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5/23/2018 c24 4Monster King
Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.
5/8/2018 c24 1xXxDragonBornxXx
One of the best stories I have ever read, I was close to dropping it a few times but it was definitely worth finishing I hope you make more stories in the future as good as this
5/1/2018 c24 troutman30
Well, I made it through it, I didn't read the lemons and just skimmed through the torture and rape scenes. I did get a kick when I noticed you getting rapped and raped mixed up some where around four or five times. It's funny, it seems to happen every time a writer has a rape scene and Killer B rapping in the same fanfic they have someone rapping a female character instead of raping her. I may read the other two Sol stories tomorrow.
4/22/2018 c3 5plums
I was interested until you apparently amnesia’d him. Not so much now.
3/27/2018 c24 64BlackSpirit 101
Very nice. Love it
3/10/2018 c23 Guest
Please make a fic of zato sakura's 24 hours together, i mean it's one of the best sakura death's in Fanfiction history we need more then just entered her and she screams in pain, like you discribed how big meathammer's member was was should be told how big zato dick was compared to sakura's pussy also did zato lick her first vagina to stimulate her or did he just stick it in her? Also since she's such a loudmouth how did zato not go deaf did he use his shadow powers to gag her? And also what zato's cock did to her insides.
2/24/2018 c21 Stagking2012
that was evil killing him as soon as naruto rescued him
1/14/2018 c24 1DragoSaurus999
honestly when I found this story I was looking for a guilty gear and Naruto crossover because I just saw guilty gear, and saw a lot of *AHEM* gifted girls, you know what I mean *WINKWINK* but yeah I searched it and found seven stories and yours is the most liked so I read it and I liked it. there are parts where I agree with Naruto and others that I don't, but enough chit chat at the bottom is my detailed comment

this is one of the weirdest stories I've read in a long time, but it's actually pretty good I mean you kept with the same plot, which is a dark theme you know. when Naruto demand the shinigami of his son's soul and Naruto almost beat him I was a bit mad at that part, and when the shinigami cursed Naruto of immortality I thought you were going to make the other main characters immortal to and that was a bit bad for me, I mean you let Naruto torture people and then beat up the god of death himself and he's not going get punished for that. that pissed me off. but then I see the ending it is actually fitting and I liked it so yeah good story man
12/5/2017 c24 Dragon0905
Wow, that was...that was weird. There was good, bad, and disturbing. But at least you kept to a plot...sorta. gonna have e to figure out what a gear is though.
11/23/2017 c24 Mariusz1988
A true masterpiece. I bow before a true genius of a written word. Awesome story.
10/16/2017 c19 Bhd
A sandpaper condom? really nigga? I didn't think anyone would try that but wouldn't wrapping sandpaper around the pecker hurt the one wearing it too? Unless the guys a masochist i hope we see something similar happen to one of the celestial dragon's.
9/21/2017 c21 XvX
I don't feel sorry for kakashi one bit i just hope his little playdate will haunt him throughout his afterlife one thing that would be good would be that in hell he's forced to be meathammers bitch in an endless loop.
9/19/2017 c1 Guest
I like the plot and how nauto got revenge on those who did wrong to him but could you tone down the gore in the stories? Like it's a bit too much info on how he killed one person by ripping the lung out and repeats doing it and how hr rips the child from anko's belly then smashed it to pieces and use the umbilical cord to strangle her. THAT'S too much info so please tone down gory graphical scenes in stories bu other than that great story
9/15/2017 c23 XvX
I can't help but think of makai kishi ingrid when you had sakura delt with difference being unlike the dog in that zato got to fuck some human pussy, when you get your new computer a hope you make a one shot of zato and sakura's little playdate (finger quote) i wonder what punishment sakura is getting in hell? cos i could see her suffering bestiality in the afterlife in a Theseus and the Minotaur way like She's trapped in a labyrinth and if she can escape she'll get to be reincarnated but she's being pursued by a different creature each time like one time zato the next time a clone of the kyuubi and another time a Cerberus ect and when they catch her they painfully rape her till she black's out and when she awaken's she's at the centre of the labyrinth she has to try and find the way out again and each time the labyrinth changes so that nothing is familiar.
8/21/2017 c24 Guest
I usually wouldn't just bash a story, but this was only a terrible experience for me to read. The writing was good, and I liked that it got better as the story when along but, it was the story itself that was bad. You threw in all these depressing bits and just labeled them as twists or something you like to see in writing. I'm just giving my opinion I didn't like the story at all but I felt the need to finish it off because I started it. I'm not saying give up writing or anthing, I'm just giving my opinion, if you don't like it you can delete it, but I do think you are a good writer you just don't have enough plot writing experience. Great on you for actually finishing a story though, not many do, good on you.
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