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7/11/2017 c1 ZeterZero
This isn't bad. Good grammar and some nice wording. The fight scene isn't bad either. That said this feels somewhat...generic. It's well done but not captivating and even feels a bit shipped. You definitely have technical skills but keep working on your characterization and narrative creativity.
3/14/2017 c1 Yharnam knight
I like it

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