but it has definite potential. You are far more creative and still a much better writer than me and I hope you don't mind my critique. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. :) Keep writting!