for Omega1/8/2018 c1 Spud
I actually enjoyed this. The creature you first describe is very interesting. The whole plot is exciting and is historically based (like the series). But while Alek and Sharp were accurate, I feel like they didn’t do much or affect the story enough. The ending to this chapter is great. But do you plan on giving Alek and Sharp and friends a slight bias against African Americans? Just curious and I think it could go either way. Great story! Keep writing this!
I actually enjoyed this. The creature you first describe is very interesting. The whole plot is exciting and is historically based (like the series). But while Alek and Sharp were accurate, I feel like they didn’t do much or affect the story enough. The ending to this chapter is great. But do you plan on giving Alek and Sharp and friends a slight bias against African Americans? Just curious and I think it could go either way. Great story! Keep writing this!
3/23/2017 c1 Guest
Great job! Keep up the good work!
Great job! Keep up the good work!
3/21/2017 c1 Guest
Hello, I have a question. I'm a little confused. Is Deryn not pretending to be a boy anymore? Stupid question, I know, but I just want to make sure.
Hello, I have a question. I'm a little confused. Is Deryn not pretending to be a boy anymore? Stupid question, I know, but I just want to make sure.
3/9/2017 c1 mandaao
I liked this quite a lot. You kept the characters true to the book and a lot of people really struggle with that. I also think that it is neat that you are using real historical aspects. Right on, my friend. I hope to read more from you.
I liked this quite a lot. You kept the characters true to the book and a lot of people really struggle with that. I also think that it is neat that you are using real historical aspects. Right on, my friend. I hope to read more from you.